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ajoop

@ajoop

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

ek dum jhakass di...

loved loved and loved it...

mindblowing 😳😳😳

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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

hey farha..:) :)
ccompletely loved it..
feeling so good afterreading u r new work ...
totally loved the concept..
whistling nd studying...:P
btw...part 2 toh banta h yaar...
wanna see ki aage kya hoga...:) :)

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Oh girl! This is just so sexy!☺️

My mind is floating in some gutter right now but guess what? I'll happily set up my camp in that ...'gutter'! I thought about Florida's Whistle too when I read the title. Very well written! :-)

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Shikhayugal

@Shikhayugal

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Amazing os
that was really different but loved ur concept..:-)
Plz...update 2nd part.

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

That was a nice one!!! Oh the possibilities with this story line!!! Great job!!

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Sanjana Seth

@sanjanaseth1994

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

wonderful OS...!
who knew a whistle can really make 2 people come closer...!

and the way arnav tried to teach her i really found it hot..!
thanks for the pm!

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Whistling was given a new dimension by Arshi..nxt time wen I will c someone donig dat first coming to mind will be this story..very superbly written..loved it...

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jakhushi

@jakhushi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Farah... I have no idea if it was intentional or not... But that was downright naughty in parts... 😉.

Suck and blow ...😲 😉.😳..really Farah 😆.

But all in all ...a super cute OS...very different from your usual style... But still very nice. Super like...

And is the frustration on the course work inspired by life ? 😛

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

*Puckers up *Contracts the insides of her cheeks

^^Nope it is still not working, I gave up on learning how to whistle a long long time ago!😆 (^^ *rolls eyes at herself *shakes her head *sighs)

In all seriousness, I was so not expecting a Pm from you F and I was ecstatic to discover that you have kindly written an OS for us and what an OS too.

I have to thank Deeps for making you share it with us, it totally made my day! Ah your writing is so vivid, always leaves as picturing everything heck this time I was even trying all of Arnav's techniques and instructions to try and whistle but somewhere in the middle I stopped because my mind went to gutterland.

Arnav and Khushi have always had the best chemistry but the way you create the visuals for us highlights and increases that electric chemistry by leaps and bounds. Flo Rida was definitely going through my mind while reading this rather different and wonderfully pleasant OS. Totally loved it, I am with Vandana here, u can so write a part two for this heck this has the potential to turn into an SS/FF.

Ps. Give us more surprises like this one more often ;-)

PPS. Ahem someone once said something to me along the lines of creating an index of their work ( I wonder how that is going?)😆