ARHI SS 'LOVE AGAIN' PART-4 Page 26, 25/10 - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Are yaar ,dewali Araha hai ,kuchto hint dedona...

Cheers...
Edited by kushiarnav1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg who is this new khushi?
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am so happy that Arnav got his Khushi maybe not the same but he got one and that mad me happy😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: A_BA

Again, my first reaction is "What the!!!!"

Ok, I have to admit, you total surprised me. I guess I should not have assumed that the woman in the first three chapters was Khushi, but you did a good job at making us believe so (the payal, the language she used with Arnav was just so khushi-esqe). Whatever the case, I'm glad that Khushi is not the woman he met earlier as she is already taken. I feel bad for Arnav that his "love" is no more his, but it's time for him to love again!!!

I like the real Khushi that you introduced! I am definitely looking forward to reading more; I love a story with a strong Khushi!

Btw, I saw your status a few days ago, but you never posted the answer!!! I was going to scrap you but completely forgot about it.

Sorry for the late comment; I am having a hard time catching up on all the stories that I'm following!

Thank you for the PM. Looking forward to read how their story will progress!


ek writer hi dusre writer ko samajh sakta...😛 this comment makes perfect sense...
thank you thank you...👏

so the award of best comment goes to A_BA...
Geetaji inke liye hi update soon..😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok so I caught up on your story. I'm confused like the others although I don't think that Chapter 4 is a flashback. Where you left off Chapter 3 and picked up Chapter 4 leads me to believe a continuation. So you never explicitly mentioned Khushi in the first few chapters, so maybe Arnav's first love was someone else.

I loved Khushi's statement

the same hell whom you ignored a while ago and I used the same door that you used to come inside

She already seems smitten with the great ASR and can't wait to see how he will fall in love again. Your chapter was very well written, and am looking forward to next installment to clear up some more questions.
Edited by ssyahoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woww!
Nyc story!
Will b following it for sure!
It has an air of mystery around it ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Like I told you before, what a tangled web you've weaved. I mean seriously you had us all fooled right from the beginning because we just assumed payal + poolside = Arnav&Khushi. We just drew that conclusion but I guess you never said that the girl whom you introduced in the first few parts is Khushi herself. Definitely fell for this one! You are not a novice writer at all, I mean look at all the aces you have up your sleeve...definitely the revealings of a matured writer. I bow down to thee!

In Part 3, I LOVED how you layered Arnav's pain and remorse. It was miserable to read but deserving also because he was the one who let her get away. Whoever she is. I am glad she is happy in her own life because the Khushi you introduced needs to end up with Arnav. Unless you are planning to reveal a third heroine for our brooding hero also?😆😆 I especially liked when you described Khushi's scent, when she was next to him. ❤️

So, our Khushi is a designer? I like her already. And, she was already a little dazed around Arnav. She must be finding him appealing? I liked her and Anjali's bonding, she is now working with her. Something we didn't get to see much of in the show! Khushi is a chill-out person and I love her for what she is. I am looking forward to how she causes turbulence in Arnav's life leading him to falling in love again. I loved this line '' the same hell whom you ignored a while ago and I used the same door that you used to come inside'' Khushi is very confident of herself and I like that about her.

Now I get the title 🤓 The reference is even more clear now and in sync with the story.

Both parts were wonderful and I am sorry it took me so long to catch up. But I finally DID! It's not a bribe, it's my pyaar for you!


Now update the next part soon. I am eagerly waiting to see how this plays out.
Edited by InvisibleSmile - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
well...that was a surprise indeed

The events and dialogues pointed to Khushi but it was someone else.

Well i am both happy and sad.
HAppy because Khushi is not married to someone else and sad because Arnav loved someone else with so much intensity. It is true that he lost his love and probably would come to love Khushi in the end but that would be only because his first love is not free. Khuhsi would always be the alternative choice and not the first one.

Well...lets see what happens next. Can you actually make Khushi more important then his first love?

Good story

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Posted: 11 years ago
update yaarrr...

soo long please if possible...

waiting waiting...

cheers...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting story 👍🏼
Awesome updates. 👏

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