ArHi Collab FF: Cracks *Chapter 2 PG-16*(21/1)

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daisydee425

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

mind blowing
perfectly written
eagerly waiting for next update

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Nandz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Okay now!!

First of all its a mind blowing concept! Congrats to hina and avi for coming up this concept!!

We wont be able to predict anything , every time we will prepare ourselves for some twist or the other! Now can anything be better and more exciting than that!

Now coming to the update! It was amazing! You have got us hooked with the very first chapter hina!

My god so much information! ASR's life is in a miss or if i may say its a b***h ! Mother refused to look at him even after 15 yrs! His wife is going out with somebody! I mean what exactly has this pure guy done! Right now m feeling bad for him but m sure my feelings are gonna change once her deeds are revealed!

A very well written chapter! The element of suspense was very well maintained!

Now Avi m dying to see what twist you give up!!

Loved the beginning!! Bang on!!

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Hina malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: divya1122
@awesome_avi
I knoe kahaani aaj hi shuru huyi hai...but can u plzzz update ASAP...pretty plzzz
I love this FF...nd ur witing the next chappy..all the best :D

Mairi taraf say bhi All the best avi 😉 😈

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shreya2748

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: divya1122
ress for me 😲
unress👏👏👏
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hawww Di...aapne mujhe bataya bhi nahi that ur starting collab so soon😭
but subhe-subheSUPRISE bohotbohothbohoth accha hai
CRACKS⭐️⭐️⭐️
THE CRACK IS ASR 'S life
SUNFLOWER IS KHUSHI NA!
seee..mujhe sab samajh mein aathi hai😉😛🤣


It is possible to cross a river without wetting your legs,
BUT its impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes.."
its sooo goood..simply AWESOMEEE👏
kaha se liya aapne ye quote..these 2 lines are the storie's Base na😳😳😳
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ASR bohoth cruel hai..par i dont understand ki usne aisa kya kardiya ki Khushi aise behave kar rahi hai😭
gosh...he left his family 14years back...ab ye kaunsa nayi mystery hai boss?😕

wow...arnie thinks he can be arnav..HIMSELF ONLY IN FRONT OF KHUSHI😳
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hai re nandkishore..yaha par bhi Contract marriage😭
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jab i read khushi is from new work..tabhi i thought somewhere its gonna be connected to Qubool Hai..nd there comes Mr.Asad...instead of ahmed khan its Singh😛
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HAI DM..Ye kya ho raha hai??
engaged to asad...uff..nd DATE...HELL NO WAY...!!


aww...it was so cutee of arnav to hug khushi nd tell her to stay by his side..nd woh...she's busy smirking😡..i knoee ki arnie ki hi galthi hogii...OBVIOUSLY...but Di atleast khushi should have somewhere cried seeing him in that state😭😭😭
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Asad loves khushi as much as he himself do!
i dont think so.😡.anyway...it doesnt matter whether asad loves khush...it matters who khushi loves😳
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But jealousy..that was another matter altogether.
the perfect way to end chap 1..nd the 1st 2 lines were the perfect way to start the collab👏
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OKIEEE...bak-bak khatam😛
love u Hina Di <img src="http://www.laymarks.com/l/rev/15.gif" alt="" />

Cute comment dear,from every angle 😊
Rare profile pic 😳
Sorry
I actually don't have right to reply to ur comment but I couldn't stop myself from replying :D

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awsome_avi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Hina69
Mairi taraf say bhi All the best avi 😉 😈

Haan haan!!!
Thank you thank you!
Aisa fasaya hai mujhe hina!!! 😡

Dar lag raha hai next chp likene mein!

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shreya2748

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: awsome_avi
My point of view!



"It is possible to cross a river without wetting your legs,


BUT its impossible to cross life without wetting your eyes.."




Arnav Singh Raizada..the name itself held power.If we say that power and ASR are synonyms than it wont be wrong..no..not at all because his every feature,demeanor screams authority and perfection.

Arnav singh Raizada: A dark Man...with a light heart.
A man who seems perfect, but is the most imperfect human being. Every body wants to live his life, but is this a life?



But this person..ASR..was enigma,a puzzle which no one could solve till now.

Puzzle... yeah that is wat it is, his life and his family.
He has a mother whom he has not seen since 14 years, he has a wife... sorry contracted wife... who in herself is a great mystery.

He never accepted or denied any of the news related to his indoor life which were usually printed in certain magazines and page 3 news.Why he never said anything about them? Well another question which only he could answer!




|But did he had the answers?
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Payal Singhania,owner of Singhania hotels stared at his back with her hatred filled eyes as some memories flashed in her eyes.Her eyes got moist.

Singhania... payal singhania, another mystery to be solved, another name in the dark night.
The main mystery about her is her relation with Ratna singh raizada. What is her relation? Is she any ways related with khushi?
And what connection of hate does she have with Arnav singh Raizada?

"I wish you rot in hell Raizada!" she said with contempt
Her last words...another mystery.

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"Mrs.Raizada.." he called.


What? Mrs Raizada? does anyone calls his mother like this? But yes...if a child meets his mother after 14 years and then too not sure about the love bond between them, this is the only procedure...but...but only for A.S.R.




"Kya main dekh sakta hoon?(Can I see?)" he pleaded hoping she would turn.

"Apka chehra.." he chocked "I was talking about your face.Kya mai de.kh sakta hoon?" he urged.




He swallowed a lump.His tears on the verge of falling.


"Maa.." he rasped "Please.."






"When can I meet you?" his voice held that emotion of a child who was desperate to catch a glimpse of his mother for which he was waiting for years..

Another mystery for that arrogant raizada... it proves he has a heart.

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"We never got to know how to contact you when we needed to! but you can contact us by calling on hotel reception phone" she said with authority indicating the end of discussion.If anyone meet Mrs.Ratna Singh Raizada than they would defiantly know from where ASR got his attitude,stubborness as well as arrogance.




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Only one person could comfort him.






His khushi... his wife...his..his..his love.
But would she?
Could she?
Should she?




Khushi singh raizada!
What is she? no one knows! A simple girl? an arogant girl or...just khushi.






"I am YOUR husband! I have all the authority to stop you or question you" he said breathing on her face.

Husband? huh! a contracted husband...who knows that his wife is engaged to asad singh! Like really?
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So here starts the story of mystery... which has to be solved...unfolded... in different ways!

Hats of hina! you did a great job!👏
Now it's my turn!
I hope I will do it justice!😳

Acha to payal is not akash's wife,maine singhaniya padha hi nai
I was so excited ki arnav kisse milne jaa raha hai,aur mene wo jaldi me padha isliye
Waiting for ur part

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awsome_avi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: divya1122
@awesome_avi
I knoe kahaani aaj hi shuru huyi hai...but can u plzzz update ASAP...pretty plzzz
I love this FF...nd ur witing the next chappy..all the best :D

I too want to update fast dear!
But as you know I also got to read the story yesterday...so it will take somtime...to swallow what hina has places infront of me!😳

So I guess there you have to wait!!😳