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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello Shello peeps...!!! So here I'm back again...With the last part of this Three Shot...!!! I know I'm super late but sorry na...!!! Maaf kardo mujhe...!!! Agar mujhe maaf karoge toh yeh vala chap padhne me maja aa jayega...!!! So chalo chalo mujhe maaf karo fir yeh chap padhna...!!! So here u go(agar maaf kiya ho toh)...!!! Enjoy...!!!

Part 3

"REEEYYY...!!!" Taani screamed from the entrance when she saw him falling down on the ground unconscious...She was not able to make out what happened to Rey suddenly...She ran to him and took his head in her lap from Swayam's...Everyone circled him around...No one was able to figure out that what happened to Rey...Swayam and Sharon were rubbing his palm and Vicky and Nil were rubbing his feet taking out his shoes...Neha brought the bottle and poured few drops of water on his face so that he can wake up...But it dint work...Everyone was worried now...Taani was more than worried now...She tried to wake him up..."Rey...Rey listen plzzz...Plzz Rey aankhe kholo...Kya ho gaya hai aapko...??? Kuch toh bolo plzzz...U r scaring the hell out of me Rey...!! Plzzz open ur eyes...!!! Sharon...Sharon plzzz tum bolo na Rey ko aankhe kholne ko...Swayam tum bolo na plzzz...!!!! Rey plzzz...!!" Now she was crying more and more...Tears were coming down her cheeks and were landing on his face, but that too dint wake him up...

Sharon and Swayam saw her condition...They were now worried...Sharon went to her and rubbed her back to calm her down and here Simmi took his palm and started to rub it..."Taani...Taani plzzz calm down...Dekho agar tum hyper ho jaogi toh Rey kaise thik hoga...First u calm down...!!!" "Haa Taani plzz calm down...Mere paas iske family doctor ka no. hai...Let me call him...Amar plzz help it out...!!!" Swayam said and Amar came and took his palm started rubbing...

Swayam stood and went to the entrance and called the doctor...After few rings he picked up "Hello Dr. Jyoshi...???" Swayam asked to confirm..."Yes...May I know who it is...???" Dr replied..."Oh hello dr...Its me Swayam...Reyansh Singhania's friend...!!!" "Ohh Rey's friend...!! So how can I help u...?? Ur voice is shivering...Any problem???" He asked..."Yes dr...Actually hum rehearsals kar rahe the competition ke liye aur pata nai kaise par achanak Rey behosh ho gaya aur hosh me aa hi nai raha hai...!!!" Swayam told him...Hearing this dr was shocked "What...!!! Rey unconscious hai...!!! Damn maine mana kiya tha usse dance karne ko...!! God...!!! Swayam tum ek kam karo...Main abhi ambulance bhejwa raha hun plzzz tum Rey ko leke jaldi se aa jao...!!! Agar time huva toh it would be dangerous for him...!! Come on main ambulance abhi bhejwa raha hun...!!! BTW ho kaha tum log...??" He asked Swayam totally worried..."Ahh !!! College me..." Swayam replied confused because dr was getting hyper..."Ok fine...Main abhi bhej raha hun ambulance, bring him soon...!!!" Dr said and hung up...Now this made Swayam more worried...

He kept his phone back in his pocket and went back...Taani was continuously crying and was trying to wake up Rey...Sharon saw Swayam and asked "What did dr say Swayam...??" Taani too looked up at Swayam curiously to know the answer of the question Sharon asked..."Voh dr keh rahe the ki voh ambulance bhej rahe hai aur hume Rey ko leke turant nikalna hoga or else it would be dangerous to him...!!!" Everyone was shocked..."WHAT...!!!" Taani shouted in shock...More tears were making there way down her cheeks...She looked at Rey blankly..."Voh ambulance kisi bhi time pe yah ape ho sakta hai...!!!" He said and he and Vicky went out to see if ambulance has came...Taani was still in shock...She was looking at him blankly...

Soon the ambulance came and took Rey with them...Taani, Sharon and Swayam were with Rey in the ambulance and others were coming from other vehicle...Taani was totally blank at that time..."Or else it would be dangerous for him...!!!" This was the only sentence going on in her mind...

They reached the hospital...The ward boys took him inside the hospital...In the way Dr. Jyoshi came and ordered them to take him in OT room...The gang was totally shocked...Taani was not more than shock...She was going to fell but Sharon hold her and made her stand...Swayam went to Dr. Jyoshi and asked "Dr...Dr huva kya hai Rey ko...??Achanak se usse OT room me kyun le ja rahe ho...??" "Rey ko BRAIN TUMOUR hai...And ITS LAST STAGE...Agar opereation nai hui toh...We cant say...Maine Rey ko pehle hi kaha tha ki voh operation karva le but voh mana kar raha tha yeh kehke that usse koi jaruri kaam hai voh pehle khatam karle phir...!!! Anyways pray for him...Hum sure nai hai ki operation success hoga ki nai but we will try our best...Ok I have to leave or else it will be late...!!!" He informed and left making everyone shock to their death...

