ASHLOK FF MY CUTIE PIE WIFE(CHAP 27-new update page 67) - Page 18

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Riddhima

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Posted: 11 years ago

amaizing updet yaar...
i m waiting for next part...
you are too good...

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-Genelia-

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Posted: 11 years ago

finallly finallly u updtd!! yipppeee

OMG!!! 4 me???

awiieee thaaanx!!! 🤗

loved d updt!!!!!

now atleast despite of being angry shlok will b a lil sane n not burst out lik hot lava evrytime!!! 😆

d ending ws touchy!!!!

amaazng updt!!

lukng 4wrd to d nxt part!!!!

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Deepthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wonderful update...but that was so short..😭.

waiting for the next update...

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aliahayse

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Posted: 11 years ago

hi,

I read all the chapters and you really do an outstanding job. Production should hire you for you help write a story with them. Reading the reviews I'd read since left the forum but luckily for us you've changed your mind. Laments commented so late but I do not speak English or Hindi, in fact I am a Turkish fan who participates in the forum from France. So the time to translate and write the comment takes time, so instead of just like I commented. This hoping that you will continue with equally beautiful stories.

After I wait with impatience. good luck

🤗👏

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Mystery Girl

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update...update soon...it was very sad that astha is on wheelchair...

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Ishita Irani

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Posted: 11 years ago

Poor astha
She is on wheelchair and shook forget her
Cont soon

Edited by IshitaIrani - 11 years ago

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niki795

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome story
just read all the chapters
its awesome
wrote well
both met with an accident
shlok doesn't remember
poor astha
continue soon
plz update

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abi_niki

@abi_niki

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Posted: 11 years ago

I read your story from ur first update...

Nice and Superb...

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Anju_S

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow... 👏

awesome updates..

read ur whole story.. and I liked it..

continue soon.. 😊

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow... this was beautiful... she told but hid the truth...

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