#3: Dark TaaRey FF: THLH:UPDATED EPILOG:PG40:9/11 ***END***

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shubhi_taarey

@shubhi_taarey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

congrats debu di!! ur work z always heart touching nd smething i luk forward

desperately waiting to read the next chapter...!

u r d most amazing person i hve ever interacted wid!

just doing a fabulous job nd plzz pm me once u update

update soon...

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Sadaf Nawabzada

@sadaf_5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Congratulation dear on ur thread 3🤗🥳..hats off to ur wonderful creative mind and writing skills 👍🏼

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nithi_newlife

@nithi_newlife

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

CONGO...🥳

YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!!!

WE STARTED 2nd thread together and now its THIRD!!!

Wait...you didn't Pm me...neither did you scrap me abt it...now this is not done!!💔

Anywaysss still am sooo happy!!

ALL THE BEST DEBU!!😊

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indhukriya

@indhukriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hey awesome yaar pls update soon

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vd_bigfan

@vd_bigfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Congo fr d new thread dear n plzz update soon😊

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navu

@navu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

PLZZZ DIII UPDATE SOON,,,,,,,OTHERWISE THE WAIT WILL KILL ME 😭

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Debu

@crazy2012

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

-PROMO-

Scene1

Today Piyu wears a black western dress with high stiletto. Her dip red shining lips has given her a mysterious look. She shows unnecessary part of her back skin by taking her hairs infront and asks him, "I am much more beautiful than her, I can give you all you want. Mujhe aap na lo." She winks and tries to hug him from the back, but he sheers his shoulder heavily which clearly shows his irritation.

Scene 2

"Please don't go away, mujhe tumhari zaroorat hai" Rey says by kneeling on the ground. She moves back and finds his uninterrupted flow of tears which is so pure, so true.

Scene 3

"Let's do one thing today. Let's postpone our program. Aaj maan nahi hai kahi jaane ka" Rey says and hugs her from the back. She shivers a bit when his cold strong fingers touches her bare naval.

"Toh aaj aapka kya karne ka iraada hai?"

"Aaj sara din dher sara payar karenge dono" he poses a moment and brings his face close to her. Both eyes meet and time stops there forever, "...and like this" he says and places a light kiss on her pink check which already turned into tomato red in blush.

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A/N - Holla Guys, I am here back with the three small promos. Now you must be thinking "ye update toh karti nahi, aur sirf promos likh ke vaag jaati hai" Actually, to some extent you peple are right😳. As promised, I don't know if I can update it by tomorrow, though I will try, hence I have decided to gift you something.
These three scenes are very vital for the climax and story. I will not elaborate it further, so that you all will not loose the normal interest of reading this story. You have to guess the situation. No..no, it's not a game, just for fun. And yea, most probably, I am three updates away from the happy and jhakkas ending😛😉😆.

PS: Thanks for your wishes, I am super happy..will reply u soonish.

Edited by crazy2012 - 11 years ago

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tharu01

@tharu01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

after waiting 4 so...long..instead of a update a promo???😭 i cant wait more...anyways its amazing..plzz yar update soon...😭

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cuppypie121

@cuppypie121

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

😡 kya di i was expecting an update aur apne kya diya sirf ek promo 😡
Chalo koi nhi
The promo was superub and interesting
Lagta hai Pihu ka bad time start hone wala hai 😉
Aur taani ka good time 😳
Waiting for a romantic update