#2| AsYa FF: A Desire So Strange (Chapters 21-30) *Completed*

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: kals82
wow nice update...tell asad take care of zoya... few more days... before u bring ur danger... we all are thirsty of asya moments...please...

Originally posted by: Missvishtoofani
wow this is prefect

- I'm sure he will at some point.

😆 My danger...I love that.

I know, so am I. That's why I had to add some AsYa love in here.

- Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Hey beautiful chapter. I have been dying to read an update on this one. I just love your writing.
Hope Zoya is able to clear the misunderstanding with the help of Aayan n Humzi.
Please update sooon n pm me for the next part too. Have added u to my buddy list.

Thank you hun!

Yeah, update speed has gone down but I will try and pick up again. Thank you once again.

Hopefully Zoya's innocence will be revealed soon...hopefully.

Will do hun, thank you.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: sweetnandu
beautiful one..
do cont soon

Thank you and I will try to update as soon as possible.

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: rosamale
This is the first thing i read in the morning😃 i cant have a better start than ths😃 wow... i am speechless. So Zoya is going to find out the truth😳 i hope she succeeds real fast😊

Awww, that means a lot for a writer to know that they have such faithful readers. I'm really glad that you liked it. With all your prayers, I'm sure Zoya's innocence will be revealed soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: madhvi4gurti
WOW!!!
a wonderful update!!!👏
i simply loved Asad outburst towards Tanveer!! she deserved it that bloody B****!!!😡
poor asad n zoya...both are suffering but hopefully now asad will TRY n find out the truth instead of simply believing his "best friend"!!👍🏼

Thank you!

Lol, the outburst marks the Lion's return I guess. Let's see what happens next. If it will be Asad that will find out the truth or if it will be Zoya. Let's see.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#366

Originally posted by: elenaa
Hum busy kya hogaye aapne toh update kar diya. ...lekin UPDATE TOH KIYA 🥳 🥳

U know lady voldermorta, I was so engrossed in ur excerpt tat I forgot ki update bhi toh padhna hai 🤣 smack asad upside down from my side as well 😉

First of all YIPEEE THE LION AHMED KHAN IS BACK! I LIKE IT! 😎

tanveerr baby u cant win all the time specially not wen u r competing wid OUR LION 😆

DILSHAAD AND NAJMA do u hav any idea how good you are 👍🏼 just keep tat tannu away as far as possible 😡

Everything was just so awesome about this update... I loved all the asyalicious moments be it in zoya's room or be it the gazebo

AAK realise soon tat only u n ur touch can heal our poor zoe...she needs u very badly...and u too want her 😭

im so gald tat zoya stood up for herself against asad 👏 but she hurt asad...'only people close to me call me zoya' 'u hav lost everything including ur zoya' 😭 😭

'In that moment asad felt guilty...u had to asad someday

'but asad felt it, for she had not touched his cheek but his inner being.' 😭

neither zoya nor asad is to be blamed...its only tanveerrr...arghhh 😡

find out everything soon zoe 😃

⭐️ do u hav any idea how much I love u for giving such a wonderful update ❤️ 🤗

update soon ⭐️

p.s off I go in my imagination...thinking about the magical kiss of asya in ur update DND 🤣

LMAOO, I didn't know you were busy.

Yes, the excerpt tends to do that. That is why I asked whether or not you all want to read the update. Your request has been duly noted. 👍🏼

Yup, my sher is back and hopefully he will show Tanveer exactly who's boss.

Dilshad and Najma are only fulfilling their promise of standing by Zoya's side, and we all know how much Dilshad and Najma love her. 😊😊

Thank you, the gazebo scene was my favourite when writing too.

Asad may want her but he's a bit lost and takes time to realise the truth, which is only when it is standing in his face ready to smack him.

Hey, he hurt her too. She had to give it to him some time or another. He needs to feel the pain that she felt when he openly distrusted her. 😭

Guilty conscience is a horrible thing to live with so let's see what our sher will do. 😊

Tanveer is always the one to be blamed, and rightfully so. She's such a...don't get me started.

Well, I love you too for giving me such awesome feedback! 😳

I will update soon!

And keep your mind focussed, it will be a shame if you get lost in the magical kiss that it becomes difficult for us to find where the hell you went off to. 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: hottytotty
danger ghosh
update soon
loved it

Will update soon. Thank you!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: love.asad.zoya
Aammaazziinngg FF ... 👍🏼 read all the chapters in one go ...I am thinking why I didn't read it before 😭 but love ur story very very much 😳 ..
Mostly people read the story from 1st chapter but start reading it from 21st chapter 😆 then I start reading it from first chapter 😃
Continue soon ...and welcome ur new reader 😃 😉 😆

Thank you and a big welcome to the roller coaster ride, also known as "A Desire So Strange". 😆

Lol, no worries. You might've been a tad bit lost at chapter 21 but it's good that you read it from before just so you know whats happening.

I will continue soon.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#369

Originally posted by: sasir
loved it.plzz update soon

Originally posted by: nnn
I loved it!!!!!! pm me please😊

THANK YOU!!

I will update soon!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: asyafreva
aaawwwnnn...!!! first of all luv u loads fr updatin...!!! it had been killin me as to how tanu wud get out of that...!! so i wud nt throw tomatoes at u bt give u loads nd loads of marshmallows nd ice-creams...~!! the update was FATABULOUS...!!!!!!!!
bt luved dis part :
"Tanu, I'm not a baby who has to be attended to twenty-four hours a day," Asad told her firmly. Dilshad bit her lip from laughing at the expression on Tanveer face and void her face of any expressions when Asad turned to look at her.
"Ammi, Tanveer will go with you," Asad said, in a voice that dared someone to challenge him. Tanveer fumed inwardly but made her way to Dilshad.
on ur face tanu darling..!! bt i dont get it y asad still calls her tanu... it shud change to tanveer..!! nd m proud of zoya... she shud finally expose dat billi wid ayaan...

wen wud u be exposin tanu..?? i really wish fr moburt... to expose that tanu... its high tym...! ;)

nd yes update soon... eagerly w8in..!

Aashka

Thanks sweetie! Love you a bunch too!

I love both marshmallows and ice cream so give it to me with no worries.

I'm glad that you liked it.

There has to be a point where he starts to get frustrated with her overshadowing his every step.

As for when will I be exposing Tanu, the muse has not communicated with me as of yet so I cannot confirm.

I will definitely update soon!