. KriYansh SS : Hot Mess .

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H o t M e s s

(Dedicated to September Babies - Akanksha n Asma)


Part 1


The voice of the dribbling ball echoed through the court. Beads of sweat travelled down her temple. Her shirt was soaked wet and her shorts lusciously showed off her well toned legs. She stood still in her place controlling the ball as she lost in her thoughts of the evening.



"In your dreams...I surely do know I am far more better than you. So, yeah coming back to the point. Rey isn't your type? He loathes girls like you with good-for-nothing attittude. Try him...and mock yourself..."


Those words buzzed aloud in her ears. The nerve of the girl to be so harsh with the choice of words to her just for having a talk with the boys captain of Basket ball Team and that too professionally because her coach asked her to. She being the captain of the girls left with no choice but to listen to the coach. Rey was her boyfriend but that doesn't mean she will just come and taunt her for a small talk. Was it a talk too? She just gave him the paper and asked him to get the names of the team members written.


She laughed heartily at the tantrum thrown at her by the cheer-girl and Rey's girlfriend.


"Its time for something hot babe...I will make you regret for your words"


Kria spoke out tauntingly. She glanced at the basket infront of her eyes. She gave one of her sexy smile, she shooted the ball into the air and made a basket. Her mind was fixed over it .



-*-

She flushed her water with cool water to knock away the sleepiness in her eyes. She groaned at the clock which read 7 a,m .


"Didn't he get any other time for practise?", she yelled in her lonely room.


Her fingers ruffled her hair as she tied into a high ponytail leaving few strands to fall on her forehead and she applied a light gloss on her lips smoothly.


She grabbed her car keys and straited out. Unlocking the car, she opened it and threw her bag on the side seat. She turned it on making her way to the college.


"Task 1 is to impress Reyaansh Singhania. Challenge him and make him lose the game with that condition.."


She voiced as her fingers tapped rhythmically over the steering wheel.


"And my wish too will become true..."


She gleamed happily. She wanted a game with Reyaansh and to make him lose ever since and finally and unexpectedly here comes the most awaited chance.


"I will beat down your ego Reyaansh Singhania and I will make your girlfriend repent for sure"


She laughed sarcastically.


"The time has come finally.."


She scoffed as she drove past the college gate to the parking slot. Stopping her car in trance, she smiled when she heard the noise from the nearby basketball court.


Flaring her grin and confidence yet again, she passed-by the court glaring at the boy who was practising in the court. His back was faced towards her. She walked slowly until she went inside. She didn't want him to get a clue very soon.


She tranced towards him maintaining a three to four foot distance, she coughed slightly grabbing his attention.


He turned around amused with the presence of someone. He glared at her skeptically, his eyes brewing up with his confusion. As far his knowledge is concerned, it was only him who was present at that time everyday.


"Umm...did you come for a practise?", Rey striked the conversation.


"Yes", she replied as if it was the most common thing.


"But I am sorry...I will be practising for some more time and Coach didnt give any extra ones", he explained.


Why was he explaining her? She knew that very well. She chuckled inwardly.


"Reyaansh...let us play a game", she stated. His eyes sparkled with a similar confusion again.


"You Verses me! It is also a practise...you can improve furtherly too. It will help you against your competitors", she voiced.


He heard her words with objection but gradually his lips lifted with a smirk plastered with a smile.


"A game...that too with you?", he laughed hysterically, his eyes lightening up. He turned out passing a glare at her.


"A**h*le! Girls ko sab ithna under-estimate kyun karte hain", she mumbled in a whisper which went un-noticed by him.


"Reyaansh, I feel you are over-confident on yourself . You are pretty much scared that you will lose the game", she mocked.


She wanted to bring out a challenge on him but not definitely this way. Nor did she expect this guy to be an attitude freak when she thought he was a typical good boy with those grades of studies.


