~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38

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moumita

@sumimita

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

oh god rey is hiding something...???

should i be tensed for this??

well as usual the update was superb

loved it...

loved kricky bonding...

thnks a lot for the pm..

update it soon

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Awww such a cute chapter.
I loved d most vicky and kriya.
Poor vicky whn rey must be d one handling kriya's hormones he is out. Lol!!
I was thinking while reading kriya and vicky's talk dat rey should come at this time and BINGO rey came...
How caring rey is giving massage hayee!.
Rivaan is such cute and understanding baby.
Next i want a naughty princess.
Such a lighthearted and mind relaxig update.
U do magic with words and so ur name ''magical_mania''..hehe:D

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

awesome update...loved it very much

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

loved kriya and vicky's bonding...

awesome update...interesting precap...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Awwwiiee manu... jaan le le meri... 😆

Hayyeee... ek toh shakti ki entry... upar se tera update... ☺️

Itna ultrasoft n sweet yet sexy massage... ideas kahan se lati hai re??? :* 😛

Awww... kricky scene was adorable... he cares for her alot...😊

She's complaining to him like a kid... in need of her favourite toys (rey) ... hehe... n he's listening n comforting her ...😃

Yay!!!! Rey kriya se door rahi hi nhi sakta ... hayyeee... beautifully emotional scene...🤗

Sho shweet... the way rey reacts with the unborn baby... he's certainly the most happy person ...

Vicky is so mature n understanding... instead of teasing them.. he asked them to have some time alone...👏

eeepppsss... snuggling in warm bath.. in the arms of love... gosh.. manu :* :*

Awww... he did this massage to make her relax.. n to get her rid of nightmares ... even if craving to make love... 👏

Dude.. he's awesome ... how can this guy love soo much... he's just mindblowing...😎

Bwahahaha.. nice butt... lol.. he's just complimenting her beauties... 😉

GIRL GIRL!!! Anytime... ek boy to hai na.. hehe .. family me balance hona chahiye re.. 😆

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Lovely kria-vicky scene

Ah rey is here

Loved it

Update Soon :)

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

the eternal chapter was just marvelous... do continue soon and pm me

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anshika

@Kiarawinget16

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

a girl nd amazing song and update

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deepshakriya

@deepshakriya

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

awesome update...

rey's back home.. feelin happy...

and i think this tym it shud be a baby gal...!!!1 :)

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

I just don't understand, how to describe this?

Well I think you already know how exceptionally beutiful do you write!

It's so poetic to read your work. Laced with emotions. Simply descriptive yet so apt.

I loved the Kria-Vicky conversation.

And with Rey returning back, our tharki minds returning back on track 🤣

I am amazed the way you describe him so balanced between family and career. He gives time to both Kria, Rivaan and his family as well as his career, his movies for the time being.

I love the way he loves her. Such a caring husband, he is!

He is hiding something? But what?!

Anyways that would only be revealed in the next chapter or so. So I will just wait for the next.