Taani cant take it anymore...She got unconscious and fell on the ground...Sharon left her when she heard Dr. Jyoshi..."TAANI...!!!" Simmi saw her and went to her to wake up...Everyone else too saw her...Now everyone was crying...Swayam made her sit on the chair and Sharon brought water and poured few drops of water on her face...Taani slowly opened her eyes...She was blank...She dint know how to react at that moment of time...She was sitting blankly...Tears were coming out of her eyes but she was not reacting...Sharon was worried to see her...She sat beside her and hugged her tightly...She was also crying seeing her best friends condition...Swayam was also having tears in his eyes seeing both his best friends in this condition...

"Taani plzzz apne aapko sambhalo...!!! Rey thik ho jayega...Tumhara pyaar weak nai hai dear...Tumhara pyaar hi jeetega...!!! But plzzz tum aise chup maat raho...Plzzz say something...!! We cant see u like this...!!" Sharon was caressing her back...Tears were coming more out of Taani's eyes...After few minutes she was crying out loudly...She cant take it anymore and started crying her heart out...Everyone was also crying seeing her condition..."Rey ke saath hi aisa kyun hota hai Sharon...?? Unhone aisa kya galat kiya hai jo Krishna ji unhe aisi saja de rahe hai...!!!" She was crying more and more...Sharon pulled out of hug and cupped her face and said "Aisa nai hai Taani...Plzzz keep trust on ur Krishna ji...!!! Voh Rey ko kuch nai hone denge...!!"

Swayam came and kept his hand on her shoulder..."Taani...!!" Taani stood and hugged him tightly...He was like a brother figure to her..."Plzzz Taani calm down...Dekho agar tum strong rahogi toh hi Rey thik hoga na...!! And u see tumhara pyaar itna strong hai na ki Rey ko toh kuch hoga hi nai...!!! But plzzz u calm down...!!" Swayam said while caressing her back...Taani looked at him and asked "Paka voh thik ho jayenge na Swayam...???" "Haa Taani...!!" He cupped her face and kissed her forehead and said "Just keep trust on ur love...!!!" And hugged her again...Now the whole gang also hugged them...Everyone was crying a lot...

Now totally 2 hours were over...Some were sitting on the chairs and some were standing taking wall as their support and Swayam was roaming too and fro...He was worried now...Taani was standing near the idol of the Krishna ji which was just a few steps away from the OT room...She was praying for her love...She was not crying anymore but the old tears made a mark on her face and kohl was spread near her eyes...

After half an hour wait dr came out from OT and took out his mask...Swayam and gang rushed to him..."What happened dr...???" Swayam asked him...Taani heard the question and closed her eyes more tightly and joined her hands more tightly and was praying for Rey safety and murmuring "Rey thik ho...Rey thik ho...Rey thik ho...!!!" "Aisa bahut kam case me hota hai jaha last stage of brain tumour me logo ka operation successful ho...Aur yeh un cases me se ek hai...Yes OPERATION IS SUCCESSFUL...!!!" Everyone was smile widely and were more than happy and hugged each other..."Pata nai yeh konsa magic hai but I hope aisa magic sabke paas ho...!!!" Dr said..."Yeh power of Love hai dr...!!!" Swayam said smiling and he looked back and saw Taani was smiling and crying...Dr saw Taani as Swayam said this and smiled "Their love is really strong...!! Ok fine...Hum Rey ko ward me shift kar rahe hai...Voh abhi unconscious hai...Usse 24 hours lagenge conscious me aane me...!!!" Dr said and left...

Swayam again saw back...Taani was crying and still her hands were joined and she fell on her knees...Swayam ran to her sit in front of her and cupped her face and asked "Kya ho gaya hai Taani...??? Now y r u crying...???See Rey ab bilkul thik hai...!!!" He said as he was worried that y she was crying now...Taani hugged him tightly and again cried...Swayam caressed her back and tried to calm her down...After few minutes she pulled out of hug and said smiling between her tears "Mera...pyaar...jeet gaya Swayam...!!!" Swayam smiled at it and had tears in his eyes...He kissed her forehead and again hugged her..."Maine kaha tha na Taani...Rey thik ho jayega...!!!" They both were crying...Sharon too had tears in her eyes seeing them...She too went there and hugged both of them..."I'm so happy Taani for u and Rey...!!!" She said while all the three were crying...

After few minutes they pulled out from the hug and stood...They were smiling...Swayam wiped off her tears and cleaned her face with his kerchief and said "Ab apna face saaf kar lo...Rey ke saamne aise toh nai jane wali na...Warna usse bura lagega...!!!" Taani smiled and hugged him "Thanxx Swayam...!!!" "Friends se thanx bolegi ab tu...Itni badi ho gai hai haa...!!!??" He asked her as he pulled away from hug...Taani smiled and hit him lightly on his arms...She saw Sharon and hugged her tightly...