"Impressive", his voice whispered into the thin air. He turned around facing her looking at her chocolate brown eyes. He held her wrist with his teasing smirk and placed the ball in between her palms.


"Upon one condition..", she scoffed with a mischeivious glint in her eyes.


"You will have to do what I say if you lose...", she continued before he responded.


He covered the step distance betweem them, his eyes loosening away her wrist in his hand.


"And if you lose...you have to do what I say", he voiced huskily.


"Deal!", she replied.


'This is gonna be fun. Get ready Mr. Singhania', she thought.


Glancing back at him, she straited a step back and threw the ball in air starting the game.


Taking his advantage as a height, he grabbed the ball mid-air and dribbled shielding it from her, He strode past her and lifted the ball up and shooted , Kria slightly kicked the ground and tapped the ball in the air and caught it. Leaving no chance, she shooted it making a basket.


"1-0, the game is for 5", she voiced and he nodded silently spellbound.


Kria was versatile when it came to this game of hers. Most of the times, she never initiates it but instead she grabs the opportunity in the last minute and makes it a basket.


The next basket was a similar spell.


"2-0", she chanted with a smirk.


He followed her tactic and the next time he ruled it.


"1-2", he breathed.


Kria changed her swift methods and followed her another way of manipulating her competitor and made the next basket.


"3-1", she voiced.


It was her win for sure! The last one was just for the sake of being done. He was humiliated and wanting to hide in the nook of the earth. He couldn't eeven properly look into her eyes,


Kria played her defence once again but let go at the last moment giving the basket to Rey who ended the game.


"2-3", she cheered reminding him once again.


"You are the winner..", Rey declared with sarcasm laughing down his throat.


"What should I do?", he asked glancing at her after some time.


"Umm...take me to your home", she said in a go making him numb by her words.


"WHAT?", he yelled dumbstruck.


"I just want to see your home. Is it a fault? And Mr. Reyaansh, you lost the challenge and have to do whatever I say...remember!", she clarified raising an eyebrow.



"Now?", he questioned still confused.



"No...after our college...after our basketball practise in the evening", she replied and Rey nodded with no choice left.



"Ok...see you in the evening then bye...", she beamed enthusiastically leaving him confused and alone in the court.


-*-


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Part 2


He examined his class room finding her. He sighed and sat back in his seat when he realised that she wasn't attending lectures of the day.


"Just like everyday, you should be surprised when she attends the class", he concluded with a smile.


"Hi..", he heard a cheerful voice greeting him and he mumbled one too. She watched as she walked past him and occupied the seat beside him. It was turning out to be annoying him unknowingly. His former girlfriend didn't give him the much required space.


The bubbliness and her non-stop ranting which appealed to him at the start of their relationship was now getting under his skin and when she normally claspes their hands during a class slightly, he feels to flinch away but he never wanted to sound rude.


-*-


He sat on the bench breathing harshly after their hectic practise.


"I need to improve. Really alot", he said to himself as the glimpse of the morning match formed images infront of his eyes.


He turned around and glanced at the court beside theirs , which was meant for girls. Kria was laughing and chatting with her friends. infact, he did see her because of her laughter filled voice.


"Kria...", he called out shrieking the people around and Kria too glared at him astounded.


"Was he really ready to talk to me even with this many people? Well Kria, you are lucky", she assured mentally patting herself for the acheivement she was conquering.


The look on her team-mates faces said the complete story.


"I will come in a minute..", she said and walked to him still adorned in a loose top and shorts.


"Sit...", he guided her to other side of the bench.


She hesitated because his friends were accompanying them too but still she sat.


"I never knew you will talk to people like us too", Rey's friend commented . Kria just eased a smile finding it the most apt.


Flirter, her mind chanted.


Rey glanced at her usual with the way his friend flirted. He was Rey's bestfriend.


"I thought you had a problem with us because you never talk to us even if we do", he continued .


