~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ #2 - Chapter 38 - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely chappy manu... 😃

I just love morning romance...☺️

Kriya is so calm n peaceful.. she sees everything with so much positivity... 🤗

Rey should stop being so guilty over everything... its his nature anyway... 😳😆

Lol.. even I thought she is coming for the shower 😉... poor sideaffects... troubling her so much...

Hehehe... first time daddy.. even doc is amused... 😛

Lol... yahan to sabko pata h ... sab smart hain... 😆

Rofl... kriya should check up on rivaan while he's watching tv... kya kya dekhta hai ye... 🤣

I can guess the embarrased faces of adults... bwahahaha... explanation of rey's dad... 🤪

Awww... lil baby feeling insecure... but i'm glad he's not so hyper... he's actually more happy with the news...😊

Even good that rey handled him so calmly... 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
simply awesome ! 😊
u need to update sooner ..cnt wait for d next part !
loved it alot 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
i am resing..

i know its very late to res.. :/

lekin me thinking ki jab tak i unres kahin dusra update nah aa jaye.. :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous

Rey-Rivaan n kria r way to cute

n da way kriyansh deal wid rivaan is adorable

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ..
Beautiful part ...
Loved it ...
Waiting for more ...
Continue soon ...
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know I am like super late...
Am really very sorry for that...

Please forgive your buggie...

So here I am finally commenting...

This was such an amazing and a leapful chapter in a sense...

They are expecting the bundle of joy and people who they love know about it...

It doesn't get any beautiful than this as to how you showed now...

I mean it was a sheer amazingness as to how you showed their bond developing...

So sweet for Rey that he is experiencing the joy he missed onto... Finally no rgrets on their lives of the past...

Then how Singhania family you showed... awww...

Rey is so understanding... He understood kiru's father sentiments and then how he bonded onto with rivaan...

The talks you showed were amazing...

Just beautiful...

Just a suggestion or quirk whatever you wanna say... shw kiru's family too... I mean rey's talks with them and all... I mean it will add more to it... I feel...


Awesome... :-*
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

I know I am like super late...

Am really very sorry for that...

Please forgive your buggie...

So here I am finally commenting...

This was such an amazing and a leapful chapter in a sense...

They are expecting the bundle of joy and people who they love know about it...

It doesn't get any beautiful than this as to how you showed now...

I mean it was a sheer amazingness as to how you showed their bond developing...

So sweet for Rey that he is experiencing the joy he missed onto... Finally no rgrets on their lives of the past...

Then how Singhania family you showed... awww...

Rey is so understanding... He understood kiru's father sentiments and then how he bonded onto with rivaan...

The talks you showed were amazing...

Just beautiful...

Just a suggestion or quirk whatever you wanna say... shw kiru's family too... I mean rey's talks with them and all... I mean it will add more to it... I feel...


Awesome... :-*



Thank Yoou Vaishu 😃
N about Kiri's family... well they are not so close to her
as you know her father had doubted about Rivaan being someone else's child
plus he never took that stand dor her which a father should take..
So may be in future atleast I'll show her mother 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
this time it shud be the girl...song is osum...kriya's sickness is the only hindrance in the pregnancy but that's necessary...i loved vicky nd kria's talk...they were so genuine...their bond is quite refreshing...rey back home, dats great...waiting for more fun...thanks for d pm...i genuinely loved the chappy coz it was too smooth nd lighthearted
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Posted: 11 years ago
girl
awesome update
loved it
baad mein lamba comment dunge pakka
abhi thoda busy hu
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Posted: 11 years ago
reserve
unreserve

this time toh pakka girl honi chahiye..
rihaan should have someone to protect..
and personally i love the girl-boy pair

simplrloved the KriCky talk 😳
i was really nice
waiting for more fun as kriya ia pregnant and she will irritate rey to hell.. 😆😉
thanks for the PM
loved the update

as usual amazingly well written update 👍🏼
Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago

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