FF: War Path (Aslok fight it out) - Page 48

"Shlok, incensed: DON'T YOU DARE!!! THIS IS NOT ABOUT YOU AND ME!"

(sorry i had to do that!)

what a fabulous update...!

first of all.. the title⭐️👍🏼

oh my the bedroom scene.. hilarious😆 (ofcourse bechara shlok) i was like, 'spaghetti shlok, its spaghetti' and then he actually blurted it in the kitchen.. lol!!

i could feel his guilt when he realised, the night dress was meant to be for their first night togehter..

the part with shlok bonding with anisha was so touching, given that he wanted a baby girl of his own, n now doubting if it would ever be reality..

man! shlok seems to be badly injured in d whole process of saving astha.. really loved gauri for doing what friends do.. n khushi for highlighting what shlok said..

i still doubt astha will give in.. but i do hope she gives him a chance to talk now.. he deserves that n some..

loved it Mary.. thank you

This chapter is too good to be true. You made me laugh a lot,thank you. There is not an inch in this chapter that you should change. I think it is a perfect mix of everything that we want 👏👏. What a tease, Shlok got exhausted 😆 , love love loved it. I guess Astha's eyes watered because she thinks even with her sexy lingerie she couldn't seduce him into liking her, little does she know that the poor thing didn't sleep and is head over heels in love. Love the fact that you gave Shlok a sample of how a happy family lives life.

Loved the conversation between-- Astha and Gauri( about Shlok), kitchen conversation between men, Shlok's soliloquy.

I wonder how will Astha react, started feeling sorry for the guy but then he has fooled her before, a part of me is still not ready to forgive. How can she be sure that he is not going to break her trust again? You have a tough job to do. Khushi helped Shlok to blurt out his true feelings for Astha to hear, brilliant move, loved it👏. Will Astha believe he had a change of heart because she now knows that he loves her? Arnav was always genuine with Khushi whereas Shlok has tricked her into believing that he loved her for a stupid revenge, how can she confirm that he is not pretending again ? Is Astha voicing that saving her could be his reflex action and may be she thinks Shlok crying for her could be again to fool the world? The problem is once a thief is always a thief. What more can he do to prove to her to be sure that he is being truthful to her(Don't get me wrong, you are doing a brilliant job but it would be wonderful if you could think of something ultimate like an 'agnipariksha' to prove his love, that he will never deceive her).

Lines I love --

"I wasn't doing anything,you came over to my side" aww poor thing

"His gift. Scrambling. " 😆

"Shlok: That's it! Spaghetti straps! " 🤣 eureka moment for Shlok

"gila gila pusta" 😆always loved it

"The fall did not kill her, but his hug certainly would. " touchy one.

"Shlok, incensed: DON'T YOU DARE!!! THIS IS NOT ABOUT YOU AND ME!" again heart touching.