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loved the way they love each other...😊
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Wonderful update . Somewhere , we all worry over caring too much ...
Great work, dear.
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sem beautifully written 😊
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comment update pg 65. Sorry for the delay.
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This whole update is very realistic in the emotions etched... not a word or expression or feeling is out of place or seems contrived. "Gupta? What are you doing here?" "Should I go back?" Arnav's confusion at Khushi's unexpected presence and her unsure and hurt response come through loud and clear. She immediately touching his forehead to check if he's running a temperature, followed up with her rapid fire questions, is lovable. Khushi not responding to his kisses and caresses must have been such an unwelcome surprise to Arnav. Their ensuing conversation is much needed to make each realise how much the other means to him / her and where their relationship stands. Understand Khushi feeling that she is shut out from Arnav's thoughts and emotions because he doesn't share much about these... groping in the dark and unwittingly hurting one's partner with one's statements is not the way to progress in one's relationship. Pleased that Arnav avoided the Holi party only because he dislikes the festival rather than due to some trauma in his past. Is this their first serious fight after they got into a relationship? Don't mind, as it seems to be paving the way to a better understanding between the two. "You did. You lost your temper and you meant every word that you said. I don't get it. Was this some sort of sick joke? Why would you pursue me, MAKE me confess, when you knew how much I would invest into this and you weren't prepared to make the same kind of investment? I thought we'd been friends before any of this, Raizada. Or was I deluded there too?" "Listen to me, please. I care about you. I care about us. Yes, I admit that there are times when I deliberately switch off, but it's because I need space. I can't... I can't handle having another person so closely involved with my life. I've always been very independent and I don't know how to share things with a girlfriend. This is the first steady relationship I've had, Khushi. I'm trying. I really am." A moving glimpse of their insecurities and vulnerabilities! I concur with Khushi that there has been a gap in communication, especially from Arnav's side.

Kudos to Arnav's parents and to him for the manner in which they picked up the pieces of their shattered lives and continued on, especially his parents giving him the freedom to lead his life as he wants. From whatever we've seen of his parents till date, we had no inkling of this anguish and tragedy lying in their past... imagine the fear and conflicted emotions that his mom must have felt on learning that Arnav was involved with Khushi. While surely happy at the thought of Arnav having moved on, she must have been praying that he wouldn't have to face heartbreak any time. The mature way in which they deal with their insecurities and with Arnav's loss of a much-loved sister brings a lump to one's throat. Now, one understands his reaction to Khushi's comments during the whole discussion about suicide. Understanding Arnav's pain, Khushi instinctively moving closer to him to soothe him with her proximity is admirable. The devastating effect Shyam's death had on Anjali was heart-breaking to read. Though I don't condone suicides, imagine the anguish, loneliness and plight of someone who feels that they have no loved one to turn to in this world, that there is nothing worthwhile. While many say that suicide is the coward's way out, it does take bravery to take that final step. The guilt of those left behind, who feel they ought to have seen the signs or done even more to help the victim is heart-rending! It's no wonder that Arnav is afraid of allowing someone to come so close to him that she would become his sole reason for living. After his earlier self-destructive behaviour, he must be scared of history repeating itself if things don't work out with Khushi. Could Arnav's activities with the biker gang be what the bully who had waylaid Khushi before had been hinting at? Is that why he had been scared of Arnav? Though the bikers were in Delhi and that was in Panchgani, right? The insight into grief counselling and the setbacks of the sufferer are pretty realistic. No one can help you unless and until you admit that you need it. "I had consciously promised myself that I would never give any one that kind of control over me and my life and when I'm with you, it's frightening how easily I forget that. It's not that I don't care or am scared to commit. It's the opposite, in fact." Poignant words! This was a much-needed talk that gave each a perspective of the other's fears and feelings and made each realise just how important the other is in his / her life. They realise they need to be open and need to work on their relationship: they had a long way to go but she also knew that they had made enormous progress that evening and there was no turning back now... Khushi's decision to never give up on Arnav or on their relationship is heartening. After all that angst and intensity, the Payal-Aman interlude was sorely needed.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Why do you do this S?
I was crying reading about Anjali.
To lose a person one loves is difficult. I can't understand her state of mind obviously where a person loses all hopes and desire to live. But it must be very depressing for the person to take such a drastic step when they were otherwise happy in all quarters of their life. She was a bright, affectionate and loving girl who was equally loved back from everyone.
This must have been so difficult on her family. But I'm glad that they have somehow learned to move on with time. There is no healer like love and time.
Wasn't Arnav's anger natural? Won't most of the people feel the same if they ever face such a grave situation?
Now with no more secrets between Arnav & Khushi they have come a long way, crossed a major barrier in their relationship.
There is no point of return for the two, they are truly and deeply in love.
And now I understand why Lavanya didn't want to talk about future or plan so much. She doesn't want to follow Anjali's steps or fate. They are scared, it has changed the Raizada siblings in a strong way. they'll come out of the shadows and fear with the time.
Beautifully written Semanti.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment updated on page 73!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
an emotional chapter..glad that khushi had a much needed talk with arnav...this chapter clear many things..arnav's behaviour towards khushi...

beautifully written semanti..

i was crying while reading the update.. i have a elder brother ans sister and i cant imagine my life without them...

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow this chapter was so emotional..
well written
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Loved the chapter 9B n 9C...
Aaww bus ride was fantastiic...First of all,,all the nok jhok outside the bus...Arnav's comment about fanfics was fantasticc...Semanti how do u come up with such a good humour ...that has me grinning whenevr I remmebr that whole convo...NK's challenge to Akash made me ROFL...that is one of my favr8 lines from the story...Then Arnav's concern for Payal n his gentleman's act to bring water himself for Payal...:)
that was a sweet gesture...he opened up about his childhood...N Khushi sleeping for two hours during ride...Ofcourse when u have A Sexy Raizada as support,,who wouldnt want to sleep...hehhehe...
N here poor me...I want a travel partner too like Raizada...Becoz + travel daily to my uni..n journey is of one n half hour on one side... One minute my bus driver starts bus,,other minute I fall asleep...my friends make fun of me but I cant resist sleeping in car/bus...infact they lull me to sleep...so I want a Raizada...Payal n Aman holi part was fantasttiiicc...I guessed it right from begining that they were Payal n Aman..:)
Chapter 9C-All about just Arnav n Khushi...Arnav's revealation about Anjali made my heart sinking...Throughtout reading the update I culdnt stop this feeling...Everyone has their own problems n Arnav has surely got some too...I hope they will deal with it together...
U have never showed Arnav's interaction with his father...thori si space Abu jaan ko b milni chahye...but thats totally upto U...i just got the thought after reading that his relationship became non-existent with his father...
U r brilliant writer Semanti...this Update speaks that itself...Angsty,,consoling,,taking newstep in relationship,,romance n then Payal n Aman's flirting txts...loved both the chapters...waiting eagerly for tonight's chapter...:)
i mean chapter 10A...:)

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