Players OR heartbreakers....??? (** SS**) LAST PART UPDATED PG 49 - Page 33

Originally posted by: niki795

awesome update
loved it
loved virman and virika both
dabbu is smarter than what he shows
felt bad for viren and manvi
waiting for the last part... Maybe viren and manvi comes to know about their plan
continue soon
thanks for the pm

thank u niki... Stay tuned...

Originally posted by: Aenna

Super duper hit...
Loved it alot
Continue asap plzzz

thank u aenna...

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN

fabulous update
thanks for pm

thank u jesmy...

Originally posted by: hangok

i dont like it how jevs speak about the game that they played,
i think viren really liked manvi,
what will happen when manvi and viren knows about jevs and virats game???

thanks for pm

thank u n cmon the characters are as real as possible... Ppl talk lyk that only...

Originally posted by: Sweet_angle12

It's amazing...
Love the twist... Jeevika is a good player
Happy u did not change the pairs...
thank god now everything is clear to me but still 1 thing I can't understand is that do viren and manvi really love each other or it was just attraction or something else...
Thankx for the pm...
Don't what it 2 end but it had 2...
Eagerly waiting 4 the last part... Continue soon
Nania u write so well...love ur all stories... But this story was superb... Love it <3

thank u dear... glad u liked it...
Viren n manvi might had sumthing if they got a chance...

awesum update


every bit of it was Vry nice

update soon

Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

Wow!! Thanks for updating this di!😉 UR WELCOME

But I don't like Virat playing this game!!! He is making Manvi and Viren fool!😳 VIRAT ISNT ALONE... JEEVS IS ALSO WITH HIM

That's ok until the story goes interesting!😆

I loved the whole update...👏👏👏👏 Update soon di!😃 WILL TRY

Take care!⭐️

Love you loads!😳 LUV U TOO

Superb Update..!!! virat and Jeevika planned this out to be together with their respective partners...Dats Awesome..n yes their plan worked as well..And Virat did give a clue indirectly...but then they in to their won thoughts...Maanvi is honest abt her feelings..But Viren took decision hastily..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM Naina,!

Originally posted by: Syed695

Superb Update..!!! virat and Jeevika planned this out to be together with their respective partners...Dats Awesome..n yes their plan worked as well..And Virat did give a clue indirectly...but then they in to their won thoughts...Maanvi is honest abt her feelings..But Viren took decision hastily..Waiting for next n Thanks for the PM Naina,!

thank u... Glad u liked it...