#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed*

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Waqt Zaya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#781

i am left heartbroken. . . .

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Mehvish Fatima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#782

omg khatam?

suprb sweety👏

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starsinmyeyes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#783

Loved this story...amazing work Raz...here's to many more from u👏

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Aashka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#784

aawwnnn... this chapter was so emotional...!! U made me cry...!! bt u shud hv continued it...!! it was going fantastically fab...! plz do post ur neww ff soon...!! m sooo happy they re-conciled...! probably y dont u make a sequel to this...?!! i really loved dis story...!

update soon and pm me...!

aashka

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-Candz-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#785

I love how he calls her jaan

A wonderful chapter and a great ending to a wonderful FF...looking forward to reading your other stories as they come 😉

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Divi.C

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Posted: 11 years ago

#786

just one word...FEBULAS...

N specially last 2 pera was out standing...

what A End...

love u n will look forward for ur writing...

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#787

Hey Raz,

Firstly I'm really sorry for being this late in posting a reply, actually things were complicated on my side so just got caught up with them.

Now coming to the chapter. Okay listen what happened with me when I read the chapter. I read it, enjoyed it & scrolled down to read your note. I went up again, re-read the whole thing then came down & my eyes went wide because then I got what "the end" meant. warna I was thinking that it's just the chapters end. Well then what could happen other than me twisting my nose & making faces though I do understand your point & agree with it that good things do come to an end but still...

Okay now seriously coming to the part. it was FABULOUS.👏 The way you unveiled Tanveer's evil face, got her punished & showed the two lovers making their way back to each other was SUPERB 👍🏼. I really really mean it.

Starting with the small but important part to me was the way Ayaan left from Khan Mansion. It was a beginning of a new relation. It was really nice.

Now the main thing. at first I had thought Zoe's tears to be of hurt but then realized how wrong I was. they indeed were tears of joy. the joy of being able to prove her innocence to one man who meant more than her life itself to her. tears of finally being able to save Him from his so-called bf's plans & of finally being able to return to him. She was right, whatever he did or said had hurt her beyond measures but nothing could ever suppress her feelings for him. they just needed time, love & support from each other to heal.

Asad falling on his kness & wrapping his arms around her.. it had me in tears 😭.. it's painful always to see him cry. He really was ashamed & guilty of misjudging her, not trusting her & hurling accusations on her. I really disapprove the way he always uses to punish himself. it looks more of a torture on me than on him. The way he asked her does she not know what happens when a man is ripped away from his life.. my heart went out to him.. despite being emotionally challenged, the things he says.. just take my heart away.

The way Zoe made him see things & forgave him was so so good. I am glad Zoe made him swear to not hurt himself again & once again his answer had left me awing at him.. Meri Jaan..

Okay so this is it, I guess for this ff. hopefully I get to see more of you soon. please do write soon.

It's been a beautiful journey with you from the start to the end of this final chapter of this spectacular plot.

Love..

Edited by Rarepearl - 11 years ago