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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: -HEAVEN-
valo buddhi...but amar agarbattir opor alergi...ektu por hachi suru hobe...:(

ami toh tai jani😳

darao Nandakishor ke deke bolchhi " kada" niye ashte...hachi shere jabe...😊

Eta natun janlam je Semanti bangla jane...ki anondo akashe batashe 😳 TSC zindabad...Ajke 9C na pore kichhutei ghum ashbe na

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: Aparamegha

darao Nandakishor ke deke bolchhi " kada" niye ashte...hachi shere jabe...😊

Eta natun janlam je Semanti bangla jane...ki anondo akashe batashe 😳 TSC zindabad...Ajke 9C na pore kichhutei ghum ashbe na

😆
osubidha nai...ektu por ghumate jabo...r mosha kamrabe na😆

banglay spam er mojai alada 😉

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: -HEAVEN-
😆
osubidha nai...ektu por ghumate jabo...r mosha kamrabe na😆

banglay spam er mojai alada 😉

Ekdom...moner bhashai kichhu lekhar anondoi alada..😉.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#424

Okay so you and my sleep win.

I can't beat your odd timing record.

Shabzzz

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#425

I'm going to answer you A/N first: I'm not judging anyone here.

How can we do that anyway?

How can you judge a woman for feeling as if her world has ended when the person who is her sole emotional focus is suddenly snatched from her?

How can you judge a brother for letting it color his life for years, when his sister was obviously such an important part of that life?

And how can you judge his girlfriend for feeling insecure, when clearly she had no idea about his past?

No, I'm not playing judge and jury at all.

Neither do I want to address the issue of suicide at this point, grave as it is.

What I want to do right now is give you a round of applause for writing a nuanced, well-balanced chapter with due importance given to everyone's perspectives.

It isn't easy to do, but I think you pulled it off perfectly!

I like how your Khushi faced this head-on, way to go, girl! And I also liked how you made your Arnav open up to her about his past, and the way he is trying to deal with this relationship. Their conversation at this point felt natural, and all though it was tough for both of them, I do feel that this was essential.

Now Khushi knows just how important she is to him, and so does Arnav. Moreover, K also knows what he is dealing with at all times. Sharing this can only make their bond stronger!

I also liked how you wrote the description of Anjali's breakdown and subsequent 'recovery' after Shyam's death. It was very realistic, and so was the part where you described Arnav's reaction to her suicide.

The bigger question is, where do they go from here? I'm assuming graduation day will also be a day of reckoning?

Aman in the bonus was truly a bonus! Can we have more of Payal-Aman please?

A very well-written update, S. In fact, I would go so far as to say that this is the best chapter in the story so far. For me, at least.

TFS!

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#426

r...somebody pinch me...i cant bliv!!! i m 2nd!!😃

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S...this chapter or i should say Anjali...was like a lighting out of blue!!!

i wont judge anybody here. i dont think i hav that right😕

i wont judge anjali for commiting suicide. Anjali was a nice girl. she had a family who loved her lot. but then shyam entered in her life n became the center of her world. so whn the center was destroyed, she couldnt keep balance. her world got shattered.
nobody is to blame for anjali's suicide. it was justMEANT TO HAPPEN! the way u described her relation wid shyam, it was meant to be.

Anjali was too dependent on shyam that she couldnt take the blow. she became depressed after his death. at that moment, nobody mattered except shyam. suicide was the only way she could think of to b wid shyam.
more than anjali, i feel sorry for her family coz they r bearing the consciquence.my heart cried out for her mother whn she hugged arnav n told him not to do this. my heart cried for that brother who for a moment blamed himself for his sister's death. my heart cried for that family who thought their love wasnt enough for anjali.

"SUICIDE" its a big word. the person commits suicide, his/her chapter is over. but those who love her, they hav to bear the tragedy for the rest of life which is obv not easy. somehow it makes them feel... wasnt their love n care enough...why did she commit suicide...didnt she for once think abt her family! suicide leaves parmanent scar to victims family. time heals but it cant b earesed.

Arnav behaviour was realistic. i m glad khushi confronted him.now she ll understand arnav n wont feel insecure. while reading this chap, i thought it was me sitting wid arnav in khushi's place(except the kissing part.. i m an innocent polite girl)...i felt each of arnav's word wid heart. Khushi's pain was like my own.

this chapter cleared everything...what now!!!! waiting for their graduation :)

this chapter is the best...BAS! i love TSC...double BAS!!! i love semanti...tripple BAS!!!!🤗
hats off...👏

ps.PAMAN(payal+aman]is adorable...

Edited by -HEAVEN- - 12 years ago

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snapeseverus

@snapeseverus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#427

Reserved😊

Edited :
Quite an intense update it was. I had guessed something like that might have happened to Arnav. But, still reading about the same left me thinking , about the life choices we make, sometimes impulsively and sometimes deliberately and how they affect people around you !
Arnav's reclusive behavior in the past was justified. I can understand that how he must have developed the belief, that your life should not be too much dependent upon other person. That pretty much explains his behavior with Khushi.
As for Khushi, poor girl. She might have not expected such kind of reason for his behavior. But, I guess that only made their relationship strong. I loved the way she supported him. 😊
I guess the worst is over now. That does not mean that I did not like it. I loved it😊

Waiting for the further updates.😊

PS : Please don't end this story now. Can we have 20 chapters please ?? Pretty Please 😊😊

Edited by snapeseverus - 12 years ago

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-HEAVEN-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#428

expel...how do u do that!!!!!

OMG!!!! i m 2nd!!! finally stalking paid!

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#429

Okay!!

Quite an emotional update! Though it answered many of my questions, it has raised a few too!!

First of all i loved how khushi finally confronted arnav and laid out bare all her misgivings, insecurities and her need to know where this relationship is going. i love how she never backs down.

Now coming to the reason of arnav's behaviour with khushi. I agree that him being close to anjali, her suicide had impacted him greatly. I could undersatnd how broken , angry he must have felt and the general mistrust that he must have developed for relationships. Or how it is important to not let anyone so close to you that that person gets the power to hurt you! But now six years after it, after all the therapies, counselling, his realisation that his di had been too emotional, if this is how he behaves with khushi, still believes that one shouldnt let other control their lives, and still shuts her off then whats the point of all the therapies. It wasn't as if she kept on clinging on to him or not gave him personal space,

it was always mutual.

And he saw her sister's example and became like this? Didnt he have his parents' example? I believe he is as close to his mother as was to his di?

Plus i wonder Vee was closer to anjali still she didnt get that altered by everything?

Plus i guess he is old enough to know like every person is not same, every relationship and thier demands are also not the same!!

Though i could understand his state of mind after her di's sucide but m not very much convinced by the explaination for his behaviour towards khushi.

But m glad the misunderstanding between them is over. And m happy that it is a long term thing for them. I often wondered what exactly was their relationship status.

N you still didnt come clean on their physical intimacy level? What did she mean by' i would love to complete this'?

As for anjali and her sucide. People who dont think about how their actions would impact others, what can i say about them. Couldnt she have lived for her parents , her siblings? Even if she was emotional. Her whole family was their to feed her her emotional needs! But its okay. It was necessary for the story!!

Waiting for the next update!!!

Edited by Nandz - 12 years ago

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aashi12

@aashi12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#430

Boo..

Unres-;

i hadn't expected this! Anjali's story and Arnav's anguish..

Amngst all this, i found myself crying! I'm in no mood to write more, i have an elder sister, and believe me i can't think of losing her.. Arnav was strong enough to come out sane!

For rest all its RES!

Edited by aashi12 - 12 years ago