Virat&Manvi ff -Tblby#2 (link for the 3rd thread- Pg 151 :D) - Page 56

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Posted: 11 years ago
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first thing first. Virat needs to understand that whatever he felt for Roshni was not love. i know u hv ur own POV on love n r adamant on proving Virat's love for Roshni or vice versa..but let me tell u, it's not working for me. the basic rule of love is holding onto d person u love till d very end. u don't let that person go without fighting. just tell me will u give away u'r fav book/dress only because someday u found a stain on it?won't u try every possible thing to make it good again? i've already told u my ice-cream n family theory.😛so won't repeat that.

n d situation whr u think V n R fell in love is totally absurd. two lonely people finding solace in each other...how convenient situation to fall in love, no? baby, attachment n love r two totally different things. love gives u d possession over d other one. u can not but become loyal n transparent. there is no other way. 😆



BTW u urself have proved my points.
when Adhi tried to flirt,didn't Virat walk over n staked his claim on Manvi?😉
wasn't Manvi able to decode every emotion behind the words of Virat's?
will Virat be able to get over Manvi?ever?

this is what i call love.where u know u will do anything n everything for the one who loves u with d same intensity.not confused,not unrequited...but full fledged love.😃


Virat's fear is so justified.he's still living in guilt.bt in the last few lines..i believe u did free him from that? he has suffered enough.spare him now,plz.😛




i don't need to comment over the quality.u already know how awesome u are.😛n no need to say i loved it.coz that's obvious.😛sorry i can't be sweet while commenting.had to be honest.❤️n yey!!i didn't quote.




okay...this was for chap 36.will edit this again.chap 33,34,35 is still due.🥱



Edited by daydreamer9 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update.
finaly virat said the three magical word.
love the song,it was perfactly said virat unsaid word.
now waiting to see virman new life without any guild and fear.
plz update soon and next update must be long and romantic one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
ayeshaaa ...this was fabulous, splendid and i can't actually frame words tj describe wat i feel about the update!! truly romantic , intensity of emotions and pure love that lurked in the whole update just made my eyes teary . though i know its too hard to imagine such a real situation but still the way u wrote the whole bit was amazing!! i just got carried away with the flow with which the entire scene was written and i could clearly imagine the scene in my head! doing a fabulous job ayesha and ur making me more and more eager and impatient for ur updates. u need to update ASAP . looking forward to ur story always :)
Aenna thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wooow finallyyy...
He said it !!!
Now I cant wait for d next update..
But m lil confused.. did he confessed ? Nd did she kisses him in public?????
I mean... r they still at d poolside and manvi sitting on him where he was
Sitting nd singing...
Update asap
Edited by Aenna - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally Virat said I Love You...
Lovely update..
But really short yaar..
The song was really good...
Pleasee continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg.. This was tremendously beautiful, the emotions, love, feeling everything so pure and blissful. This was one of the best updates and touched my heart. Awsum, mindblowing, fantastic, but ye dil mange more so update jaldi jaldi.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome !! Loved Virat's confession..Simply Awesome...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
it was just fabulous...amazing

left wid no words at all...really...update soon
pink1 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update he say that 3 word and his feeling
through song and know he will ready to start
new life or he again go to his past
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh goddd... U have updated... Small or big.. U updated nonetheless... Yay... 😊👏👏.. So so so happy ya... Fun.. N what an update... 😳😳.. Finally...

What an update.. He said I love you... Awww... 😳😳.. Finally... I was jumping up and down... 😳😳😆

The entire update was so much fun... D song, d hidden feelings, d love , d emotions... OMG... Entire package... So finally they believe its a new start... To them, their love and their life... Fun... I hope u show them talking more thou... 😊😊.. Sometime words are also imp.. Which is missing...

But really loved the update... Much needed one.. And written beautifully... 👏👏

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