New Arhi SS: 'Five Days' Chp 4 Now UPDATED COMPLETED

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Swati Singhal

@swatim318

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

loved it...

so does arnav know about her illness?? mysterious ending... eager to read more...

thanks for pm..

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Dalmuthuya...🤗

You are awesome you know...The first five lines of the update were the most beautiful lines...It does happen in real life too...I really don't know but i don't like the description of Khushi's mother...I don't think mother's would say something like that to their daughter...

And Arnav-Khushi's conversation was beautiful...So Arnav's here to help her...I liked both of their views on life...

Can't wait for the nest update...Do continue soon !

Iyla...❤️

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sarun23

@sarun23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

amazing update..
just loved the way u describe the whole situation

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Alyaa_27

@Alyaa_27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

ooohhh!!!i luved their convo esp arnav's last sentence..wat does this mean?did he already know abt her?

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dilectus

@dilectus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Oh mY gAwD!!! This is an alternate universem or some re-incarnation, isn't it??? Or some time travelling?? OOOHHH I am dying to know...😆

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arshi_lover1

@arshi_lover1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

I love the intense feelings and dialougues you are using plz continue and thanks for the pm.!

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Mini17

@Mini17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Very interesting and different concept.
When I read the part where Khushi istold that she has got 5 days to leave, I had almost decided to stop it right there as I don't read sad endings. Only and only your note at the end of the first chapter has made me read the seclnd update :p

Can't imagine how she is even that calm except the outburst in the end. Her mom should be there for her. I know that even her situation is very difficult but what Khushi is facing is more difficult and challenging than her mom's.

Curious to where does Arnav fits in all this.