ArShiFF: The Dawn of the Dawn - Thread 7 - COMPLETED - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all i didn't expect update this soon as u said u will post after 30th..!!!!!!

in beginning. both were feeling sad for each other... arnav realize he left her alone and that moment he came back..!!!!!!!!
next morning again he left her alone with note... khshi didn't reply to his msgs..!!!!
what an punishment..!!!!!!! and what a way to soothe his pain umm burning mouth..!!!!!!
loved it.. reading it first time and loving it..!!!!!!!
and than their confession..it was super awesome.. have no words for u..!!!!!!!
amazing lovely.. especially those lines..!!!!!!!!!!
and their first kiss... that was superb..!!!!!!!!!!

and cherry on top is that u posted pic and that by editing it..!!!!!!!!
continue soon..!!!!!!
Edited by khareshelley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
it was a surprise for me..
i thought that d next update would be on 30th, which would be difficult to resist
but u upadated it
and about d update
it was awesome
they confessed 2 each other...
khushi couldn't wait😉..
finally they both took a step forward
update d next part soon...

Edited by dikshitamehta - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i just start reading this story...i'm still on thread 1... awseome writing
i'll comment on the story as i move on with the chapters afterwards
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome
i dont know another way to comment how did i felt when im reading it :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it dear...and the pics are fab...
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres my comment on pg 27..!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it..!!
finally they confessed..!!
loved it..!!
n the pic edit was awesome..!!!
w8ng for next..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. confession in anger.. loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!! Khushi hs crazy punishment ideas!!!! Vaise koi nahi.., dard me baad marham bhi laga diya...ahem...ahem.;-)arnav me aish hai!!!! Bt he deserves it:-)it
Finally d confession!!!!!! Loved it!!!! Beautifully penned down!!-
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Posted: 11 years ago
At last tey confessed!!!...but not b4 e drama by kushi...she put chilli n burtnt his mouth.. e milk scene was unexpected...tink kushi to do tat...she gave him pain n she's e one to soothe it...

Wat a wonderful n unpredictable couple...simply love them!!!!

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