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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Shubh007

update soon...😊😊😊

Thank u so much hun!!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: dh19

suepr awesome start
taani hate rey...
and now they have to spend 7 min. in closet..
interesting
waiting for the next..
pls. try to cont. soon.

Thank u so much hun!!
yeah😉
im glad u liked it n found it intrstng!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: monikasaxena05

Superb concept

Wow...taarey have to spend 7 min together...
Really excited
Update d next part soon

Thank u so much hun!!
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: riya_vaidya

wow...awesome concept...!!

i guess in taani's worst day there would be best 7 minutes loved it alot...update soon😊

Thank u so much hun!!
well yeah!
lol
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Hey guys! Im back aftr my lllooonnnggg holiday! 😉
frst of all, im so sorry dat u guys had to wait for d second shot bt im here to bring d second n last part! i hope u guys will like it! 😃



I enterd d small n dark closet wid annoyance..i mean I ddnt hve to go in bt just to prove a point, I had to do dis n rub it in d jerk's face! He calld me a chicken n my reputation ws on d line here! As he entrd into d closet, Sharon came to lock it n I swear I cud see a huge stupid grin on her face! I felt like smacking her rght den! Idiot 😡


Anywho, nw we were both in d closet n dre ws dis awkward silence between us..i dnt knw wat we r suppose to do in a closet so I just sat dre n ws playing wid my fingers, hoping to pass d time.."im sorry" said rey suddenly.."omg d gr8 reyaansh said sorry? Woah! Well I guess u hve realized dat by gvng me a challenge n cllng me a chicken is nt a good idea! So I forgive u"


"wait wait wait..im nt saying sorry for teasing n mocking u!" "so y r u saying sorry?" he ws fidgeting wen he answerd my question.."well..uumm..im sorry abt..u knw..u n rohan..he dsnt deserve u" I felt as if a stack of books hit me on d face! Hw did he knw abt dis? I guess he read my shocked expression n said " I saw him wid dat junior in d classroom today wen u caught dem..u knw ur so much bttr widout him..ur smart, beautiful n u guys ddnt look good togthr..he is an asshole for doing dat to u! u deserve sum1 bttr"


"uumm..yeah well thnx, bt I dnt need to hear ur annoying fake speech so pls just shut up..i just want dis 7 minutes to get over so dat I cn go home n eat my ben&jerry's double chocolate ice-cream n watch the notebook in my Pjs" n I said all dat in one breath! I expected him to answer me back n we wud hve started our mahabharat war bt to my surprise, he laughed! He ws laughing continuously like a maniac! "W*F? Y r u laughing so much? I ddnt crack a joke u knw" "hahahha..oh god..ur such a kid taani..ben&jerry's in ur Pjs? Who says "Pjs" nwdays..n ur face wid dat stupid pout of urs..hahaha"


"shut up! Im nt a kid n I sleep in my Pjs coz its comfortable so wtvr! Uugghh..i cnt blve ur laughing at me wen im dis deprssd! U dnt knw hw much a heartbreak hurts! U hve nevr loved sum1 so u dnt knw wat dat feels wen ur love betrays u!" shit..nw here comes my waterworks! I ddnt wanna cry bt I ws too drunk to even care..as I ws crying, rey sat next to me n held my hands comforting me..aftr a minute or two, my tears had stopped n we were just sitting dre holding each oder's hands.."u ok? U knw its good to let evrythng out n if u want I cn go n kick his ass to d ground"

"oh pls..he will kick ur ass..hve u seen rohan? He is as big as a gorilla!" "yeah well I cn just pay some people n dey cn beat him up" "hahaha..yeah dat wud b really satisfying n fun to see" n dere ws again dat silence bt it ws nt awkward nw..den I realized dat our hands were intertwined wid each oder n we were sitting very closely wid each oder till our shoulders touchd..bt I ddnt mind n I never wantd to move from dre.."I cnt blve we ddnt argue or fight dat much today! N I hve just realized dat u r a normal human aftr all" I said while giggling


"n ur nt a stupid annoying bimbo aftrall..i dnt even knw y we argue n fight so much!"

"hahaha..yeah..ikr!" n we were caught in an eyelock..i felt as if d world n d time had stopped just for us..i ws pulled into his brown eyes so deep..bt den our eyelock got disturbed n we were pulled bck into d relty by sum1's knock on d closet "only 1 minute guys! Wrap it up!" I heard som1 yelling from outside accompied wid some giggling..we straightened ourself up n waited for d closet door to b opend.." uumm..rey..thnx a lot for evrythng..i mean u knw" "yeah no problem" said rey


"so..uumm..frends?" I said while extending my hands..for d frst few seconds he ddn do anythng n I thought I have just embrssd myself infront of him..bt dn wat came next ws totally unexpected..he griped my hands n pulled me closer dat I crashed onto his hard chest..n as I looked up to c his face n to yell at him, he crashed his lips onto mine..i closed my eyes n responded to d kiss wid equal passion..my world felt complete den n I felt fireworks n butterflies fluttering inside my stomach..i hve never felt dis way be4 n I ddnt want it to end..bt den we stopped aftr few seconds to take a breath


B4 we cud even say anythng or react, d closet door opened n we were usherd out for d next couple to enter.."taani lets go home..dres nthng gr8 in dis party n im bored! U were rght..we shud nvr hve come to dis stupid party" said a very drunk Sharon..i lookd at rey den n said " today ws d best day of my life! n im glad that we cme to d party! U never knw wat might happen in 7 minutes dat cn chnge ur life! "


N rey just smiled n winked at me..idk wat our future has in stored for us n wat my life wud b like nw bt, I do knw dat dis 7 minutes of my life wud b cherished forever


That ws it guys! i hope u liked it! pls dnt frgt to hit d like button n commnt! 😃

Edited by forever18able - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
awesome
ending ws so perfect
i just loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
It was awesome update dear...!!!
I loved those 7 minutes of theirs...!!!
It was sweet...!!
And I loved their kiss too...!!!
Thanx for this TS dear...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
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Happy u come back , enjoyed yr holidays , 😉
Wow , taarey ki fight end ho gaye
N last min me life change with kiss
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Ohh god I m very happy with it
Do write more dearo

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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome update
Their 7 minuted love them
So cute rey was felling sorry for taani nd that part
nd the sudden kiss😳
Keep writing like this

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