#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed*

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sweetnandu

@sweetnandu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#801

awesome story..
beautifully portrayed ..
pls do pm me if u write more

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#802

Well, I'm sad that this FF ended as it was one of my personal favs but I'm happy with the way you ended it. Loved how Asad promised never to hurt Zoya when she asked him to promise never to hurt himself as she is his jaan. Beautiful ending to a beautiful story !! Very well done !!

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943154

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Posted: 11 years ago

#803

😭THE END????😲😭
but itt ws sooo good do pm me whenever u write anodr story😳😊👏

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#804

Ohh so sad it's ended but happy that they're finally together. Omg i love Easy A ;)

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rads73937

@rads73937

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Posted: 11 years ago

#805

Khatam bhi ho gaya???

Yeh kya baat hui yaar.

Anyway it was fabulous part.

Do come soon with something unique.

Thanx for the pm. take care.

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

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Posted: 11 years ago

#806

Why did you end this story?????😡😡😡 I was so in love with it. It always seemed to be real n not fictional at all.

I loved the way it ended n am happy that Asad n Zoya were finally together. Perfect ending for a perfect story. 👏👏👏👏

Please pm me for all your works in future.😃

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#807

i cant believe that his FF has ended!!..it was one of my fav!

but truly an amazing way to end it...i loved every single bit of it!!!..looking forward to ur upcoming works!👍🏼

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#808

awesome update...i guess every good thing has to end someday...but the way u ended it was brilliant...
thank god...tanveer was busted ...good riddence ...
asad n zoya finally reunited ...their convo was heartwarming...i love whenever asad called her jaan ...
now bye bye to this beautiful story...come soon with a new one!!!
waiting...
ur sincere reader!!!

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webuser7

@webuser7

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#809

Beautiful ending. Thank you for taking us through this story filled with a roller coaster of emotions!

👏 👏

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#810

Hey Raz i kind of guessed that this story must be ending pretty soon but i didn't know that pretty soon will be this soon😭😭

Yes well i am sad that this FF has ended but I am happy too coz this was one amazing journey which began on March 28th and ended today on such a beautiful note😳😳

I have enjoyed this story very very much and well i do read your other FF and i look forward to your other works too.You are an amazing writer Raz 😳😳.

Now coming to the last update.It was perfect very very beautiful😃

Loved the way asad nd zoya promised themselves never to let anybody come between them😳😳

I loved the asya convo in the end😃very mature,heart felt and beautiful😳😳

Loved the way asad realized his mistakes and the way zoya made assured him of her love for him.

the way asad broke and hugged zoya's waist was just brilliant👏👏

And the kiss was epic😳😳😳I love how he called her his jaan😳😳

His pain was her pain. His tears were her tears. His heartbeats were hers. His heart was hers. They were bound by the fates and no matter how much they tried, they wouldn't, couldn't, stay away from each other.

Beautiful lines😳😳

The last two paras were just so beautiful😳😳

It was a perfect ending to a perfect story.

thanku so much for this beautiful journey and i look forward to seeing you back with more of your works😃😃