ARSHI TS- With You By My Side,Ill Always Be Allright COMPLETED - Page 24

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update and ending loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
its beautiful Anku...everything of it...from the first to last word...loved it so much...
u know how pressed of time I'm now,iss liye itna phika aur lame comment...chorry...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it
Amazing update
Awesome story
Thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was amazing
Perfect end ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story Ankita and you did full justice to showing the depth of their love, their bond, care and protectectiveness for each other...
The ending was apt him whisking her away to unknown destination...
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Posted: 11 years ago
So khushi is new chairman of AR...it is big slap for ''miss amritha''
awesome up date
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! It was just perfect ! Loved the dialogues <3😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
really loved the way he handled the whole thing...
the judge s words were over whelming...
arnav just knows how to do things and khushi to understand his actions without voicing it out...
i just love to see them together like this,..forever...
chairperson as khushi for ar corp was surely a huge surprise...
superb update 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏
u surprise me the way he handled it..hats off to you dear for writing it that way..🤗👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
super awesome update chi
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 1

This story portraying Arshi being bound by their undying love for each other & their pacts promising each other health & happiness is a lovely start 😊


Khushi waking up late after learning that he hated it when she woke up before him leaving his side & Arnav relishing the scene of his angel sleeping peacefully every morning & he caressing her cheeks reflected on the warmth of their love


So true the Mrs.India scene always reminds of IPKKND's end ... but the way you narrated this story holding on to the suspense of what augmented tension & anger in Arnav that he wanted to keep out of Khushi's reach & especially the last scene where he barges into the house with rage speaking for him has created curiosity in me ... love the way you thought of looking beyond the competition


Khushi sensing that something was worrying her hubby & anxiety eating her up all day & above all he having missed his breakfast & most importantly his medication troubling her, her urge to go to him & make sure that everything was all right by supporting him in times of need was well written

Thanks for the PM 😊


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