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@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: LilApple
hihiii
sorry I kind of disappearedyes me too wondering where r u ?😆
loved d part
bechari kripa
I m sad for her
but I think raj is d one who listening
he will do something

thanks

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: angelsabreenxz
hey ria..hiii
.yeah after a long tym to c u back sweety..thanks dear

.😳 well an amazing welcome back wid an awesome update 👏 felt bad about kripa😕😕😕awww

do continue soon dear love u keep writing

thanks

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#903

I'm gonna have to read the story once I'm home
and I'll comment too

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@passiflora4eva

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#904

Hey Ria😊

Finally commenting! I was so busy reading your ff that comment karna hi bhool gayi...😉

So here I go:

Thread One Intro, Parts 1 and 2:

So When I read the intro the first thought that came to my head was that So... Raj is going to be the guy who does't believe in love, is unromantic and has attitude problems...' its different from the Original character... So I was curious to see how you were going to present him. For which I had to wait till part 3!!!...( not fair to keep raj away from his fans for so long😉)

Your story had nothing to do with KMA or the Army. So I was wondering about it, as I'm very fond of the original background story. But I decided to give it a try anyways since I'm a sucker for romance!😆

Not to mention Rajveer -Naina...😆 So I just had to read it! and i'm happy I did.

You presented a nice picture of Naina's family in these parts... a happy family, but with a secret.

The Vaishali-secret!😃

Your portrayed them well, you were very descriptive about it. All the characters were shown well. The narration was nice. Good Job!👍🏼

Only thing, while writing you should have separated the dialouges. I mean language baraber hai, what you have written is proper but everything seems cramed in one para. Should have written it a bit more clearly. Actually in Part 2 I think you did separate things towards the end. Which made it so much better!😃

One thing I have to say is that this thing you are doing with images is so awesome! You have have tried to show their expressions for the scenes...

Amazing!😊 Its a tough and time consuming job! And you still did it! 👏 GREAT!!!! I applaud you!👏

If you every start a FF on RN again Please do let me know!😃

Nice FF! Still reading it and hooked on!👍🏼

Will comment on the other parts soon!

Cheers

Edited by passiflora4eva - 10 years ago

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SANJH

@Snowy_Secret

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#905

Congo for ur fifth thread ria.lovely story.waiting for ur next update to read

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@passiflora4eva

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#906

Hi Ria,

Sorry about the delay.😊

Chapter 3, 4, 5 and 6

😃Finally Raj enters...

Arrogant Raj. Hmm...😔

And who is this Vaishali? Whats her story?

This Raj is harsh yaar. He is looking more like a villain than a hero...😲

Things are not always as they seem... maybe there is a reason?

Chapters 3 and 4 were serious...

Chapter 5 and 6 were intense. He is not a good person. 🤔 I don't like him.

However, I like Naina's fighting spirit. I not a fan of violence but that slap was very well deserved.

You have maintained part of Cadet Naina's spirit here.

Had it been our Cadet Naina Singh, She would have beaten the hell out of the one behaving like that!😉

I hope he learns his lesson soon.

Woah.. serious updates... angsty updates.👏

Lets see what other types you have written... moving onto the next chapters.😃

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@passiflora4eva

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#907

Hi Ria,

Sorry about the delay.😊

Chapter 3, 4, 5 and 6

😃Finally Raj enters...

Arrogant Raj. Hmm...😔

And who is this Vaishali? Whats her story?

This Raj is harsh yaar. He is looking more like a villain than a hero...😲

Things are not always as they seem... maybe there is a reason?

Chapters 3 and 4 were serious...

Chapter 5 and 6 were intense. He is not a good person. 🤔 I don't like him.

However, I like Naina's fighting spirit. I not a fan of violence but that slap was very well deserved.

You have maintained part of Cadet Naina's spirit here.

Had it been our Cadet Naina Singh, She would have beaten the hell out of the one behaving like that!😉

I hope he learns his lesson soon.

Woah.. serious updates... angsty updates.👏

Lets see what other types you have written... moving onto the next chapters.😃

Cheers

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#908

Pehle toh a big congratulations to u on this 5th thread
i M sooo happy for u girl
N then a big wala sorry to be late in reading ur updts
ab kya karu yaar offc walo ne jaan le rakhi hai
n ya now coming to the updt
as always u wer amazing
kripa n angad ki love story n show ki bhi yaad dila di tune
the updt was inte se n amazing
totally loved it
keep writing more sweetie