New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Shruti21

i din understood anything.. quite confused.. may be things will get with next update or i got to read it again.. :)

Try and read it again. :) But yes it will make more sense in the next chapter.

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Piyali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Awesome yaar... didn't guess on these lines...

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arshi_lover1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

wow! a dream land! plz continue!

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dilectus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Yayy!!! I always knew I could be an FBI agent, its only a matter of time you know😆..

And I love the story, more so because I love those with the theme of timeless love. Arnav has travelled so far to save Khushi in her dream, and may be when she dies in dream she will wake up in reality...or so I hope.

Brilliant writing Dal, being a new writer I understand the importance of choosing right words to finish the story in required parts, without leaving any loopholes or compromising on interest of readers, something which I am still learning. And you are an expert in that.👏👏👏

Waiting for the next update with "dhak dhak".

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: dilectus
Yayy!!! I always knew I could be an FBI agent, its only a matter of time you know😆..
And I love the story, more so because I love those with the theme of timeless love. Arnav has travelled so far to save Khushi in her dream, and may be when she dies in dream she will wake up in reality...or so I hope.

Brilliant writing Dal, being a new writer I understand the importance of choosing right words to finish the story in required parts, without leaving any loopholes or compromising on interest of readers, something which I am still learning. And you are an expert in that.👏👏👏

Waiting for the next update with "dhak dhak".

Thank you very much! I was shocked that someone guessed it on point even without much clues! I say go be a FBI right now. LOL I am still learning too and I have been writing for 8 years.. It's a learning experience regardless of how long you've been writing. Keep at it. :)