OS: Fate Ain't in our Hand 28/9/2013

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

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Hiba

@Kicha111

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow jannat it such a wonderful update

Manvi's emotion can be really felt whn reading it

Virat at 1st meeting itself he fall 4 manvi bt"" FATE AIN'T IN OUR HANDS"" by d time she belongs 2 sme1 else

Onceagain it ws fabulous update

Thnx 4 d pm

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JESMY

@JESNIA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

AMAZING UPDATE.
LOVED IT.
YOU WROTE MANVI'S EMOTION VERY HEAT TOUCHINGLY.
THANKS FOR PM.

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5roseparvin

@5roseparvin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

Thank u friend for ur pm... although it is sad but I like it very much

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

amazing os

loved it

so emotional

thanks for the pm

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

this one is really emotional one jannat ...
feeling soo bad for manvi even her groom what can he do he is also helpless ..
the emotions feelings everything perfecyly written ...
do continue

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

Hw can u say ,dear its bad os not good ... If its bad os than plz write more and more bad os !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WNDRFUL ,,.. SUPRB ,,,,, AWSM,,,, MINDBLOWING,,,,,EMOTIONAL @@@ OS@@@@ luv whole concept ,,actully my father also rt. Army officer ...i luv army ,evrything related them ..their dress ,, their prsnlty,,their style,,,their attitude and really u describe evrything in wndrful way !!!!!!!!! Luv song selection ... Really u made me cry wd manvi's pain !!!!!! U descrb manvi in such a beutiful way ,even i have girl crush on her ... Awsm wrk ,dear !!!!!!! Made it ss na ... Thanks alot for pm,dea...

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome os u show emotion
both of them very well

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aman-2

@aman-2

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

It was such a superb os..very emotionnal & realistic

You potrayed their character so beautifully..very well written dear..keep writing like this

Thnx for the pm😃😃

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richa002

@richa002

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

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Woow..mindblowing..awsome...superb os...
No one word can describe it...
This is one of my fav song... U hv potrayed emotions well of manvi...
Loved itt...
Keep writing this kind of things

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