D3 - As I Cherish it - a D3 & SwaRon FF - Page 7

Originally posted by: sanstina

Awesome update 😊

Loved the weaklings n dazzlers fight

Sharon whole time zoned out

I like the way u characterized Swayam

Hmmm...this just made my dad woman... I just love how this story is proceeding ... res

first of all, thank you for being so prompt with the updates
now coming to the chapter- i loved the name. i loved the book and i loved how you used the name here.
They were two lonely souls, who only had each other to complement and each other to contradict. Here were two people, who could be lonely even among a crowd of millions, who could be oblivious to anything but each other, who could have a conversation without uttering a word, who could hear each other even amidst chaos. Their silence spoke volumes, and only they could read each other's silence.
this is SwaRon, this is the story we celebrated as a mark of the coming-of -age of indian telly and the story whose brutal and untimely death we still mourn.CVS PAY ATTN!
i have come to expect wit and bonhomie in your writing and you didn't disappoint.

Rey who till now, was prancing around to pacify both Sharon and Kriya, finally gave up and went and stood beside Swayam, who looked on.

Swayam smiled at him. "Daant mat dikha samjha," said Rey to Swayam. "Abhi se yeh haalat hai, pata nahin aage jaake kya hoga," Rey said to himself.

"Chill. Inn dono ko khud bhi nai pata ki yeh bilkul ek jaisi hai. Inhe bas ek common topic chahiye, to get them started... phir dekhna... kissi din baith ke humare baare mein gossip kar rahi hogi."- Swayam assured Rey.

another beautifully began relationship that unfortunately trampled on too many friendships to bloom in the show. it is commendable how steadily you've built the reyam friendship.
your update was superb and you've definitely got the Diva's thought process locked down.
my fav part was nil and vishakha's fighting coz i missed that so much later. all these characters had so much personality and fire, it was heart breaking to watch it all fizzle out.

Thank you so much Oin... 🤗

Originally posted by: bleu98

I wish the CVs would learn from the innumerable OSs/SSs and FFs in this forum. I don't have any hopes left from the show anymore.

Thank you so much Varada- the way you appreciate my work, sometimes I get scared that I may not live up to your expectations. So do gimme feedback too.

And yes more Swaronilicious moments on your way. 😉 it's a slow start but it'll get there.

Originally posted by: damonTVDrocks

Oh, you remembered my name right!😳

And about appreciation, you deserve it girl!👏

About those innumerable OSs n FFs, they generally are based on one couple, but you somehow have managed to balance the gist of D3: The gang and the friendship element..😛

Coming to the 4th part, it was as awesome as it gets.. The awesomeness started from the name itself! They really were engrossed in their own world, far from the crowd.

Sharon changing, the change had to be done, once the Diva falls in love. N it's happening. Swayam had to change, from a lovestruck boy, to a matured person.. It too is happening. The gang fight and their unwillingness to accept the change happening around them.. Well written.👏

But I'm a little confused here, will KriYaansh story be given space here too? Cuz we're getting KriYam here, but know KriYaansh till now. So, just wondering..😲

Eustacia Vye was a milestone. i don't think there is a more real heroine in victorian literature. her complexities were so much like sharon's though of course thomas hardy and palki inhabit two completely different levels and even taking their name in the same sentence was sacrilege.
but if i'm not misaken she was the heroine in 'return of the native',
'far from the madding crowd' had Bathsheba something and nothing tragic happened to her.

Originally posted by: austen4ever

Eustacia Vye was a milestone. i don't think there is a more real heroine in victorian literature. her complexities were so much like sharon's though of course thomas hardy and palki inhabit two completely different levels and even taking their name in the same sentence was sacrilege.
but if i'm not misaken she was the heroine in 'return of the native',
'far from the madding crowd' had Bathsheba something and nothing tragic happened to her.

oh don't remind me of those blasphemous soaps modelled on pride n prejudice. the way they routinely destroy my fav story makes me wanna grow fangs and go on a murdering spree.
i agree, they do but none of them have the skills to do justice to their inspirations.
palki is at the end of the day a businesswoman, the story can go to f*** itself as long as she rakes in the moolah from the channel. she would sell not just her own but also her cast's souls if it brings in money.