KriSha SS |Eclipse| Chapter 3 + Note Page 20

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Kria and Sharon have power to give life and take life and they are not doing there work properly. Why? And who has got which power?

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: lovely7010
You call this an update? yeh piddhi sa thing is an update??

jo bhi tha it was nice...iss pidhhi thing k liye itna hi bas...

Yes, it's a drabble size update😎. I know it is nice😛. BTW thank you for liking the update.

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: jas112
my god
prologue sounds awesome
do update soon

Dear I have updated next three chapters. Do check it out.😊

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Now what do I say.. Mujhe iska PM nahi mila.. 😡 Sorry. Mannu sends out the PMs but her PC isn't working so you didn't received the PM.😛

Anyways.. I just loved the way the that person.. or who so ever that authority maybe.. but his worries about the imbalance in the nature.. that was well executed.. Thank you ji😳

And finally half the thing is revealed.. Kria and Sharon are given the power to take and give lives.. now what is next.. woh bhi reveal kar do... What is next ke liye wait for next chapter😆

and keep updating.. and dare you not PM me.. haanji maate Pm mil jaega.😆

Glad you liked the update, although got angry on me.😆

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: -shenz-
Jaa re.. mere armaano pe paani ferna.. is so not fair...

Arre aisa kuch nae karungi toh how will I be called Devil😎😈?

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Chipmunks.
Kria and Sharon have power to give life and take life and they are not doing there work properly. Why? And who has got which power?

Stay tuned to know further😉😆

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Yeah right.. Devil.. mere armaano pe paani fer kar you are being happy..

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

ho 😲

itna chotu !!!

why so ??

seriously this is something

i mean itna confusing SS hain and you have written it so well

bravo 👏

well honestly abhi tak kuch samajh nahi aaya 😛

waiting for the coming updates

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ShonaSparkzz

@ShonaSparkzz

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Your way of presentation has improved drastically

The statement at the beginning was a very intriguing way of of starting which totally captured all my attention which i initially planned to dedicate a little to my music as well 😆

Loved the way you portrayed the persons perspective

(Aditi tu bhi toh kahi en meh se ek toh nahi 😉 ...I'm so scared now😆)

The persons first thoughts were food ... so true ... The one pleasure no human can deny is food

And then the cctv camera recording and the news about dead people being revived by black magic and all was so good to be true but it so happens it is and even educated people have no other choice but to accept this ... makes it very interesting for the readers

Finally, beautifully written 👏 and looking forward to how you drop the veils of your mystery.

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Now things r coming clear

shar n kria r not in good terms..dats why people r dying den get alive again n den die again

Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Update Soon n good luck for the test :)