#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed*

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

Yes I am. With some good news and bad news.

My name is Raz.

😆I actually thought your name was elena.😛

b..bad newsss??? 😲

*wondering wat is it?*

elena is a fictional name 😳

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-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#392

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#393

These are the following people who are on my Buddy list and on the PM list. If you do not see your name on this list, then you have not added me to your Buddies or have simply not asked for PMs. Note that if you have added me as a Buddy and still do not show up on this list then it is probably due to the reason that you have not dropped me a note to tell me that you would like PMs.

Please note that Chapter 23 was the last chapter where I sent PMs to non-buddies.

Enchantress
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Aileen134
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Chipmunks.
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If you do not see your name on the list and still want PMs, then buddy me and drop a note in the comments to let me know you want PMs. I have stopped PMing people who are not on my buddy list as only a few of them end up reading it and I have to go through a lot of work to send single PMs to everyone.

Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 12 years ago

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Monica

@mochhug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#394

RES!!!

Okay. First of all. I AM SO SORRY 😔

On to the update then. First of all, Asad. You are an idiot.

Second of all. Zoya, FINALLY!!!! What were you waiting for! I have been waiting for Zoya to get RILED UP AND PISSED OFF AND DETERMINED!!! YAYAYAYAYAYA

I was in dream land with them kissing. Zoya's words, about not caring who he trusted and just revelling in the time she has with him before he hates her again, was just so.. ADJHFKJSDHFK.

I can't even.

And Ayaan and Humeira 🤣. They're so cute. They're like Asya's personal cupids, along with Dilshad. Love that they both have so many people to look out for them. BUT DID THEY HAVE TO INTERRUPT RIGHT THEN!? 😡🤣

But Asad's reaction was expected. He had a moment of weakness, but his resolve was back in motion. Ayaan is still immature. And of course is a man. So he won't understand what is going through Zoya's heart. But I love Humeira here. I wonder if Zoya and Humeira know they're sisters in your FF? Even if they don't, it's a beautiful way for you to show their bonding. How she understood immediately, how Zoya's anger was entirely justified, and known.

I like that they are still on their task to investigate the CAT's trap and help Zoya prove her innocence. It's really frustrating knowing you're innocent and that the one person you trust, and love and NEED to believe you, wants to, but just can't believe you. I know exactly how Zoya feels. Sadly.

And Zoya's promise, made me happy. Even though she was in pain, and so was he, with the "boulders on his shoulders", It was one of the best parts of the update. The determination, the anger, the resolve and the dedication with which she intends to show him the light, is truly inspiring and MUCH awaited.

Lovely update hun. Brilliant writing as always.

*runs to unres next chapter* 😆

Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago

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anushreemishra

@anushreemishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#395

res

unres

Yay you are back with yet another amazing update🥳

Aww asya making out session continues😳oh man their making out session was so hawttt...can i say my computer screen was on fire or it equivalent😆

I don't care. I don't care whom he trusted. Right now, I have him for myself and I will enjoy every minute of it before he reverts to hating me

all zoya cares about right now is her making out session with asad well who wouldn't right?😉Nd so does asad?he cares about nothing else but kissing zoya😳

ayaan nd humeira😡for the first time i was angry at them for disturbing asya nd ruining tehir making out session😡

Bechari zoya she had to see asad going back to his old self again because of taht tanbitch😡

"You'll need more solid proof than your body to persuade me," Asad said, with no trace of emotion on his face, before storming away from them leaving an angered Zoya.

That was below the belt...i didn't like asad for saying this at all...that was mean and wrong on so many levels

I loved how humeira tried to calm zoya down and the way ayaan help onto to humeira protectively after zoya pushed her was beautiful...i love how beautifully you have portrayed ayra relation too...looks like you love ayra too😳

"Zoya, you are his life. You need to prove your innocence so that you can return to him. So that his life can return to him,

This was the best line of the update IMO...very very sweet nd meaningful😃

I loved the way humeira handled zoya nd the hugs were cute...i am so glad zoy has ayaan nd humeira for support😳

Huh i think ayaan figured something out...lets wait to see what exactly?😉

Dishu momma is disappointed seeing zoya nd asad havenot spent time together..i am glad asad realized that he missed giving zoya the medicines but nice of zoya to cover for him😳

So the cat fight begins😆I am excited to see how zoya will beat tannu at her own game

Amazing update😳

P.S.-i love your little anecdotes and your diary excerpts are so cute😳

Edited by anushreemishra - 12 years ago

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#396

So sad i hope that Asad will knew the truth about Tanveer very soon it's so sad to see Zoya like this 😔

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#397

Loved it!!! Specially Ayaan and Humaira.. The way he won't even let Zoya hurt her when he knows she would never do it on purpose.. And Humaira understanding Zoya's conditions was very sweet..

Tanveer hugged Asad.. Huhh.. :/

He saw Zoya's reaction and detached himself.. Me like.. ;)

So Zoya is gonna get back at Tanveer with her 'army of khans'.. I hope she reveals everything soon..

I hated Asad's statement after he realized what he was doing.

"You'll need more solid proof than your body to persuade me"

That was cruel.. I hope Zoya makes him suffer a bit for that..

Also pm me for the next update please..😳

Edited by nityasuresh93 - 12 years ago

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sheilasandhu

@sheilasandhu

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#398

Oops it ended before it started ... Hehe just kidding lovely update

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Waqt Zaya

@WaqtZaya

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#399

🤗

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reminds me i needa spam to make u update again 😆

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#400

Hey nice update...Hope Ayaan n Humeira are able to help our poor Zoe here.
Just cant bear the pain the poor girl is going through. Really want ASYA together asap.
Thanks for the pm n please pm for the next part too.