#4 SS: Mr. and Mrs. Naughty Raizada Ch24 pg124 11/14

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Maria Adam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#831

chapter 22:

i find Khushi more mature than Payal, even though Payal is older than her.

iced tea, no alcohol, i would of fallen for it as well but it was offered to be by a bartender in las vegas...

hahah the staff managers thought

oh i know arnav will have fun with the gloves, but wt will the twiddle dum couple do...

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Maria Adam

@whatasurpise

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Posted: 11 years ago

#832

chapter 23:

lol superwomen is in the building guys. can she get a WOOH

gay club...😆

NOTE: hope ur son gets better

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Maria Adam

@whatasurpise

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Posted: 11 years ago

#833

chapter 24:

arnav possessed by ghost, noo...

sexopoly got to check that out

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snoopy84

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Posted: 11 years ago

#834

Awesome SS loved all of their bets and antics. Poor Payal and Akash failing so bad at their attempts to spice up their lives

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Dear Sami hope everything is ok now. Just to say I'm loving these short stories, just read the vegas trip, poor akaash! For a minute I thought arnav would have come and rescued him -can imagine yhe conversation betwen them especially after the mile high t shirt. Loved every bit, .

l'm sure all you readers wish good things and a fast recovery for you little one

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Arshix144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#836

Samiii, I can't believe I missed out on reading this unbelievably entertaining, hilarious and naughty work of fiction earlier! Just what the heck was I doing on this forum, how in the world was I not aware of this piece?! Catching up with this SS has been one hell of an experience. Parts of this SS had me cracking up loudly like it is noone's business, while other parts educated me quite a bit and I totally mean it in a guttery way😳, then you had me smiling from ear to ear at Khushi's plight and her Arnavji's bold moves educating not only Khushi but us readers as well! After all who knew about things like sexopoly, Arnav and his Shaatir dimagh ( When I say Arnav I really mean You & Your shaatir dimagh)!😆

Arnav and Khushi's challenges and wonderfully entertaining naughty moments amazed me Sami, your creativity in orchestrating various quirky, funny, sensual and so Arshi situations baffled me, the games, the handcuffs, the tantra chair, the throwing cake at eachother and eating it at the same time off eachother that is, oh just everything has been so darn entertaining I have no words to describe them. I don't think Arshi's story has ever been as amusing, hilarious and beautifully sensual/hot/sexy at the same time as it has been right here in this SS! Absolutely loved every single Arhi scene you brought to the forth with every single mind mindbogglingly amazing chapter! I think Khushi's shyness despite experiencing every single intimate scene there is to experience and Arnav's boldness is what makes this SS all the more special and endearing!

Moving on from Arnav and Khushi your other characters had me in splits almost all the time, while I felt very sorry for Akash at some instances he simply killed me, I had cover my mouth so I don't wake up the whole neighborhood with my laughter. His ideas about the use of handcuffs, his nonstop attempts at creating romantic moments for Payal, him, Payal and Manorma sitting on the tantra chair together for a photo shoot, his landing in the gay bar and dancing or rather stripping there, him playing twister and oh gosh how can I forget the Mile High Club T shirt heck everything he got up to was just too darn hilarious! I am even laughing now as I recall all those memorable moments you created! Every single moment so vivid and articulated with perfection! All credit to you S, I have no more words! Just thank you for sharing this journey with us and I really hope that you would be adding more chapters to this super entertaining SS!

PS. Thank you for recommending this SS to me Vandy, I have had the most pleasant reading experience ever!

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: Arshix144
Samiii, I can't believe I missed out on reading this unbelievably entertaining, hilarious and naughty work of fiction earlier! Just what the heck was I doing on this forum, how in the world was I not aware of this piece?! Catching up with this SS has been one hell of an experience. Parts of this SS had me cracking up loudly like it is noone's business, while other parts educated me quite a bit and I totally mean it in a guttery way😳, then you had me smiling from ear to ear at Khushi's plight and her Arnavji's bold moves educating not only Khushi but us readers as well! After all who knew about things like sexopoly, Arnav and his Shaatir dimagh ( When I say Arnav I really mean You & Your shaatir dimagh)!😆

Arnav and Khushi's challenges and wonderfully entertaining naughty moments amazed me Sami, your creativity in orchestrating various quirky, funny, sensual and so Arshi situations baffled me, the games, the handcuffs, the tantra chair, the throwing cake at eachother and eating it at the same time off eachother that is, oh just everything has been so darn entertaining I have no words to describe them. I don't think Arshi's story has ever been as amusing, hilarious and beautifully sensual/hot/sexy at the same time as it has been right here in this SS! Absolutely loved every single Arhi scene you brought to the forth with every single mind mindbogglingly amazing chapter! I think Khushi's shyness despite experiencing every single intimate scene there is to experience and Arnav's boldness is what makes this SS all the more special and endearing!

Moving on from Arnav and Khushi your other characters had me in splits almost all the time, while I felt very sorry for Akash at some instances he simply killed me, I had cover my mouth so I don't wake up the whole neighborhood with my laughter. His ideas about the use of handcuffs, his nonstop attempts at creating romantic moments for Payal, him, Payal and Manorma sitting on the tantra chair together for a photo shoot, his landing in the gay bar and dancing or rather stripping there, him playing twister and oh gosh how can I forget the Mile High Club T shirt heck everything he got up to was just too darn hilarious! I am even laughing now as I recall all those memorable moments you created! Every single moment so vivid and articulated with perfection! All credit to you S, I have no more words! Just thank you for sharing this journey with us and I really hope that you would be adding more chapters to this super entertaining SS!

PS. Thank you for recommending this SS to me Vandy, I have had the most pleasant reading experience ever!

Wow this is one amazing comment! So glad that you enjoyed reading of the naughtiness of the Raizadas 😳 Arnav and Khushi's love story is too tempting and one can't help but imagine them in so many situations. And luckily Arnav's shaatir dimaag knows all 😆

Thank you for sharing your favorite moments with me about the SS! Truly makes it special when a reader details their thoughts, and you have given me such valuable feedback. 🤗

I fully intended to end this around fifteen chapters, but extended it since many said they liked reading this as a stress buster. Similar to how Payal and Akash branched out into their own little unique storyline, which I just have too much fun with.

There is one more thread that has a few chapters, not sure if you have read that. If not let me know and i will send you the link. Thanks Vandana for the recommendation and so glad to have you onboard 🤗