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_Devaki_

@_Devaki_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

The feeling of meeting your beloved after a separation!..
The feel of them wrapped in your...and yourself wrapped in their protective embrace..
The feeling of hearing your beloved's voice after a long time...
Of feeling their heart beat against yours...
Everything was beautifully described in the chapter...
As they say "It is not the goodbyes that hurt but the flashbacks that follow"..Him thinking what would have been if they were together all these while...
Arnav will be surprised to see the mature as well as shy Khushi..
And they made love...Consummating their marriage...
Now what will happen next?
Will Arnav leave?..Will he take Khushi also with him?..
Waiting for next part😃

Edited by _Devaki_ - 11 years ago

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

wonderful update

thanks for the pm

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Jenny this was just perfect...

So romantic

so subtle.

So calm

and really not over the board..

Loved it..

and i am sad this story will end soon...

Please update next part soon :)))

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

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Posted: 11 years ago

#354

Finally...!

My 1st comment on your Ongoing story.. 😊

Read all the 10 chapters and it seems quite challenging to express what I am going through. But here, I'll give a try. 😆

Starting right from Chapter 1..

The background of the story is unique and appeals at once.

I was quite surprised reading Khushi as 12 years old and already married to Arnav.

But as I read further chapters, once again I can't help but admire your innate writing skills.

And then that Pranab guy.. He's really scared me. I thought he might try to...you must have got the line... 😉

but since he didn't do anything yet, I guess he is a nice person.

Scrolling down to Arnav (Arnab I mean) and Khushi, just loved their heart-appealing chemistry.

And the latest chapter just outstanding. Finally the two souls found their union. Really happy for them. ⭐️

Looking forward to read the coming chapter.

Update soon 😊

P.S. One more stalker added to your list 😉

Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

jenny u made my day..
finally khushi's wait was over nd arshi consummate der marriage..lovely..so romantic,sensual nd passionate..(its reminds me of hut scene of ipk)beautifully potrayed..
bt sad dat dis story gonna b end:(
luking forward for nxt..
continue soon:)

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twinki

@twinki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

Ah such a beautiful update
Loved it

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shona-li

@shona-li

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

Second last chapter already? Woah how fast has this story flown by? Does that mean Arnab and Khushu will be together? Is it bad that the first thought that sprung to my mind was how is Khushi going to justify her pregnancy? Lol, lovely chapter though. That's Arnav and YEARS of sexual frustration unleashed in one update. The guy is a champ. Now that she's legal-schmeagle, it's his time! Bahahaha!

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GodhuliLogon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

oh jenny thanks a lot for a full chapter .. but I want a full SS only on this 😉

atleast two more chaps on their SRs .. 😆

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sruthick

@sruthick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Awesome update...
Beautifully writtn...
Finally they became one...:)
Eagr 2 kno..ow did he gt involvd in that murdr case...
Nd wer s Pranab..??
Waitng 4 d nxt part..
Cntinue soon

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akankha

@akankha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

wonderful part...i loved it.
bt it's going to end! nooo!
im already missing it! #sigh
and the part,what to say...Jenny u r awsm! i read several times ur every update,and dnt how many times i have read ur old ss,ff's...