Friends Forever *Conti* pg14 part 11

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This story belongs to four people. Four people who became friends not because they wanted to but due to the circumstances. An event that made them see the side of each other which was invisible to the world.

Amar :

the college stud. He wasn't a play boy but all the girls in the college would die for him. Behind this stud lived a boy with a dream to meet a girl to live with him not his property. He wanted someone to love him not his money. He was a rich spoiled brat who wasted money as if it was water. He lived rich but dreamt like a regular man. Then a girl entered who made his dream come true.

Naina :

beautiful yet simple girl. She lived for her dreams and her family. Her family was her widow mother. Naina always dream of becoming a famous fashion designer. She wanted to give her mom a big house and many cars so she wouldn't have to live in a chaul and walk around in hot summer days. Naina only lived for two things until she met a girl who became her best friend. A friend that naina could die for.

Kripa :

she was a rich girl but she never acted like one. She didn't care about the money. She didn't spend the money one her self but on people who needed the most. She loved spending time with kids so she spent most of her holidays and money on orphan kids. She hated being alone in her big house. Kripa's mom died when she was three. Her dad was into business and for that he used to travel a lot. It wasn't that he didn't love Kripa but his work never gave him enough time to spend with his daughter. When ever he got time he spent it with Kriapa at the orphanage. Kripa always smiled and showed that she was happy but only he knew that behind this happy face there is a sad face and a girl who misses her mom almost every day. He saw the face that the world was not able to see.

Angad :

a smart, young, and handsome guy of the college. Girls died for him After Amar. He loved to study especially about our country's past. He was excited to live every moment that his life offered. He used to live for his family but in a factory accident he lost both of his parents. Then he lived for his grandfather who passed away due to kidney failure. As time passed he realized that he has learned to live three people and himself.

brief note: this story will have different point of views and i will let you knoew about it as they change.

About the story: kripa is dead every one is mournign over her death. her death effects eachone of her friends differently and this story is about her and her friends.

Their story begins now.

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hope you all like the intro ill continue if u guys want me to. so plz leave your comments.

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It's been sad seven days since she had died. She left us all alone and went to a place where she will find peace and happiness. She was a fun loving girl. I still can't believe that she is gone. She was the life of our friendship. She was the soul of our college.
Edited by zarna - 19 years ago
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Chapter one

September 12, 2004

Dear diary,

It feels weird that being a guy I am keeping a diary. I don't have any other choice. I feel free when ever I write in you. I feel as if I am sharing things with my one and only sister who is not part of this world anymore. She has left us all in this big world alone. She has left us in the middle of the ocean with our boat sinking faster then we can imagine. It's been sad seven days since she had died. She went to a place where she will find peace and happiness. What can I say about her? If I gather all the words and sentences in the universe and write a story for her still it won't be enough. She was a unique creating of god. It's hard for me to believe that she is gone. She was the life of our friendship. She was the soul of our college. There wasn't even one day when she didn't try to do something crazy or got in trouble because of that. She was also one of the brightest students in the college. She got an award for top student of the university all the years until she was alive now she has passed that honor down to Suraj. I miss her. I miss her a lot. She left without telling us and now I feel empty. After naina she was the one who understood my problems and always helped me. Now my best friend is gone.

Hehe, I still remember how we all became friends. Being the stud I was I tried to flirt with her and being the snob she was slapped me in front of all my friends. That was the first no second time a girl has ever slapped me in my life. Today as I sit here in my bed and think back to the days when she used to be around I can say that those were the best days of my life. No I can say those were the best days of our lives. She never showed pain, agony or sadness that was inside of her but out of us four naina was the one who knew her the best. I can say that we had our differences but in the end we became friends no we became family. She was one and only sister who I cared about the most and for her I was her brother and for me she was ready to kick any girl's behind if they flirt with me. Hehe she was such a cartoon. All the mischief she used to do. Now that I think about it she only did that to hide her problems she always solved our problems but she didn't even let us know about hers. Oh I am so stupid I never realized that she could be having problems I always saw her happy face but I never tried to look away from that face and see if there was a secret or a memory or even a problem which could be the main source of her smiling face.

