~ 7 Minutes in Heaven ~ TaaRey Two-Shot

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey TaaReyans!! So I hve written FFs, SSs, n OSs bt nw im trying sumthng diffrnt n i hve written a TaaRey TS! i really tried hard to make it good n interesting..i hope u guys will like it n appreciate it
Dis TS is from Taani's pov..d main characters r Taani , Rey n Sharon..i hope u guys will like it! here is d frst part..if i get good response den will update d last part soon 😃 enjoy 🤗

Chapter 1

Uugghh! I had d worst day ever! N I knw teenagers usually say dat often , bt I realy had d worst day ! my stupid big brother ditched me today n so I ddnt hve any ride to school..i decided to take d school bus, bt just my luck, I mssd it..so I had to walk, no actlly sprint to school in my new boots dat I bought on sale! My feet hurts so bad dat I felt like chopping dem off! Thnk god my bestfrend, Sharon, brought her extra - just - in - case flip-flops..bt my stupid physics teacher Mr.Avila (we all call him "bobblehead" coz his head is weirdly big!) had to gve me detention just because I was 5 mins late for his stupid class n I ws wearing flip-flops..i knw rght, hw cn u get detention for wearing flip-flops bt dat's bobblehead!


N as my day wsnt bad enough, I had to sit next to Mr.know-it-all a.k.a Reyaansh Singhania in detention..uugghh I just hate dis guy! I wonder wat god was doing wen he created dis egoistic, nincompoop n annoying guy! He has been my neighbor since he moved here three years ago n I hve hated him since den..we hve always just fought wid each oder n he annoys me like hell..i dnt get wat girls see in him dat dey rated him as "d most eligible bachelor in town"..most eligible my ass!


Anyhoo, getting bck to hw my day ws d worst ever..d cherry on d cake of dis day being d worst ws, I caught my boyfriend snogging a junior! I caught dem in d music room as I ws heading out from detention! Well dat relationship is over n nw im in my room wid Sharon, crying my eyes out


"enough taani..pls dnt cry anymore..he is so not worth it!n honestly, ur so much bttr widout him!" said Sharon.."I knw shar..bt it hurts n I feel like an idiot! Uugghh!! Dat asshole!"


"omg u knw wat..screw him..we shud get ur mind off him n I hve a plan..aasha is throwing an awesome party n we shud totally go! Dre will b booze n will hve fun!" said Sharon


"no I dnt knw shar..i think I shud just stay in my room n watch the notebook or sumthng" "shut up..go n change..we r gonna go to dat party, let loose n hve fun!"


So we got dressd n went to aasha's party..wen we got dre, d place ws really crowded..people were dancing, drinking,making-out n chit-chatting..we took few drinks n went to d basement..dre my classmates were playing their favrte game of all, 7 minutes in heaven..i hate dis game n hve nvr found it rational to lock two people in a closet n let dem do watvr dey want for 7 minutes..bt Sharon loves d game n so we just had to play..we were all sitting in a circle n d bottle ws being turned..as d bottle spinnd, I saw a guy sittng infront of me..he looks awfully drunk n I bet he cnt even stand properly let alone b wid me in a closet! I ws relieved coz being lockd in a closet wid a stranger is nt my fairytale dream..as d bottle slowed down, I saw d guy passd out infront of me..n as d bottle stopped n pointed towards me, Rey replaced d passd ou guy n sat infront of me!


Gr8..to my horror, I hve to spend d next 7 minutes in a closet wid d guy I hate d most! So my worst day hsnt been over yet! "wwoohhoo..rey n taani! Its ur turn to go to d closet!" said sum1 from d circle..shit nw im trapped.."no no..im nt going to d closet wid him! Spin d bottle again! I ddnt wanna play dis game in d frst place!" "bt taani.." "shar pls..im nt playing dis stupid game..spin d bottle again!" "its ok Sharon..just spin d bottle..i guess Ms.Taani here is just too chicken to go wid me in d closet" said rey.."hw dare u! im nt scared or anythng..i just rather die den spend 7 minutes of my precious time wid u in a closet!" I sassd back..i cud see his hurt expression bt mayb I ws just imagining it "den proof it dat ur nt scared..play d game n spend 7 minutes wid me" "uugghh..fine! I'll go in d closet if it shuts u up"


N dat was d best decision I made on d worst day of my life


End of chapter 1..hw ws it guys? pls do commnt n hit like if u guys liked it! i need good response to continue dis TS! silent readers dnt frgt to like! n sorry for nt hvng so much taarey in d frst part..bt next part will b full of tr!

p.s: for dose who dnt knw wat "7 minutes in heaven " is..two people of d opposite sex r selected or pickd by d bottle or chits n dey hve to spend 7 minutes wid each oder in a closet or an enclosed dark space..dey cn do wtvr dey want in d closet 😉 lol 😆

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Shanaya_MaNan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by forever18able - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ME first

superb concept
taanis worst day i think its going to be a best day in 7 minutes
taarey in closet
update soon 😊 😊
Edited by taarey_vrimar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow wow wow
pls update soon!
kaha roka yaar?
loved this one!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: taarey_vrimar

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Unres
ME first

superb concept
taanis worst day i think its going to be a best day in 7 minutes
taarey in closet
update soon 😊 😊

wow😲
i just posted it n u allrdy read it n commntd
n liked!
ur like superwoman
lol😆
thnk u so much hun!
im glad u liked d concept 😃
will update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: hima_taarey

wow wow wow

pls update soon!
kaha roka yaar?
loved this one!!!!

aaawww
thnx dear!😃
im glad u liked it!
hahahaha😆
i will update soon if i get good response
dear..bt thnk u so much! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This seems superb!!! Looks like her worst day will turn into her bestest day!!! Ab jaldi update karo!!! Can't wait fr tr to b in a closet fr 7 mins!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow !! This seems really great !!
The start is already amazing !!
I wonder how TaaRey will spend their 7 minutes in heaven
*sniff sniff* I smell some TaaRey romance brewing up !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like the name 7 mins in heaven lol
Aww Taani has a bad day so far but the worst is her so call boyfriend cheating on her...
I never heard of 7 mins in a closet with the opposite sex, it's sound fun and scary too lol
Yahh Taarey together in the closet, I can't wait to read what will happen there
Superb concept and an incredible chapter
I love it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow !!!! Awesome !!
I just wanted to read something like this lately !!!
Thank u so much !!
N pls update soon !!
I wanna read da second part !!!! Asap !
:D

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