ASHLOK FF MY CUTIE PIE WIFE(CHAP 27-new update page 67) - Page 38

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LECHU123

thanks a lot dear🤗
missed you and your lovely comment a lot...
i thought what happened to my impatient reader?
love you too my sweetheart❤️ ❤️
do read my new os too...




plsr sweet hrt!!!!🤗
awwwieee missed u too jaaneman!!!😳
nothng as such bit of fever n net probs..😆
awwwieee ..☺️
yup I WILL BOSS!!😉
don worry im back ... il eat up ur mind 4 updates😉 yeah ths reminds me tht VN AM I GOING TO GET D NXT UPDT!!!??😳😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
shlok is fine
but how did that happen to him...?
precap is interesting
continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
I didn't see it before... Just now saw it
y are you ending this story...
love this story ...😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki795

I didn't see it before... Just now saw it
y are you ending this story...
love this story ...😭

HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU TOO DEAR NIKI
dear i read all your comments
first regarding how shlok got his memory back!
read first para dear-he met with another accident while searching for astha!
cases like this are commom in medical history where temporary memory loses are overcomed
by meeting with a similar shocking life situation
here it is the "second accident" and astha's missing(astha is found missing for the second time)which brought his old memories back!

so it helped him to overcome the situation
though it is a fiction,i always write with a little logic...thats why i explained to you in detail
all your doubts are warmly welcomed...😊

now why am ending this ff?
am a med student dear...my exams are near...next month .and am spending a lot of time here
and ffs needs frequent updation otherwise readers will lose interest and will forget the track
so i thought of wraping up
but dont worry i will keep my readers happy with my os in weekends

thanks a lot for being so supportive and loving
thank you so much🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MarriedLove

totally loved it...

continue soon...

thanks a lot dear😊 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LECHU123

HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU TOO DEAR NIKI
dear i read all your comments
first regarding how shlok got his memory back!
read first para dear-he met with another accident while searching for astha!
cases like this are commom in medical history where temporary memory loses are overcomed
by meeting with a similar shocking life situation
here it is the "second accident" and astha's missing(astha is found missing for the second time)which brought his old memories back!

so it helped him to overcome the situation
though it is a fiction,i always write with a little logic...thats why i explained to you in detail
all your doubts are warmly welcomed...😊

now why am ending this ff?
am a med student dear...my exams are near...next month .and am spending a lot of time here
and ffs needs frequent updation otherwise readers will lose interest and will forget the track
so i thought of wraping up
but dont worry i will keep my readers happy with my os in weekends

thanks a lot for being so supportive and loving
thank you so much🤗





thanks for explaining in detail...
now my doubts are clear
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Posted: 11 years ago
I understand dear, but do continuation of OS or sequel when have time or a break..ur OS keeps the spirit live.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww too cute...jst loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
araaaiii lechu ...
u jst vanished!!!
whr u ??
n updts??
u ok???
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter-27

(this is the second last chapter of ths ff.so I don't want you to get bored by a long flashback (one full chapter)of the villain(not actually).actually I had prepared a long one..but I deleted it at last)iam sorry if this update is not upto your expectations...

this twist was very necessary so that i could wrap up with a good note

So a flashback in short

Abhay was born to ajay sharma,leading business man who was kind and loving.and a man of good ideals.he lived away from his family with his wife and only one son abhay in pune

Abhay brought up as an ideal son .he was very close to ASTHA,his one and only little friend in the neighbourhood.he considered her as his little sister,and she considered him as her bhayya

But an accident took away his parents lives when he was 18,and his father's family brought him to Mumbai.he was completely alienated in that big mansion ,and missed his sister astha a lot

Years went by...and abhay grew up as a rich spoiled brat.he became more and more greedy for money.his family was the sole reason for his devilish changes.in his family only those who have money had existence..slowly and gradually he fell prey to ANJALI's evil plans as she offered him more and more money.she made him as a tool for her plans

He married priya,shlok's sister according to her order.but he loved priya a lot.he was a man again!

But after few months,anjali threatened him to do as she said or else she will make all his crimes public

She asked him to kill priya so that agnihotris will be hurted and eventually all her properties will be transferred to abhay as he is her husband,and anjali could make use of it

But abhay's conscience never allowed him to commit that worsest sin of killing his pregnant wife,whom he loved a lot

But to satisfy anjali he planned a car accident of himself and fled with some money

He wanted priya to lead a happy life as she will never comes to know that he is still alive

He came to know that shlok's wife is astha,his little sister after his execution of that first accident when he secretly visit the hospital to know the success rate of his plan.that day bought him the biggest shock of his life

He was broken,,completely broken..he tried to kill his own little sister!

That day he decided to fight back against anjali agnihotri...

And astha's kidnap was his plan to save astha(same day anjali had made some dangerous plans to trap astha )

thats the reason for his odd reaction when the goons touched astha!

