Arshi FF: ||Fallen Too Far|| part 6 pg 65 9/11* - Page 8

wat a chappy..! 👍🏼

i loved it how u have started it wit khushi's emotions nd her feelings..!

Her success being an indepedent girl who has finally managed to make a place in dis world based on her own abilitiea nd d way she was feeling was indeed beautifullt written..!

Nd den her nd sam's convo nd dat part was cute..!

I am already adoring their frndship nd also how they both were talking abt d ASR,ahem cant blame them actually 😉

nd finally their face off nd dat too like dis,ahem shuruyat agar aisa hai toh age ki kahaani toh hit hone wala hai nd dats for sure..! 😉

both got all lost into each other,one in her beauty nd d other in his charm,ahem yeh toh hona hi tha 😉

arnav singh raizada nd khushi kumari gupta ka meeting toh humesha se hi hit raha hai nd here also it was perfct,hayeee i cant wait for their story to start up now 😳

lovely start 👍🏼

loved it ❤️

wow what a meet, very electric

Ayu i must say u write really gud

Damn perfect description

Loved it yar

And khushi frnd sam is soo soo gud Hahahahahaha har cheese mein party loll

Poor she luck nai wish kar payi 😆

finally dey met amd ogling strtd grt

aga aga dekho hota hai kya

Awesome update
thanx for the pm
Twinkle

edited my cmmnt on pg 10

Loved, loved and loved it.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

These lines,
" Gelled black hair framed a breathtaking face,his bone structure would make a sculptor with joy, while a firmly etched mouth, a blade of a nose, and intensely molten brown eyes made him savagely gorgeous and breath taking. The custom three-piece suit hit more than a few of her hot buttons, but it was the tall, powerfully lean body inside it that made it sensational. Still, as hot as all that magnificent maleness was he. Its not like she hadn't seen a gorgeous man till yet but what she saw now directly before her was absolutely exquisite framed with all masculinity."

Ouu... was checking Arnav out through Khushi's eyes with those lines... hehe

And call me crazy but, everytime i see the word 'flutter' i mentally add the 'lashes' part.
"Khushi spoke and fluttered her eyes innocently.."
" he asked with a cultured and smooth voice that made her stomach flutter "

Awesome start. Continue soon. Pls send a pm to me when u update. 😃

brilliant chapter

Amazing update

Nice update..finally they meet each other😊