ASHLOK FF MY CUTIE PIE WIFE(CHAP 27-new update page 67) - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
you not only brock Aastha's dream but mine also
i jus think what a confession shlok did...but
now i m not disappointed...
very good written...lovely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

you not only brock Aastha's dream but mine also
i jus think what a confession shlok did...but
now i m not disappointed...
very good written...lovely...

dream sequence was only astha's part of confession
shlok's part was not a dream
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friends before i start i like to sincerely thank all my readers.iam planning to change this ss into an ff.share your suggestions.dont hesitate to share your criticism as well.i had changed my hobby of reading into writing this story only to keep my readers happy.so if you really appreciate my work,share your views and instructions to improve
yours lovingly,lechu
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CHAPTER-11
shlok's attempt to kiss astha was broken by the chuckle of clocks of agnihotri(12 o clock) mansion(damm !bad timing)
astha came to her senses...she smiled at him
hugged him and screamed: HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHLOK!!!I LOVE YOU SO MUCH!.she said in a breath
with this she kissed him with all her passion!
shlok was terribly taken aback!his pov:25 th.my birthday...its tomorrow...but gave up the thought...and ...enjoyed his cutie pie's cute kiss.before she is about to leave shlok pressed his lips with hers for a much stronger
one...a much more passionate...one
astha felt her knees melting...she pulled shlok's hair with one hand while nails of her other hand pierced his kurta...they broke apart struggling to breath
shlok:astha ...but my birthday is tomorrow...
astha:see shlok...look at the clock.its 25 th already
shlok smiled:how did you remember?
astha:after all iam mrs.shlok agnihotri.she said with pride
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astha lit the remaining candles in the room
shlok stood mesmerised her beauty in the candle light .she felt as fresh and glowy like...a full moon!
slowly astha took her to the side of the table where shlok saw a beautiful birthday cake
shlok was really impressed
he cut the cake with astha
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU.HAPPY BIRYHDAY TO YOU SHLOK.MAY GOD BLESS YOU DEAR
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
astha sang cutely
they fed the cake and had fun spreading the cream in each other's face
shlok hugged her and licked the cream from her lips and whispered huskily to her ears :thank you astha.thank you for making my birthday special and memorable
astha:no... ( shlok broke the hug)
shlok:what...why?
astha:celebrations...not yet over
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with this she led him forcely to the other side of the pool where he saw by the side of the pool a beautifully arranged candle light dinner

they had a beautiful silent romantic dinner
SOMETIMES SILENCE CONVEYS EMOTIONS BETTER THAN WORDS
shlok is totally mesmerised by its beauty and ambience
astha:like it?
shlok:(faking anger to prank astha):no..not at all
astha was sad
shlok moved close to her and kissed her forehead.astha closed her eyes
shlok:i did not like it.infact i loved it.but sorry i loved my first gift more
astha smiled:the cake na
shlok: no
astha:yes...the kurta..am i right.she jumped
shlok:no
astha:then what?(angrily)who gave you gift before me?
shlok laughed hard(he decided to pull her leg)
astha froze enchanted by his laugh
shlok:infact my staff
astha(angrily):who is he?
shlok(hiding laughter):not he...she...
astha's pov:shreya...i wont spare you
shlok:...my staff cum...girlfriend(astha fuming)...cum...
he pulled her to a hug...
astha:cum...
shlok:wife!!!!!!!!!!!
astha:me??i gave you no other gift
shlok:yes you did!
astha:??????stop kidding she pouted
shlok:i mean...the kiss...and
astha(blushing): and ...
shlok:your...words
astha:what did i say?happy birthday na?
shlok:after that?
astha(caught)(blushing):i ...i...i sang ...birthday song...lol!
shlok:before that?
astha is blushing hard
she hid her face in his chest
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after a long silence...
astha:shlok...i...i...i love you so much ...i love you more than anything in this world.even my bappa is second.without you iam incomplete.you make me complete.
i love everything in you shlok... i love every bit of you...i love your anger...your possessiveness...your rudeness...and your unconditional love for me...your care...

even you shout at me i love it,even you hurt me i love it...she weeped
(shlok tightened the grip around her)
astha continued:even the word"love"is not enough for expressing my feelings for you.even your slight smile makes me feel heaven.your mere presence...gives me utmost happiness
shlok smiled through his tears
shlok picked her up and moved towards their room and placed her on the bed.before he could move astha caught his hand
astha:dont leave
shlok smiled and kissed her on the forehead
shlok:let me change into my night suit
astha:no...she pulled him hard and he fell over her
astha laughed
shlok:pagal he tum?
astha:...yes...i agree ...mad over you
shlok lay beside her
shlok:now fine?
astha nodded
she hugged him.she felt peaceful
shlok:astha
astha:hmmm...
shlok:promise me that you never ever leave me
astha:never shlok,never until my death...even after my death...i will always stay...in your heart...in your dreams...in your thoughts...
shlok:stop it astha!!!!
shlok smirked:you know i have my own style for stop you from your blabbering??????
with this he kissed her lips tight?...soon ...the silent music of passion...hidden desires...poured out like an elixir.they were lost in each other...
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the full moon peeped through the windows and spreading its light...happiness... everywhere in the room...sweet scent of
flowers...spread everywhere...a ticklish soft breeze swayed the pink curtains...
it seemed even the nature is blushing...hard
watching these two souls uniting...
long live love birds...long live...the goddess
of nature blessed them...drifting them to peaceful sleep
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precap:office romance

Edited by LECHU123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
I would prefer the long update once in 2 days, really cannot have enough of this story 😳

👏great update dear 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
hai friends
do tell me what you want more in this story
  • romance
  • twists
  • surprises
  • jokes and pranks
  • sad sequences
  • cute fights
share with me frankly
Edited by LECHU123 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#75
That was beautiful wonderful and amazingly awesome!!!
Continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: dmegha

That was beautiful wonderful and amazingly awesome!!!

Continue soon!!

thanks dear
i will update tomorrow
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

awww that's sweet, thank you

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: LECHU123

hai friends

do tell me what you want more in this story
  • romance
  • twists
  • surprises
  • jokes and pranks
  • sad sequences
  • cute fights
share with me frankly

love your story!!! would love romance surprises jokes and pranks...


thanks

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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
awesome update dear 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
hai readers,
thanks for all your unconditional support
being a newbie iam overjoyed by readers response
iam unable to reply to some of your pms
but dont think that iam not reading it
keep supporting me!
Edited by LECHU123 - 12 years ago

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