"Great! I thought they had a problem with me and they think the contrary" , Kria thought. Many people know her only as a bad girl with ill-manners except her team-mates and she thought the boys to think the same.


"You never talk Rohaan...you always flirt!", Kria remarked and he smiled.


"Guys, there is still time for us to leave. Shall we play something?", Rohaan questioned grabbing the attention.


"Play", Rey mumbled thinking of the morning.


"Let us play Truth and Dare..", Rohaan said.


Kria rolled her eyes. "Boys are so typical", she hissed.


"Lets sit there..", Rohaan cleared pointing out the expanded vast area beside.


The boys got up , Rohaan forwarded his hand. Kria slid her hand in his and got up. She knew he was a flirter but at the end he would become her good friend.


There was a bunch of 8 members and they sat in a circle. Rohaan grabbed a bottle he found and sat in the place left to him opposite Kria.


He rolled swiftly and the bottle pointed out Rohaan and a boy. "Truth", the boy said. The boy had to ask and Rohaan had to answer.


"Hmm...nice chance...ok...what was your age when you kissed for the first time?", the boy questioned.


It was turning out to be awkward for Kria since most of them chose only truth to be on a safer side. The chances trolled by and many questioned riled up. This time it was a question for Rey by Rohaan.


"Rey...", Rohaan smiled cruelly , having got the lucky chance.


"Who was your first love?", Rohaan asked specifically choosing few words. Rey nodded his head in negation slightly requesting him not to.


"You have to...no choice", Rohaan said averting a glare in Kria direction.


"Please...", Rey requested audibly this time.


"Ok...Describe Kria in two words...", Rohaan dumped the previous one and asked a new one.


Rey turned and stared at Kria who just smiled.


"Hot Mess", he answered in the very go.


Rohaan pretended a fake cough.


It moved on and then came Kria's chance.


"Truth or Dare?", a boy asked.


She was getting bored of the usual Truth's out there.


"Dare", she replied amusing everyone as like always.


Rohaan leaned and mumbled to the boy whose eyes glinted mischeiviously.


"Kiss Rey...", he ordered.


Kria looked at him in disbelief.


"You are insane...", she commented.


"On the cheek...", Rohaan sighed and completed.


"But still...", Kria tried to interrupt.


"We thought Kria Ghai was really ready for Dare...", rohaan sneered.


She glared at Rey just wishing he would stop them but he kept himself composed.


'Just a kiss!', she said to herself.


She held his shirt by the upper arm and leaned forward to plant a kiss on his cheek.


She barely let her lips touch his skin for a nano-second and moved back with him looking at her.


"You have a girlfriend Reyaansh", was all she wanted to yell out aloud.


The game continued until the bell buzzed aloud and they started parting ways with rey n some boys moving ahead of her and Rohaan who insisted Kria to walk slowly.


"Ask Rey who was his first love when you go to his home", he whispered in her ear.


"Did Rey tell you about that?", she asked startled.


"Ofcourse...he is my bestie Kria", Rohaan replied.


"And moreover...you are one of the important person in his life", he whispered making a fast walk which Kria surely heard.


"I shouldn't think about it. It will only make me more confused", Kria said to herself.


-*-


Part 3 Below :)
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 12 years ago
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RES
UNRES

here comes the middle girl 🤣
hazar bar first comment-or bani hun but middle comment-or pehli baar bani hun 😆
thank you to much extra sharp brain...

okay now coming to this extra long OS
my god snigdha tereko bhoot chad gaya tha kya ??
have you seen the length of your OS

im not complaining.. 😉 i toh like such big OS on kriyaansh
but time nahi milne ke karand it took like forever to complete it..
but finally i have done...

