ArHi SS: Baby, Hold On *Part 5 TROUBLE, Pg 1* (NEW Thread link, pg132) - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
dam what a superb concept it is..
Tinu.. u rock each and every genre as a writer.. trust me Doc ji.. superwoman u are.. ⭐️👏
this concept is hell awesome..
just perfectly feisty and sexy for our sexy and feisty Arhi..
bang on perfect..
stole my heart away at the very first update..
this story is gonna be so much fun..
I can feel it already..
love u..
love u..
love u..
for giving us great stories , one after the other to enjoy..🤗🥳
lots of muahhh..
and yes m no longer gonna thank u.. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 1 and 2..
the best start to the awesome and sexy story :-
Khushi is not happy abt her marriage.. and so do I.. 😆
I just love how she uses words like sexy and all openly in her mind..
not too shy Khushi-version.. well this is actually a treat.. 😉😛😃
no show offs.. well girl KKG I love ur attitude.. ⭐️
buaji.. well she is already annoying our KKg.. hahaha,,, Khushi and buaji have such perfect timing for comedy.. don't they .. 😉😃😆
I so hope the catch they are talking abt is not that creep Shyamwa.. hate her fiance already.. 😡😡
cant help myself.. u know why Tinu..
wowww.. first meeting mein hi catch session.. not bad.. great going for our Arhi..
what a perfect introduction scene for both of them.. he is already saving her from getting hurt.. haaayyeee.. ** whistles whistles **.. 😳😉
and what thes...
ohk.. our hotwaaa ia a writer here..
"collided with" is a better description.. hahahahaha.. couldn't stop laughing there.. 🤣
lolll.. taxi wala said " if ur love story is over"..
OMG.. I literally burst my tummy with all the endless laughter I had.. 😆😆😆
and on top of dat.. rain in the very first meet.. haaayyeee lucky girl...
that was the cherry on top..
lol... " eyes above the waist ".. Khushi chanted it.. damn girl u r so gone with his charm..😉😛😃
and the ending scene .. well it made me blush too.. 😛
continue soon love. 😃.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update.
Loved it.
Pls update soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
"what in the names of JALEBI was that!!!!!!!!!!" the most awesommme line i've ever read..plz plz plz updt sooonnn😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oooh What a twist!
Arnav is the paying guest? This should be fun!
Lol...Loved the ending though😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Ss..tina...just love it
Sorry for late reply...cant wait for the naughty nokjhok
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Posted: 12 years ago
*EDIT

Just to be clear, Shyam is not married in this story. The Raizadas aren't really mentioned. But still, we dislike snakewa on principle, right?😆

Love your feedback on this romcom, keep it up!😊

Precap: Part 4: "You're single, Sushi."

ps. I am updating Fateful Love momentarily as well.

Edited by TINA! - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aap toh so jao aram se
baad mein milte hain
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic chapter 3. Loved it to bits...so funny and flirty.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sushiii! And FL! Damn, how does every story worm its way in?!?!?! Crap! More, I need moreee! :D

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