"Ok ok Taani ab emotional hona band kar...Dr ne kaha hai ki voh Rey ko..." Swayam said when Taani was hugging whole gang and was cut off in the middle by Taani..."Pata hai Swayam maine suna hai...!!! Ok main dr ke paas jake aati hun..." She said and left for the dr's cabin...She had talks with him about Rey's health...He advised and ordered her many things...He even told her details about his disease...She listened to them carefully...After this session, which took more than 3 hours, Taani asked permission from d that she can meet Rey now...He gave her permission to go in his ward...She smiled and left the cabin...

She came to the door of his ward...She was shivering to go inside but she have to...She saw him from the glass of the door...He sleeping peacefully...He had a mask on his mouth...His head was bandaged as he got operated there only...Seeing him like that tears were flowing down her cheeks...Soon she wiped off her tears when she felt Swayam's hands on her shoulder...She turned around...He nodded his head in saying no more cry...She smiled..."Now go...!!!" He said and opened the door for her...She looked at him and then slowly made her way inside...When she got inside Swayam closed the door...

She slowly moved towards him...When she came to him her eyes were welling up with tears...She sat on the chair beside his bed...She slowly moved her hand and entwined her fingers with his...She kept his hand near her heart and tears were flowing down her cheeks..."I love u Rey...!!! Aap thik ho mere liye aur kuch nai chahiye...!!!" She said and kept her head on the bed...After 5 hour she fell asleep...

Now 24 hours were over...Still Rey was unconscious and Taani was sleeping beside him...As she dint had many nights sleep she was sleeping for 14 hours...When she felt his fingers moving in her hand she woke up and saw him...His fingers were moving...She smiled looking at him...He was trying to open his eyes..."Rey...!!!" She said slowly...her eyes were welling up with tears of happiness..."Swayam call the dr...Rey ko hosh aa raha hai...!!!" She shouted in happiness making Swayam and Sharon, who were the only one sitting there outside as gang went home, happy...

Dr came and checked him...Swayam, Sharon and Taani were standing outside...Soon dr came out and assured them that Rey is totally fine now...They were all happy...They hugged each other...Dr allowed only one to go inside...Swayam and Sharon made way for Taani with mischievous smiles on their face...Taani blushed and moved inside...As she went inside she saw Rey's eyes were closed...She moved to him...When he felt her presence he slowly opened his eyes and saw her standing beside him with tears in her eyes...His eyes were also welling up now...He slowly moved his hand upto her hold it...He made her sit beside him and entwined his fingers with hers..."Aapne mujhe kyun nai bataya Rey...?? Kya main trust karne layak nai hun...???" She asked him...Tears were forming more in their eyes..."I love u Taani...!!!" He said slowly...She was happy after listening this from him...She closed her eyes so that if its dream then she don't want to let it end..."Open ur eyes Taani...!!! Yeh reality hai dream nai...!!!" He said while keeping his other hand on hers...She opened her eyes in shock and looked at him...He passed at small smile to her..."Aap mujhe itni achi tarah kyun jante ho Rey...!??" She asked him...He took her hand towards his mouth and kissed it and said "Coz I love u...!!!" "I love u too Rey...!!!" She said and kissed his hand..."I'm sorr..." He was not able complete as Taani kept her HAND on his mouth(hahaha humesha lips hi rakhke rokhegi kya...Kabhi kabar hands bhi kaam ate hai...)..."No Rey plzzz don't say sorry...!!! I can understand...!!!" She said...Still her hand were on his mouth...He kissed her palm and she removed her hand and blushed..."U r beautiful when u blush...!!!" He said making her more blush...

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So here I END MY THIS THREE SHOT...I hope that u all liked it...Plzzz give feedbacks on it...So now I bid bye...!!!

PS : Do hit like and comment big...!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
the end was just perfect and magical!!
the whole ts was just rocking ad touching!

continuing writing!! <33
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Awesome update
Rey ko brain tumour😲
Rey theek ho gaya
taayum part loved it
taani part haaye loved it
taarey r together again
perfect ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

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Awesome update dear

loved it to the core 👏

lovely and soo emotional 😭

rey ko brain tumour 😲

but rey thik ho gaya

and taani kitna cry kar rhi thi 😭😭

the end was perfect and mindblowing

i really loved this ts sooo much 👏

and i read the whole ts nd its mindblowing

amazing , superb fantastic and awesome 👏 👏

thank you soo much for this lovely fabulous ts 🤗 🤗

u r awesome writer yaar and i really loved to read your stories 👏

keep written more more more and moreee taarey' os ss ff 😉

love u soo much 🤗 ❤️



Thanks for pm ❤️

Edited by Rabertmona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Awsome and lovely update... 😊

Really like this story... 😊

full of love,pain and emotions...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
the end was perfect loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
wow awesome update so much of emotions in it totaly loved it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Aww it was perfect
Emotional n luvly
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
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Finally taani n rey became taarey
Ohh god taani kitna cry kar rahi thi
But in end , hero is back

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Taarey became senti n said love u wow
Liked swayam n taani bond too much
Best Diwali gift from yr side
Sooo, wish u n yr family a very happy n safe diwali
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Brain Tumor -_________-
Hate that word.
Par finally TR united..!!
Thanks for not turning into an emotional TS..!! Didnt want to cry now😃

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