UPDATE !!
it was superb
mind blowing
jhakkas
wowiee
kriyaansh-ish
lovable
excellent
spectacular etc. etc. ( dictionary use kar lena 🤣 )


kriya ans rey ke jo tumhne characters clash kavaye hain
kriya - THE DIVA
rey - HANDSOME HUNK ☺️
superb idea 👍🏼

the whole OS was in flow
it just felt like ki i wanna keep reading more
so well penned down
and what a concept..
and really well conceived story...

thanks for the PM and such an amazing OS
enough of my bakwas !!
me signing off !!! 🤗
please do write more
and keep sending me PM's..


PS. hugs and kisses by the middle comment-or 😆 😉 😛 🤣


Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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Part 3


"Kria...shall we go in my car?", Rey popped up when they were at the parking slot and Kria nodded her head in response.


Rey was driving the car and his home was not much far. Trying to hush away the unwanted silence. Kria initiated the conversation.


"You are in love, right?", Kria asked sounding it more like a statement.


"I think so..", Rey replied after few seconds of hesitation.


"Think? Come on Rey. Everyone knows you are in a relationship since few months..", Kria scoffed.


"If you think its love..", he glared at her. "Then let it be that..", he ended.


"Why didn't you come to lectures today?", Rey asked when she spoke nothing.


"They are boring", Kria made an annoying expression to the answer which made Rey go into fits of laughter soon accompanied by Kria.


They reached his home just in a minute or two after that. Kria got down and Rey too did . He unlocked the door and escorted her in. It was a huge one. It was neat and tidy unlike her messed up house.


"Your house is completely opposite to me", she commented.


"Kria just take a walk around. I will come in two minutes ya..", Rey said and left for the kitchen after throwing his mobile and Keys on the table.


Kria was straiting around...firstly the hall then the balcony and then she came in again to check the rooms. The mobile on the table vibrated and buzzed.


"Rey...", she tried calling him.


Having no reply, she went to check out the caller. She read his girlfriend name on the screen.


"If you haven't barked at me, I wouldn't have been here", she mumbled.


She set the call to silent and then it ringed again.


"Baby seems like god is so desperate to break your heart by me", she spoke out and lifted the call.


"Hello Rey...kahaan ho aap?", the voice on the other side asked.


"His home ofcourse..", Kria answered with a chuckle.


There was a complete silence on the other side for a few minutes.


"Kria, what the f**k are you doing in Rey's home?", the caller yelled.


"I just kissed him before some time. Want me to give one more on your behalf too?", Kria teased happily.


"No..", she heard the reply adamantly.


"Yes", Kria beamed enjoying the sadistic pleasure she was getting.


Hearing the footsteps hovering, she quickly mumbled another yes aloud and cut the call. She placed it back in its position . Rey joined her in a jiffy with cups of coffee in his hand.


"Thanks..", Kria said taking one from him.


They both sat down on the floor resting against the bed sitting opposite to the television screen in his bedroom.


"Rey...who is your first love?", Kria asked sipping the coffee.


"No one...", he lied away.


"Rey...please...", she complained looking at him.


He moved closer until their forearms touched.


"Hmm...I will you give the clues...you have to say her name", he said and Kria nodded.


"She is crazy. She is different. Sexy hain, bahut hot lagti hain. Any boy would want her to be his love...", he narrated looking at her.


"Mujhe toh lagta tha ki she would never speak to boys like me but she surprised me. I always love to see her playing basketball", He said.


Kria looked down unsure and Rey leaned in closer to whisper in her ear.


"She comes to attend lectures once in a blue moon...whenever I see her, I always feel she will be the only one to complete me. She is passionate just like me but a lil different...thats what make her more beautiful. Now tell me her name...", he breathed.


Kria turned to her side to glance at him and that very instant his lips touched her cheek. She closed her eyes and this time he kissed her as his lips touched her smoothly. His fingers swiped her cheek making him face her. She looked at him numb with his actions.


"I loved you Kria..", he confessed glancing right through her.



His gaze caressed her skin and moved to her shivering lips. He fused his lips on hers as he cupped her face with both his palms. He sucked her lips relishing his first ever kiss and her taste. He nipped them enticing the pleasures as her palm held his shirt stiffly.


