ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132) - Page 50

That was a wonderfully funny update. Khushi's monologue in this story is just awesome.
The food poisoining is just great. So she is engaged to Shyam as our own Buaji would have wanted. Funny how she thinks she looks like a "grouchy raccoon" and Shyam being his sweet self that he is compliment her saying she "looks lovely, fresh as spring". Shyam also has the habit of going out due to work, hope nothing fishy (though I would love it to be). Ah Arnav has eyes only on her, her engagement doesn't bother him much? But that applies to her as well, doesn't it? Its funny how Arnav riles her up everytime, like mentioning her normal self to be clumsy. And our poor dear Khushi can't stop thinking of Mr. Sexy, ends up making jalebis. But even here he doesn't leave her alone. *wink*

Whats going to happen now? Waiting for the next part.

Awesome update & hilarious dialogues ... thoroughly enjoyed it 😃 The thoughts running in Kushi's mind were totally enjoyable to read 😳

Khushi's mind swaying on Mr.Sexy's closeness but still trying to hold onto herself, she sarcastically telling him to get her a rock too hinting him that she wanted to strike him with that, were lovely

Was waiting to see Sexy's reactions coz I thought that Khushi would irritate him more by just making up her own story of how she has started to fall in love with Mr.Slimeball 😆 😆 😆... but awesome Sexy pointing out to Sushi that she was single followed by the budding of their friendship

Lovely & cute - eyes like freshly baked chocolate cupcakes 😃 ☺️ 🤢

Phew! For a sec I thought Slime ball had intruded 😲 ... it was his snores

The line where you expressed Khushi's state of how she was troubled by Sexy's presence thinking that either he drank slower than an infant or just irking her with his actions & their little fights mixed with joy in their convo was mind blowing

Arnav asking Khushi to be more s.p.e.c.i.f.i.c about what he threw on her, ☺️ on purpose, making Khushi blush & get tongue-tied was lovely ... liked this part the most

Guess none can match Khushi's imagination ... aliens descending in Laxminagar ... aunties running for cover 😆 😆 😆 ...Maddy Bua bagging the main role

Wow! Khushi wondering if he had more details of her morning appearance only to be shocked with Mr.Sexy's statement which carried her to the peak of bewilderment was amazing

Love to read more ... WAITING

Originally posted by: TINA!

Precap: Part 5: T.R.O.U.B.L.E.

ps. I will update Secret Passion later tonight with DH and FL teasers and Shameless announcement. PMs will be delayed till then.

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Res
WHAT THE DUCK 🤣 🤣 🤣

it was super hilarious update Teen
drinking ur fav n he was drinking milk omg lol... ahemm
yeah right but if the girl is to b married to someone she don't like much n the person who cause her heartbeat so fast happens to b apparently her enemy coz he got hold if her room n unmentionable lol n most importantly the room she is sharing with her bua is under thundering attack of her buaji's snores so the poor girl is awake but wht a goid timing she got to see u shirtless live hai...haha where is the rock n Khushi's answer there is plenty in back yard bring me one too making it clear whom she wanted to hit... oh he was asking abt the ring hmmm... he liked tge fact tht the engagement wasn't official yet... oh ho he yanked her to himself wao thts progress.. whts tusshi ? y she reacted like this... first butterball now butter dripping monster 🤣
I love her retorts really loved them.

Sip..Swallow..Smack..

hai baychari Khushi tut tut tut... I guess to irritate u Khushi he is slow to irritate u... oh so now they have resolved to b civil I agree Khushi was a bit rude with him n coz she was a big human being she forgot all but wht the duck slip of tongue not good Khushi lolz n he is using this opportunity by being innocent 😆. yeh kbhi nai sudhar sakty right? ahem alot more than laughing 😆 he called shyaam a toad good... oh god

"Oh, so you want to insult me some more? Fine,
Raizada, go ahead!"
"Let me finish, Sushi. I was going to say that rather
than a raccoon, you looked like what I imagine
you'd look after a night with me."
My eyes snapped open. "WHAT!"

omg omg omg seriously loved it enjoyed alot!!! Now duck Sushi butter will remind me just this awesome update teen... ghosh made me laugh so much

Awesome update
And after reading the last line of the update, I had khushi's expression of perfect 'o'
And the precap, uska ka tu poocho hi mat :)

Holy cow! Man, you had me rolling on the floor laughing!

Buhahahaha so as per arnav it was like khushi was looking like wat he has imagined her to look aftr a night wit him,oh goshhh Mr.Sexy actually said dis making khushi almost shout at midnight 🤣

oh goshhh these two r way too adorable nd hilarious 🤣

loved it how he made her clear dat she is single,rofl 🤣

was he making himslf believe dat she is single or he was making her undrstnd dis..! 😉

i loved d whole kitchen encounter,khushi was finding it a hell lot of difficulty to breathe properly wit Mr.Sexy around her,hmm nd to make d matter worse he was teasing her nd for d first tym she could feel his body nd his warmth wen he yanked her against him nd khushi knwing its wrng nd she should move away could not help but moved closer to him nd den dat momnt where he was teasing him wit her names nd khushi stopped him by putting her palms on his mouth was beautiful nd as usual they both got all lost in d momnt seeking warmth nd comfort by that simple body connection..!

As we say they r meant to b together nd i loved arnav's reason of calling her single 😉

loved it how she made her way to d sofa nd slept there nd as usual arnav followed her there also nd sat on d arm chair nd they started to throw pillows on each other 😆

nd finally they started a formal nd normal conversation but as usual that did not last long wen khushi started to laugh thnking abt arnav writing a sci-fic on laxminagar..!

But last part was d best,ahhh wat a blatant reaply from him,enough to raise up d heart beats..! 😛

uff i am loving dis besharam arnav who alwaz smirk nd flirt brilliantly wit khushi nd poor khushi could not help but alwaz lost herslf in his handsome features nd his sexiness..! ❤️

lovely update yet again 👏

loved it to bits ❤️

i am loving it how u r showing their blatant attraction towards each other in a humorous way nd making d story line all interesting showing up sweet romance nd yet making it all hilarious in some particular aspects..! ❤️

i am still laughing thinking abt that last part,oh god there she was thinking abt her looking like a raccoon nd there he was thinking abt somethng else,like seriously,oh goddd dat was adorable yet hilorious to see khushi reacting like dat 😆

bang on update didu 👏

i emjoyed evry bits of it all wit zeal nd zest..!

Hey!