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Misnomer

@Misnomer

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

really it was magical ..
beautifully writtenn...
wen i saw the title i really thought that this must be from the
song 'whistle'... yay i ws right!!!...
these liines go perfect...
can u blow mah whistle baby whistle baby let me now:-) ;-) <3

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was one Amazing whistle Session Farha di with Arnav admiring her and Khushi blushing😉😆

It was such a cute one,Loved it Di🤗

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

wonderful os.
Can u write a continuation plz?

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awww...that was such a adorable OS

loved it

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Wow that was amazing and superb one shot,

Thank you to the amazing person that convinced you to upload this one shot.

Absolutely loved the one shot it was a brilliant read,

All I want too say is that you have just given me a new meaning to the word whistling, lol.

Loved the part where Arnav was actually teaching Khushi, such a hot and sensual moment.

There were words like sucking and blowing used for Khushi's innocent mind, lol.

Is this going to be continued as I would love to read the lessons for whistling, I'm sure I could contact the person that made you write this for a continuation.

Also we need a third part where Khushi gives Arnav the lesson on bankruptcy, so overall it will have to be a three shot.

EAGERLY waiting for the next part,

Thanks for the PM xx

Edited by P4rveen12 - 11 years ago

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Nice OS Farha... I want to know more... About their tea/ coffee session and whether finally she learnt to whistle or ...

I hope you're de-stressed enough for D4D 😆 Eagerly waiting for that 😊

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I would like to start with a whistle

Now one with the fingers

That was fantastic. It was full of double meaning dialogues and being the besharam that I am, I just loved them 😉. Loved Arnav and Khushi. They were being the Arnav and Khushi we know. So I could relate to them instantly. A whistle made Arnav forget all about his classes, quizzes, exams, grades, studies, business and himself. I literally whistled while reading it 😆 Bankruptcy and Liquidation never interested me this much before. Any chance you may continue this and give us Khushi's POV and at least a confession? Please...pretty please 😳

PS: When you said he was sitting on the 4th floor my mind took me to the Veranda of IBA and I was imagining Arnav sitting there trying to study. My Dhak Dhak took off at jet speed after that 😆

PPS: Ehem ehem Kahatha na tum yeh OS zaroor post karogi 😃