Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D) - Page 58

this was fabulous

Eeeks ! Yayyy ! :DDD finally those three words ! :)) tat was such a beautiful update twino <3 i really loved every bit of it ❤️ beautifully writtern yaar ! I have a big grin at the end 😃 mazaa aa gayaa :)) awesome lovely update ! N the concession was superb ! Unique simple n beautiful ! N the feeling u have express is juz amazing twino ! Sach main lovely ❤️ ab really eagerly waiting for next update ! :)

Ahh aise acche refreshments break main milta rahe toh kya baat hongii naa 😛 really needed this ! Have been tired n bore of studying n juz came here for few mins n here i got a awesome refreshment ! All thanks too u 😃

Fabtabulous updt...adhi n virat was completely unexpected after the last updt i was even expected him to blow out everything...but i m loving this change...bcs its better fr every 1

wooppiii...finally virat confessed him love...the whole song scene was so beautiful...n a perfect song selection...hwww manvi kissed him publicly...lolzzz but never mind...the best part is virat accept her whole heartedly

so after this romantice confession ek romantice sa virman scene to banata he he...plsss

after that i m waiting fr the meager twist as u mentioned something in that song abt their sepreation...i wud love to c that...duriya bhi he jaruri jaruru he ye duriya...lolzzz...cont soon soon soon

its ok dear i can understand...its hard to manage a time with job n studies...so its all write but pls dont DC the story in middle a way...pls

awesome update dear

this story is magical.. i feel lyk reading d updates again again. . . i have read beyond control mor than 10 times . bt it still has dat magic wich make me read it again n again. . . coming to chaptr it was awesum spectacular .. lvd d song n d ambience of d whole chaptr. . finaly Virat confssd .. waiting to see their journey as lyf partners. update asap

I loved the chapter ❤️

Wohooo Ayesha awesome update.. atlast he confessed.. Bt y manvi is crying now.. I thnk tears of happiness hai na.. Cant wait for next part.. 😉 Continue soon..!!

wow it was awesome update