Players OR heartbreakers....??? (** SS**) LAST PART UPDATED PG 49

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Nainuuu !! Tat was amazing !! Such a hatke story !! Really interesting n captivating !!! Mast hai reyyy ❤️
I m loving this !!! Really enjoying this story !! An aage kya hogaaa !! Plz jaldi se aglaa update dedo !! Will be waiting !!
Awesomee !!~

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

superb os
completely different concept
loved it
loved their friendship a lot
cant wait for the next parts

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Awesome...every angle is tangle with each other...lovely...but now i m so so so angry...bat mat kar tu merese...3 writers hoke bhi LSD ka ek bhi updt nahi...huh...

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Hiba

@Kicha111

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Nice OS wth a different concept

Viren love manvi bt he told jeevika's name during d game

Nw manvi confess 2 virat

Nd here virat kissess jeevika nd virat also told tht he kiss a girl whom viren likes...totally confusing

Do cont soon dear

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome Naina
hatke story...Hatts of to u and ur mind
i really enjoy it a lot 👏👏👏👏👏👏
waiting for next part...update soon 😊

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

loved it..

different one...

continue soonn please

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pinkynishal

@pinkynishal

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

awww it was sooo cuteee... waiting for nxt update...

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GOOGLU

@GOOGLU

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awsm os,dear !!!!!!!!! Diffrnt and intrsting concept ... Luv intro part @@@@@@@@ also like dabbu dhokla !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Manvi cnfess to virat bcz she was angry wd viren ... Hey dnt want virat's heartbreak in last ... Do cntnue,,,,,,,,, egrly waiting for next update ...

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Kicha111
Nice OS wth a different concept
Viren love manvi bt he told jeevika's name during d game
Nw manvi confess 2 virat
Nd here virat kissess jeevika nd virat also told tht he kiss a girl whom viren likes...totally confusing
Do cont soon dear

Arrey u got confused... The girl virat was talking abt n d girl he kissed are both same ie jeevika...
Thank u n glad u liked it... 😃