#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed*

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

Haha. You sounded like one. Doesnt mean you are one! It was adorable though 😆
Haha. Dont be nervous. Just be yourself. Free ka advice! 😆

Agar update nahi hua na, toh saara gussa phir "Aapke Asad" pe hi niklega! 😡

Any caring girlfriend ends up sounding like a wifey now and again 😆 Hota hai 😉

Lekin haan, update nahin hua, to AAPKE ASAD ki baand bajegi 😡🤣

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@-Bleeeh-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

I'll let my might be future Asad take me away for a while. Lol 😆

I really hope Raz updates. Please scold your Asad from our side too :P

Haha, kidding. Take care! :D

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asulpyaar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

amaaazing updates !! thaaank you ,, loved them both
cant wait for the next !!!

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Originally posted by: -ARLover-
I'll let my might be future Asad take me away for a while. Lol 😆
I really hope Raz updates. Please scold your Asad from our side too :P

Haha, kidding. Take care! :D

😲 You have a "might be future Asad"!?!

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@-Bleeeh-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: mochhug

😲 You have a "might be future Asad"!?!

Haha. Lol. Yeah! 😆

I know. Stupid name. But you get the point, right? 😃

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: -ARLover-

Haha. Lol. Yeah! 😆
I know. Stupid name. But you get the point, right? 😃

Not stupid at all man! I'm so happy for you 😃

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Sorry Raz i know i have't commented in longI have been very busy so i will a consolidated comment for the chapters i missed😃

Chapter 25

First of all let me say i wasn't disappointed at all😳The chapter was short but amazing.I loved how asad was pissed by tanveer's mere presence😆😆

The hug😡and poor zoya had to witness it

So finally Tanveer got a taste of her own medicine😆😆

"Please, Tanveer. I don't want to hear anything. The fact that whenever anything bad happens, you're always there as the sole witness is even more suspicious," Asad observed.

Oh i love your Asad.He has a brain😆😆

Lovely asya scene...loved their banter😆😆

what happened to zoya😕

Chapter 26

Wow a chapter for raz'a diary is back..loved it...Unicorn was so cute and asad singing the poem🤣

OMG all of this was zoya's plan to get asad to eat😆😆Only our zoya can make plans like this lol

Zoya can definitely work in a soap man...i was so confused when she was throwing her arms about whether she was faling it or not😆😆

hayee zoya meri jaan was so sexy😳😳

Loved their feeding each other session😳😳😳and burn tanveer burn😡😡

Dilshad nd Najma planned to trap tanveer😲😲weren't they worried about Asad?😕

Mixing business with pleasue are we Ayaan😉

So Ayaan nd Humeira did find something😳wow so excited for next update😃

Chapter 27

First of all let me say i am so happy that you and asad are doing fine...I wish you best for future😃

"Will never be mine. Yaada yaada, please Tanveer. You seriously need some new dialogues," Zoya said.

🤣🤣Omg chalo finally someone said what we have been thinking for so long😆😆

Wow good presence of mind zoya..kya maat di tanveer ko..i can't tell you how satisfying it is to see asad yelling at tanveer😆😆

So finally zoya will be proved innocent...Good work ayra

Ohk so to answer your question...yes please create you index...i love your works...you are an amazing writer...

Don't worry about the updates your Asad is more important😉

Chapter 28

Aww my heart wnetout for zoya when she hoped that ayaan's proof was solid

Loved the way that Humeira shut tanveer up😳nd she shuts her up again😆😆

Wow the beige nd white...Thanku so much color😳😳

Oh tanveer how could you make the mistake of wearing salwar suit when you wanted to blame it on zoya😆😆

Loved the way zoya said she didn't want to dress up😆😆

Rhinestones😳😳Eureka...i am so happy about how the things are going

Finally yes finally tanveer is exposed😃😃

humezie love you baby😳

Chapter 29

Wow Tanveer finally gets exposed😃😃

I am so happy that finally asad knows the truth but I feel sorry for him too for having been betrayed like this by his best friend

"I warned you not to work out so much, see what type of people you attract,"

Omg this cracked me up😆

Wow zoya slapped tanveer twice in the same day👏👏Nothing can make me happier😳😳No wait something did asad slapping her😆😆

Apne to mere dil ki tamanna puri kar di...i loved tanveer's slap session i hope there are more to come 😆😆😆

OMG tanveer held a knof to zoya's throatThat woman😡😡

I loved zoya's confidence in asad but even now all she can think about is ahem ahem😆😆

Did tanveer hurt zoya?I hope she will be fine...

waiting for the next update eagerly😃😃

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Linsie

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

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MayaB5

@MayaB5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#780

😊Omg!!!, I'm the first reply on the last post...

You can see what I stalker I have been for your story. I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish.

So sad to see the story end but I'm glad Asad and Zoya finally got their happy ending.

I look forward to reading more of your work😉

All the best,

Maya😊

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