My life is empty without her. I don't feel like going to college anymore because every corner of that college reminds me of her. Sometimes I feel as if I see her there sometimes sitting with us and having fun. I see her sitting at her favorite table in the corner of the caf. I hear her laugh and making fun of our professors. Then the reality hits me making me realize that I am just dreaming and that she is gone forever. She is never coming back. I don't know how I will stay at the sermon held for her in the college.

All right I have to get some sleep, will talk more about Kripa later. Hope all goes well tomorrow. Good night Kripa. I miss you a lot. Love you sis.



Amar

Edited by zarna - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab 1st part
loved it
but if roshni is dead then will another cum or is it a flashback story
cont soon
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Originally posted by: hot_girl_2525

fab 1st part
loved it
but if roshni is dead then will another cum or is it a flashback story
cont soon

ull no after the second part is updated. thanks for liking my story😊 i guess not many people like it.😭

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thanks u guys. there are 58 views and only 2 people liked the story i guess i shouldnt write the next parts. i dont think n e one likes it so wont continue. 😭 thanks a lot for ur comments Indian cutie and hot girl 😊
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guys i have decide to continue because i dont want the two people who left their comments to feel bad. so wat if others dont leave their comments but as long as someone does i will update a part for them when ever i can. i thank each and everyone who read my intro and the first part and also those two peopel who left comments. i will post second part soon. hope u like it.
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Chapter 2

September 13, 2004

"Good morning students, we all have gathered here today for a sermon of kripa. A very smart and talented student of our university and of the whole state. She made us all proud. It's a tragedy that she is not the part of us anymore. I know that she is looking down on us and noticing that we miss her. She was one of those students who have touched our hearts in very special ways. I know that the future students of our university will also come to know about her. Today we are gathered here to give support to her loved ones. We should tell them that Roshni will always be present where ever there is darkness. Time is the best healer. We should learn to accept this fact and try to move on with our lives. I know that it won't be easy but we can all try. We can move on by keeping Kripa alive in our hearts with her sweet memories. Kripa is only gone from this world but not from our hearts. She will remain there as long as we live with her memories," said headmaster Chadda finishing his speech.

There were many students present to say their final good bye to me. In those many faces I spotted two familiar faces my two out of three best friends. Naina was crying on Amar's shoulders. Amar was being the strong one today, but I know how he is really feeling. Only I can tell now. I also know that Amar was the one who cried the most and last when he heard the news of my death. He didn't want to believe at first because he knew that I keep my promises. I promised him that I will always be there with him. Today for the first time in my life/death I wasn't able to keep this promise. I am not there with him physically but I will always be looking down on them. I would grow old through them and with them. I will live my days through them. I smiled as I looked down at naina and Amar. Amar wiped Naina's tears to make her stop crying. I searched all the faces to look for the one I admire the most.

Then there I found him. He was standing away from all this under the banyan tree that I helped plant. I was tears in his eyes. Tears that were held back till this day with hope that this all might be a big lie and I will return to him. He was rubbing our initials that were carved on the trunk. Those days promised so many things but sometimes life takes unusual turns and leaves us with nothing. Once again he has lost someone he loved oh so much. I can still feel his love for me. I know that misses me but I also know that as time moves on he will move on as well. He will learn to live his life without me and start his carrier and in future a family as well. When was the question remaining and soon was the answer I wanted to hear but I knew better.

He walked towards Naina and Amar wiping the tears away from his eyes. He knew he has to be the shoulder of Amar but who will be his shoulder? With whom will he cry with? My father was his answer.

Their survival depended on him and him only. My father was a strong man, and now he will have to be their supporter and help them move on in life without me.

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summer of this chapter:

Kripa is dead and there is a sermon held for her. this chapter is in her point of view she is looking down on everyone from heaven and she is telling the story. i will let you know as the poing of view changes. this story will also have flashback so will tell you about taht as well when time comes


Edited by zarna - 17 years ago
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nice part n i m sure u will get a lot of comments n y did u write that girls r fida over angad after amar b/c i think it should be angad 1st n tehn amar well that's my opinion lol
continue soon
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Originally posted by: bhumishah

nice part n i m sure u will get a lot of comments n y did u write that girls r fida over angad after amar b/c i think it should be angad 1st n tehn amar well that's my opinion lol
continue soon

hehe i no but in thsi story angad is a simple guy he is not the rock star so had to do it sry but he is still # 1 hottie.

about kripa's death ull get to know about it soon😊

Edited by zarna - 19 years ago

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