#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed* - Page 38

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

Finally!! Asad uses his brain!! He is thinking straight!! N blasted that Tanveer!! How good do I feel reading about that!! Even I wanted to ask Tanveer that whether Asad is a toddler to be attended to 247???!! Thank God! He told her off!!
Dilshad n Najma are doing great by keeping that Tanveer away! Half the job is done that way!!
Asad kissed Zoya!! But he feels guilty or what? But I loved his tension n fear on not seeing Zoya! That was just amazing!!
The gazebo scene was well written!! I could so vividly imagine the intensity n emotions... :)
Zoya was going to say what when she said, I don't need you here and neither do...?? What was she going to say there?
I hope the last sentence is not literal n just metaphorical!! I so wish to see that Tanveer being thrown out of the house!!
Update soon n pm me!! :) n thanks for the pm!!


He is, isn't he? I had to make up for the common sense lost in the previous updates. He had to tell her off at some point, there is only so much pampering someone like Asad can handle.

The gazebo scene is also my favourite, I loved writing it. It was high time that Zoya gave it back to him. She had to hurt him somehow.

As for the unfinished sentences, it's her trying to control her anger.

The last sentence...I won't say much on it.

I will update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--


this update was amazing

finally they both gave in to their desires

can't wait for the truth to be out

you had written the chapter flawlessly

kuddos to you

awesome work yaar


luv

Mahi


Love you too, Mahi!

They had to give in at some point but every action taken out of lust or desire has some consequences.

Truth should be out whenever the muse is ready so let's see.

Thank you!

Muah!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.

Will be bk later
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Fab update. Asad is growing some brains here. Is this a hint that Tanveer's time has come.
How can he kiss her like that after distrusting her? So he is going to find the truth. Dilshad and Najma are so adorable.


Thank you! He is growing some brains because...well because the muse thinks it's time he grows them.

It's desire. He needs her and she needs him, see what happens if you keep these two away for a few updates. Uff, no control.

Thank you once again!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiAsya

Awesome update dear!! Finally they r 2gether nw!! I luvd it!! Nd thnx 4 d PM!! 😊


Originally posted by: cool_sri

loved it...

asad blasted tanveer..superbb..
dishaad & najma are the sweetest..
hope now asad trusts zoya & they get back together & find the real culript...


Originally posted by: Enchantress

Love it.. Atleast, they are talking their heart out. Continue soon.


- Thank you! Hopefully they are, let's see what happens next.

- Thank you! He did indeed blast Tanveer. We'll see what happens next.

- Thanks Dee. Will definitely continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rads73937

IT WAS AMAZING.

NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE.
BEAUTIFUL.
LOVED IT.
THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.


Wahwahwah! All caps?? Lol.

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

Lovely Update..

Tanveer's plan flopped...
AsYa KISS was AMAZING...
U've written this update very beautifully..
Waitingfor next update..Continue soon..
Thnx for PM...
-Mariam-


Thanks Mariam!

Your comment means a lot. I will update soon and will let you know!

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Wow wow wow you are finally back😃I have been waiting for this update for so long😃

Finally our lion is back...so cat got cat's tongue this time😆it was so satisfying to see tanveer falter like that...well tanbitch your lies catch up with you soem day or the other😆
Finally asad using hid rusted brain yaaayyy😃My god my lion's ENOUGH was amazing😳
Can i say i just loved dilshad momma here😃Hayee so smart le ja billi ko-the kabab me haddi😆
"Tanu, I'm not a baby who has to be attended to twenty-four hours a day,"
Finally Mr.Khan aaoko ye ehsaas ho gaya that you don't need tanveer at your side 24*7..i can't stop laughing imagining tanveer's face😆
I loved asya kiss and you described it and the emotions and asya's feeling so so beautifully,it was like i was inside their minds when they kissed😳
For how long the two lovers stared into each other's eyes they didn't know, for time had lost meaning when they were together. All that mattered to both of them was the presence of each other and the feelings that consumed them.
Beautiful lines👏i can't say anything else because honestly anything i say won't be able to do justice to the brilliance of this line
I am glad zoya realized that she couldn't let her emotions get better of her everytime asad was near her...
I loved how you brought the little flashback scene for asad to realize where zoya would be😳
I loved asya convo in the gazebo.It was beautiful,striaghtforward and very touching.I loved how zoya told him that he had lost all rights over her when he chose tanveer over her but what i loved the most was asad's reply👏it was beautiful how you showed that his childhood insecurities was making it hard for him to believe her and the best part was when zoya understood him and kissed him😳I loved this kiss so much coz for me this was a next step in tehir relationship one of trust and understanding despite all their difference😳
her anger and frustration all forgotten and blatantly unaware of the danger that still loomed over her and her lover's head.
Don't tell me billi will try another of her dirty tricks😡but well atleast asya are together or are they?I don't are about billi as long as these two are together😳
They can fight anything😳
Loved the update and eagerly waiting for the next one
P.S.-I just realized how long the comment got so anyways i hope you like it😆


*music plays*
Guess who's back. Back again. Shady's back. Tell a friend.
*music stops*

Sorry, couldn't help myself. 😃

Girl, it was satisfying to write Asad's sudden outburst at Tanveer. After everything that has been happening, had a strong urge to give her the old "one two". 😆

His rusted brain has finally been greased and cleaned so let's see where it takes us.

Dilshad is like a hero or what?? Lol, even I love her. Lmao, "kabab mein haddi". More like kabab mein badi vaali haddi.

Ikr? I was like it took you long enough! I was laughing as I wrote Tanveer's facial expressions because I could totally imagine her gritting her teeth with her eyes wide (without the contact lens) like she often does in the show.

Aww, my dear, that's such a sweet thing to say. But really, you could say anything and it would be good enough for me.

I liked writing the flashback scene, it was a reminder of the good ol' times.

The gazebo scene is also my favourite one. Zoya had to give it back to him some time or another, didn't she?

Their relationship is progressing, hopefully.

Mmm, no contact with the muse so I cannot tell you what billi is planning next.

Will update soon, I promise!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: webuser7

Lovely update!


Highlights for me:
  • Asad snapping at Tanveer. A teeny bit suspicion has crept in his head. Hope he pursues it and gets answers. There's got to be a clue in that incriminating video. Maybe Ayaan will find it.
  • Asad kissing Zoya. True love! Can't suppress it for long!
  • Gazebo scene - wonderful
  • Zoya kissing Asad and urging him to find the truth.
Hope Tanveer is revealed soon and put in jail and not just tossed out of KV.

Please add me to your PM list if possible.


Thank you!

I'm glad you liked it and that you let me know your thoughts on the update.

Tanveer's truth should be out soon, if the muse approves that is.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

JUST LOVED IT WANT TO READ MORE AND MORE😳😳

PLZZZ PM ME I BUDDIED U😉


And another all CAPS!!

I'm glad you liked it. I will PM you if you've buddied me, so no worries.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar_16

awsm...

please continue. Soon...
and can u please give me link of thread 1😉


Thank you! I will continue soon.

Sweetie, link for thread 1 is on the first page of this thread. Right where it says "Previous Thread | Next Chapter" after the ToC.


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