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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Oh yes you did!

Patting my own back!😆

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

I'm so thankful to you for posting part two!

Else I would have kept wondering what happened next.

Love the way you wrote this part both from PayalS and Arnav's point of view.

Payal always saw them passing their lives together.

She saw the love and tenderness thy both had in thir hearts for each other.

Will they get together this time?

Only time will tell!

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: -Delilah-

Patting my own back!😆

:) don't worry I won't say the two words!!! Xoxo

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Delilah-
Reserved :)

I found a gem in the ocean, didn't I?

Indeed you did ... 😆 and thank you for introducing us ...

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nnhk

@nnhk

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

I am so happy you introduced us to this gem. Looking forward yo reading more from you M.

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

omg
u should tell who u r..ur scrap i received n m like..i dont know who is she..still i searched d forum if i had read something from u..lol..then i found d link attached..wen its nt blue its nt used..bt den i copy pasted d link... n m glad i too soo much pain lol to find who u r...n god m thankfull i did...

such a beautifull n heart touching piece written..fantastic ...i want a happy ending..yes u make a very good writter..pat on delilah back...a brilliankt writter can only recognise a true gem

Edited by massu91 - 12 years ago

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Throne

@Throne

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

There's more than 10 likes!

You have to continue now...please do!

I would really like to read more.

😊

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Some time love hitting you on your face you won't recognize it...and as for Payal' view that khushi loved her husband...how will she know the difference until she is loved by Arnav...some time we women fell in love with the lamp in disguise of a moon...

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Enjoyed reading it. It was a well written piece that encompassed the description of nature, surroundings, Arnav & Khushi - their past, present and a future that awaits them.

It felt like the beginning of better things to come as they have just found each other and the million other questions the first two of which were "Didn't they know they loved each other?" or "Didn't they want to risk their friendship?"

Great potential to take it forward from an OS into a story 😊

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago