ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132)

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#481

Sorry was late with this chapter! Great one though, chemistry to hain between sushi and mr. Attitude! Can't wait to see what happens in their late night escapade!!

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#482

Finally managed to read the update...!

I am torn between feeling bad for Khushi and laughing at her plight...😆 Poor girl first lost her room to Raizada and had to bunk up with Maddy Bua and now she is being forced to play nice...!!! And Arnav is not passing up any opportunity to rile her up further which honestly is pretty entertaining...

As for Shyam Manohar Jha he seems as as boring as the color he suggested for the walls...!!! No wonder Khushi doesnt feel anything for him...!

Looking forward to Arnav and Khushi's midnight conversation

Loved the update😊

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#483

Lovely n hilarious..

Loving this Rom Com tina :-):-)

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#484

An amusing update! Khushis reasons for not marrying Shaym was hilarious!

Do continue soon

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Anupama Jinethri

@AnupamaJY

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#485

this is damn hilarious
just loved it
khushi is so funny

" What is it? Well, you see a monkey is
here for you,"
"It wants to be with his
kind." 🤣

and arnav was like what the.
well i would love to read some parts in arnav's pov
so it is shyam who eats butter a lot
and she has named him as butterball. 🤣 😆 Suits him
and arnav is enjoying his time
and did he just flirted khushi. and he is hint passing about you know what! 😉 😆

Will be waiting for the next update!

Edited by AnupamaJY - 11 years ago

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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#486

superb updt
and pcp

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#487

very nice..
n sorry for late reply!!

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#488

amazing update dear plz update soon

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Gayathri_ipkknd

@Gayathri_ipkknd

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#489

Sorry for the late comment. but i really loved your new story as always. i was really expecting a serious one but this one is really a new type. mind games was very funny and desert heat too at times. but this story has got its own hotness with a right blend of humour. and its needless to say that i can't wait for the next chapter.
p.s seriously tina, we were trying to handle two Mr.sexys, one a prince and another a hot businessman. and you gave us another one to add to the list, as if that wasn't enough!