Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D)

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mridula

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Posted: 11 years ago

#891

read the both part.both were beautiful as always.finally manvi disclose her pain,anger and frustation.virat understand how much he hurt her.
u stop in wrong point,now update soon plz.

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kokubaba

@kokubaba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#892

superb update love you for this...manvi expressed her feelings finally...now it s virat's turn to do something abt it...😛...superb feeling bad for both of them...hope thy solve all their problems...superbly u have written manvi's pain loved it n standing ovation for this...👏👏👏👏👏⭐️...superb mindblowingly fantastical👏👏👏

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 11 years ago

#893

ahhh they both are hurt...
the problem is just that virat doesnt know what he should in his pain...
but we know he really loves manvi...
and manvi she is soo pure soo innocent,
she still has the same love and feelings for him even he hurts her...

waiting now for the next part

and dear please write in english, i think that what you wrote in hindi, are important

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kokubaba

@kokubaba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#894

you stopped at the wrong place...😭😭😭😭😭 please update soon..i know u will rock it...as 😳usual 😳

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vaarya

@Vaarya53

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Posted: 11 years ago

#895

ayeshaaa..ur back finally . its too good to see u :D red all the three updates in one go and i must say that was a brilliant comeback! and yess u totally stopped at the wrong place so u better make it up for us and that too with a pretty long one! love ur work and will be waiting to read more :)

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Bhabani90

@Bhabani90

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Posted: 11 years ago

#896

So many problems n pain.. But m sure virat wud make up for it very soon.. Updates were mindblowing, awsum.. But dfntly i want sumthng romantic creeping in.. Waiting for the next.

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Swati

@sweetyyyyyyy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#897

Awesome update...

ya u stopped at wrong place...

nw pls update soon

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Disha

@daydreamer9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#898

"The room felt too silent even after the song from her laptop was pretty loud"<---is it possible???

"the sky was in layers of colors making it breathtakingly beautiful, he knew that darkness would wash the sky and the beautiful colors evading the sky would be lost. Beautiful but short lived' he wondered if life was the same too... if the happiness which was in his life was for a short period too... he wished that it would come back and stay there with him forever. "<--- baap re!!!such elaboration!!!

" He had told her how she belonged to him and how she didn't have the right to hurt him the way she was doing but he also knew that he belonged to her now and she had all the right on him."<--- best part of this update!!!

the whole convo between virman is where i was singing 'saree ke fall sa'.well u know it already.actually u toh know everything i'd say.even this-- I HATE U!!!!u lied to me!!!!Allah will never forgive u for lying to a poor innocent soul like me.and for taunting me also.

and i know what will happen next.they'll kiss!!!this time i want both of their lips taking part,😉

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ksh_n

@ksh_n

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Posted: 11 years ago

#899

luvvvd t .. beatifully xpressed manvi's feelings...

n vry vry bad place 2 stp...

waitin 4 nxt updte😃

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#900

Yes very bad place to stop 😆.. So please continue soon 😳.. Amazing update!! Very well written 👍🏼.. Manvi poured her heart out to him.. And Virat finally realized what was the reason behind her distant behaviour.. He himself pushed her away and now he needs to make it up to her.. Eagerly waiting for the next Ayesha.. Take care 😊