#2 ArShi FF: Love me, Hate me |Note P151| - Page 5

Superb superb...
I loved it. I feel d double pain mine nd urs wowww so sweet

See? You deal with the characters and story just right.

Arnav, midst of his dilemma, still judging Sheetal and denying somewhat in despair that he's anything like her. SUCH a realistic reaction. He's faced a bad hand at Sheetal's expense, not just a fall out, but a dishonest one, and whether he concludes himself in error or not, he knows he's not her. And yet, having wronged Khushi as he has, he can't but be haunted with the guilt, and the desolate speculation if he's hit that low... Inevitable. If he was talking this out with some one, anyone, even Khushi, or especially Khushi, they wouldn't take a second to tell him off for comparing. But to his given mororse state of mind, even that occurs. I like how you follow it up later too, when he's standing behind Khushi and thinking to himself how it's not an excuse that he's offering her. Not a convenient point to offer as justification to himself. Which is what Sheetal did, and which is why he's different, even if wrong. [Yes, you can tell I have to take sides here 😆]

Khushi - Aww, Khushi, *pulls into a hug*. Loved how her hurt doesn't turn her delusional. How she can distinguish grudging Arnav his words for the heck of a grudge or indignation vs realizing that what really happens in the process of being hurt again and again by him is her loss of trust on him, his case. She's not just mad at him, she's not even entirely accusing, she's upset by how much this damages whatever little progress they had made so tediously. That she has a sense of reason about her is evidence of how much she has grown from the time they had their love confession showdown. Yes Khushi, you have changed... for the better. 👏

Garima - 🤗 Not because she's inevitably acting peacemaker between the two, but because she stated, in such simple words, such a simple fact. The fact about children, their innocence, and not stupidity. And much as the world's man he thinks himself to be, no less her senior some years, Arnav in erring mode is no better than a little grumpy boy who will fight for the last word, ridiculous as it maybe. Just because, boys. *shrugs* I love how you tied up those two situations, Khushi's issue with kids at school, and the showdown with Arnav, and then wove it into such a wonderful mother-daughter moment! 😳

Finally - Grrr, Payal!!! Could you time that worse?! 😆 😆 Then again, karma is a bitch 😆 She is after all one of the two people they blatantly intruded on, in flagrante delicto 😆 I hope, and even assume, given your assurance, that this conversation will see itself to a proper conclusion, after of course what I can further assume will be some classic Arnav Khushi and Akash Payal in the same scene entertainment 😆

Go catch some sleep, start up a good week and give us loads of update while you're at it! 🤗

bad sheetal... n i m happy arnav finally hd a vent out.. he needed it...

Lovely update.

Superb update.👏

i feel like it is filler to next upcoming sensuous update of arnav realization from like to ❤️,,but i liked it
next update pls

he is jerk of category #1

I do understand arnav's frustration, confusion ,jealousy & etc etc but i'm still a little mad at him...his outbrust did hurt yaar..
& itni jaldi maaf kar diya??? :( ..well, may be that's what best friends do best ..forget & forgive ..even I can't stay angry with my best friend for longer ..so chalo even I forgive him...their msg msg convo was soo cute..will be waiting for the next part :)

Extremely sorry for the late and short comments I have exams coming up so will be inactive till November 20^th promise to comment on all the chapters I missed when I am back till then keep updating your amazing chapters!

Chapter 17

Yay khushi got her acceptance letter as well as a rough first day at school poor her hope it gets better with time I guess every teacher has a rough first day. "Maybe Payal beat her a bit too hard' don't we all know that feeling when our siblings take advantage of our bad situations lol.

"Split personality ka case hai. Arnav and ASR" haha so true

"Don't you need to answer that phone call, instead of admiring me and my personalities?" hmm so our dear Arnav is starting to flirt this can only be a good sign for us.

"The Khushi I know will find a way to love all of that pretty soon. I am sure of it." so true

Oh god so Khushi's day just got from bad to worse. A jealous, angry, unsure of his emotions and not in control Arnav can only lead to one thing a certified ass Arnav.

Poor khushi Arnav was extremely judgemental here I can't believe he accused her like that but that's what happens when Arnav is angry I am so glad he is going to figure out his emotions before facing ha again I really hope he discovers he loves ha and I know no matter what he will make it up to her for being so wrong this time.

"That. Yes. And the fact that I know what it can do to a relationship." that was so cold he indirectly said she caused his breakup this whole covo indirectly pointed that out I wonder what went wrong with him and sheetal?but I know he never mean it like that an angry Arnav leads to harsh words that he never meant.

Chapter 18

Omg Sheetal cheated on Arnav that was expected of her but then she had a nerve to blame it on arhi friendship how dare she!

Arnav's emotions in the beginning are really sad Khushi really means a lot to him. He is really confused with his feelings regarding khushi it's like he feels because she's his best friend he can't fall in love with her lol don't he knows love starts from friendship I guess it will take him time to realise his feelings properly since he never taught this would happen but I am glad at least he discovered that he fell in "like" with a girl, "that too, his childhood best friend. Yes, he had accepted that he liked her, in the least. And he would go about wooing her in style. That would be if she forgave him first". I am sooo happy his going to woo her can't wait to see how.

Payal thinks they seeing each other this is going to be interesting.

wow very very nice update,loved it :)