Liquorice Burning#3 [ArHi] Part 29 Updated 091316

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#471

loved it, I'm glad arnav has decides to go against his promise, also I'm proud of khushi taking a stand, however, she should avoid him for longer, one week isn't enough misery for all the wrongs he did.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Thank you everyone for the response! I've loved reading all the comments for the last two updates but unable to respond yet.

IF is not letting me like any of your comments either. Will try again later.

Cheers!

Edited by -Aria- - 11 years ago

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Aria,

As always here is a song for the update:

"It's Not Over" by Chris Daughtry

I was blown away.

What could I say?

It all seemed to make sense.

You've taken away everything,

And I can't deal with that.

I try to see the good in life,

But good things in life are hard to find.

We'll blow it away, blow it away.

Can we make this something good?

Well, I'll try to do it right this time around.

Let's start over.

I'll try to do it right this time around.

It's not over.

'Cause a part of me is dead and in the ground.

This love is killing me,

But you're the only one.

It's not over.

Taken all I could take,

And I cannot wait.

We're wasting too much time

Being strong, holding on.

Can't let it bring us down.

My life with you means everything,

So I won't give up that easily.

I'll blow it away, blow it away.

Can we make this something good?

'Cause it's all misunderstood.

Well, I'll try to do it right this time around.

Let's start over.

I'll try to do it right this time around.

It's not over.

'Cause a part of me is dead and in the ground.

This love is killing me,

But you're the only one.

It's not over.

We can't let this get away.

Let it out, let it out.

Don't get caught up in yourself.

Let it out.

Let's start over.

I'll try to do it right this time around.

It's not over.

'Cause a part of me is dead and in the ground.

This love is killing me,

But you're the only one.

It's not over.

Let's start over.

It's not over, yeah...

This love is killing me,

But you're the only one.

It's not over.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?list=RDUQ92eyxnxmQ&v=UQ92eyxnxmQ[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by Crazy4Sobti - 11 years ago

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Peonia

@Peonia

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#474

Thank god u did not leave this mid way i really like this ff and have alway lok forward for the updates... anyways now tht u r back i hope u r doing well and he last two updates where nice. like th inernal conflit khusi is going thru,... waiting for arnav to make his move...

update soon and when c we xpect a update next

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khlv

@khlv

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

Wonderful ff. pls continue.

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Amanram

@Amanram

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#476

Hey just saw you updated. Great stuff. So khushi wants to be wooed after all - she just does not know what's going to hit her pretty soon!! Go Arnav is all I can say and may we soon have shyam get his timely punishment for all his sins

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montyk

@montyk

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#477

Wonderful chapter!!

Glad u r continuing this story!

Looking forward to read the rest of the story.

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Aplihs

@Aplihs

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

That was great.., I loved khushi's self talk and arnav's mischief... Can't wait for more and would love a pm

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cineraria

@cineraria

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

Read it all in one go. A lovely really lovely FF.👏

I do understand Khushi's initial predicament, Arnav had been such a douchebag and on top of that nobody in her own family stood for her. Under such unpitying circumstances her need to leave it all behind and start afresh is justified but did she really think she could leave behind her family and the love of her life forever?

Did she never think that they could have learned about the reality and be feeling extremely guilty of the things they did to her and sincerely seeking her forgiveness apart from desperately needing her back?

Even if she wasn't sure whether Arnav loved her or not, her family obviously did love her. In that case I feel she's being more of an escapist than Arnav all those years back when he left for London, at least he did turn up after 10 days.

But I am loving this story, seriously, there cannot be anything more charming and entertaining than an Arnav wooing Khushi back into his life. Wonderful work.👏 When can we expect an update? 😃

Edited by cineraria - 11 years ago

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sadbad

@sadbad

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#480

i came across ur ff today and read all 25 parts in one go.this ff is brilliant.i have always been a fan of arnavs redemption ffs and ur ff is one the best i have read.u have wonderful writing skill and i love the characters of akash and payal in this ff.again brilliant work👏👏 and update soon if u can😊