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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

wow all it took for him to get through to her was her to give him a hint
she wasnt that naive as you thought her to be mate
but guess sometimes direct actions words have better impact than anything else
as demonstrated by that lip action of yours
awww all this just to say he doesnt like guys flirting or being too friendly with her
that he gets if that happens
wow what a way to tell her that
very long winded way i must say arnie
but that was funny as well as cute
man at least he let her know what he feels for her saving her lot of grief right
cheers for pm

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Oh...it was soo good... really really good :-)

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Wow this was absolutely amazing and mind blowing one shot,

Arnav's jealousy and possessiveness was so extreme, I found it funny.

Poor Khushi having to put up with Arnav making a big deal about her saying good morning to the cashier.

Loved the way Arnav plucked the pen in khushi's mouth, I have too admit that was the most romantic and sweetest thing I have read.

Loved Arnav's direct approach towards Khushi about what he wanted and was asking from her,

The one shot was written amazingly well and a brilliant read from start to finish.

You are an amazing writer and you write with so much attention to detail it's mind blowing.

Also if your feeling messed up and this outstanding one shot was the result you should definitely write more when your feeling messed up, lol.

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was sooo cute! And adorable and just shooo sweet!

Loved it!

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Another one of your quintessential OSs- lighthearted, different ant subtly romantic...😊

Your AUs are the best and if this is what you come up with when you are nervous and jittery, I can only wish for you to remain like this more often than not.😆

To say it directly, I just loved every bit of it.😉

Well done 👏

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NikitaM11

@NikitaM11

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Loved loved loveddd it! Did I ever tell you how amazingly happy I get whenever you update?! Regardless of whether it's an OS or an update from your FF's because I know their just going to be brilliant! I loveee crazy possessive jealous Arnav. He is soo cute! And the fact that Khushi might have known all along that he liked her is even better! The way he sort of indicated his feelings to her from taking the pen, omg it was amazing. I could imagine the whole thing in my head! And that creepy 7-eleven guy was definitely Shyam in my head ahaah. Brilliant OS! So cute! Can't wait to see what ever else you write! :D

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Hmmm...☺️ Direct approach indeed... I luuurrrvvveddd ittt!!!!!!!!!!

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Cute os! Was Khushi hinting at arnav to be more direct about how he felt?

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

So they were not an item before his outburst about the 7eleven guy? Glad she got to the point and put him on the spot. Guess there was no running around the issue and he had to respond. Respond he did as Kushi could not debate anymore. She could barely get any words after that direct response. Very cute!