One of the goons came closer to her and said:no one is going to save you from us today.they tried to misbehave ...

she yelled:LEAVE ME

THUD-those men fell to the floor
sab'-they screamed
Abhay:who gave you the rights to touch her?he thundered
The goons looked at him questioningly

Flashback ends

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Abhay reaches Mumbai .he had found out that priya is in their old flat in Mumbai
He gathers courage and knocks the door
A maid opens the door
Abhay:where is priya?
Maid:priyaji went to temple .she will come in a while
Abhay:its ok...I will wait
The maid welcomed him inside
Just then he saw kavya playing with her doll
Abhay was shocked to see her,his daughter...
Abhay called her
Abhay:hey my princess come here
Kavya:no
Abhay:I will give you choclates,teddys ...please come
His eyes started tearing up
Kavya wiped his tears
Kavya:uncle don't cry...I play with you..ok don't cry
He smiled and they played and talked for a long time
Just then priya arrived
She opened the door and she froze at the scene before her eyes..she couldn't say anything..
But her realization brought her back
Priya:who are you?what are you doing in my flat!
Abhay:priya...don't you know me(his voice was cold and low)
Priya stood in horror...what s happening before her eyes

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Thud!thud!priya slapped him back and forth..once..twice thrice...

She held his collar and slapped him again
Priya:you cheat...you.why?why did you do this to us...why you made my brother and bhabhi suffer so much...I will never ever trust you in my life...you came again to trap us...to break my family into pieces..you pervert...you deserve death
She pushed him to the wall holding hid neck...
Abhay:priya please ...i never thought of coming back...but..anjali is after me..she will trap me anytime that I will never get a chance to show her real face to you and your family..i know I don't deserve you...but will you give me a chance...a single chance.please forgive me ...please
He knelt before her
Priya:no...I cant.my little brother had warned me many times not to fall for you..but I did...today I got my punishment...but I sware I will make your life a hell.you dont know how i lived all these years..you dont know my pains

Abhay:priya punish me in what ever way you can..i deserve that..but after all your punishment..even if half -dead will you allow me to spend atleast a day with you and my daughter happily?
Priya :abhay you can leave!you completely broke my trust today..without trust our relationship is meaningless..so its better you leave-she scoffed

abhay:i will mend everything priya..everything..i will put an end to everything

he left from there with a determination

priya poured out her tears,which she was holding on all this time.but for the little soul whose happiness is spun over hers,she has to remain strong.she glanced at the sleeping face of her little daughter.

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Life has its own unique way of teaching lessons.No matter how many times you are shattered by people around you , you will pick up the pieces and begin again. No matter how many times your heart is broken, you will never ever stop believing in the power of love.

astha and shlok are enjoying their life to the fullest unaware of the shocks that are awaiting them.they are in their little beautiful world of love..

they are so elated as if they had got their long lost treasure back..their happiness had no bounds so is their love

they are strolling through the beaches and parks aimlessly like kids holding on each other


shlok:astha..its getting late,do you have any plans to go back to home?
astha:not at all.why should i bother?iam with my husband!stop acting like a panicked boyfriend!huff!
shlok:you will never change .at the end of day all the blame on me-he rolled his eyes
astha pinched his nose
astha:i was just joking my akdu
she gave him an hug and peck on his cheeks
astha:i love you!
shlok:thanks for the new info!i was not at all knowing that!-he teased her
astha:akdu he tum! she said giving a soft punch on his chest
shlok:astha..you look damm cute when you are angry!
astha:lets go!
shlok:dont act as a panicked girlfriend!-he said with a smirk
astha turned her face in anger
shlok:so you only have the right to joke!ha?when you joke,i should stay calm but when i did the same you are angry..you are unbelievable!
he pulled him closer to her and kissed on her cheeks
shlok:i too love you my misti(sweetheart)
astha smiled
astha:i was faking mr shlok..now i got what i want!lol!
she ran from there pushing him and shlok behing her chasing.
shlok:you drama queen!be ready to bare the punishment!
astha:i love your punishments-she said winking at him!
shlok caught her
shlok:really?
he pressed his lips with hers in a passionate kiss
he pulled her closer while her nails pierced his back crumbling his shirt
they broke for breath
he looked at her swollen lips wanting it more
shlok whispered to her ears nuzzling her hair:will be continued tonight dear
astha was all red due to shy that she hid her face in his chest
shlok cupped her face and made her look at him
shlok:your blush makes me crazy astha ..you know why?because..its cause is only me..just me only!
he picked her up and moved towards the car!


shlok:now lets go!

astha:shlok..please put me down..someone will see!
shlok:no one around..even if i dont care
astha:shameless!
shlok: yes..i admit! so be ready to bare this shameless hubby lifelong my jaan!

I don't think you will
ever fully understand
how you've touched my life
and made me who I am.

I don't think you could ever know
just how truly special you are
that even on the darkest nights
you are my brightest star.

I don't think you will ever fully comprehend
how you've made my dreams come true
or how you've opened my heart
to love and the wonders it can do.

You've allowed me to experience
something very hard to find
the unconditional love that exists
in my body, soul, and mind.

I don't think you could ever feel
all the love I have to give
and I'm sure you'll never realize
you've been my will to live.

i love you my angel
forever ever and ever

a big sorry if this update was not upto your expectations!









Edited by LECHU123 - 11 years ago

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