The ringing door bell made her think sensibly. She pushed him away and stood back on her feet breatheless.


Rey cursed the person at door for spoiling his special moment, that moment which he imagined ever since he laid his eyes on her.


"Rey...Rey..", he heard the familiar voice at the door.


"Why do you make everything against me n her god?", he cursed.


He can't run away from the situation. He opened the door to find his girlfriend at the door.


"Kya kar rahe ho?", she questioned walking past him.


There were tensed lines clearly written on her forehead.


"Kria, you are really a boyfriend stealer...tumhe koi aur nahi mila Rey ke alava...", she barked.


Rey tried to get in between the two girls , he didnt want it to fuel up more. but Kria pushed him aside handling the situation.


"Nah...I only got Rey...I love him...any problem", Kria asked.


His girlfriend looked up at Rey approvingly waiting for him to support her but he maintained to be calm.


"And you know what...he kissed me. It was his first kiss...", Kria concluded making Rey and the other girl gape at her with wide eyes.


He held her by the arms and made her face him.


"Tumhe kaise pata ki woh mera first kiss hain?", he questioned with confusion brewing up in his eyes.


"You kissed her Rey...I trusted you..", the other girl ranting where unheard.


"Tell me how do you know?", Rey insisted pulling her more closer.


"Sabko patha chalta hain Rey...the way you kissed me is no where nearer to the ones we watch in bollywood. You really are inexperienced..", she mocked with a glare.


His girlfriend pulled her away yanking her by the arm.


"Leave from here, right now", she yelled to Kria.


"And why should I?", Kria asked furious with the way she was getting handled.


"Because he loves me and only me...", the voice gritted making Kria guilty.


-*-

Part 4 Below
Edited by snigdha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Part 4


Wasn't she here on the first place because of his girlfriend? Wasn't she aware of this even before?


Kria traced back the steps lowering her eyes.


"I came here for only a challenege", she spoke out more to herself than for them.


She smiled but her smile failed to reach her eyes. She walked away but was stopped in trance by a hand holding her back.


"She informed me about her tantrum a day before itself Kria. I didn't speak about it to you because I really do want you to come in my life. I didn't want a stone unturned. I love you Kria, I always did but I never said...", he confessed in a hush of whispers.


He walked to her and faced her. He caressed her cheeks with his palm glaring at her eyes. Those same eyes he was used to searching for from a distance.


"I love you...I never loved her and I didn't even accept her proposal nor did I reject but she took it for a Yes and I just let the things go the way they were happening...", he whispered.


"I hate you Kria Ghai...", she yelled and stormed out of the house giving them their personal space.


He kissed her on the lips passionately pulling her closer by circling the arm around her waist. Her fingers reached the night of his air caressing him and kissing back equally feverish. He broke the kiss looking at her, he lifted her a little and made her stand on his legs as her arms circled around his neck.


"Do you love me?", he questioned eagerly his hot breath hitting her lips.


"Love doesn't happen in a day", she answered lost in her eyes.


He smiled. She wasn't an easy girl but she definitely was a mad and crazy girl whom he always wanted.


-*-


Rain drops hit the naked ground harshly. It was bitter cold atmosphere but she came to college at their usual timing. Her legs were exposed the most by the shorts which only managed to come at her mid-thigh. Her right shoulder was bare as it tucked at the arm.


It was only the practise which she was doing keeping her warm. A pair of arms hugged her possessively from behind nuzzling into her neck.


"You are cold", he whispered rubbing her arms affectionately. His fingers travelled down her hands holding the ball with his palms too.


"Concentrate..", he said filling her ear with melodicious laughter.


They shooted the ball in air and it made the basket.


She swirled around looking at him. She kissed him feverishly taking his lips in hers. He moaned when she bit his lips lusciously. He pulled her more closer seductively as his fingers caressed her skin tenderly. He continued to seek pleasure from those lips making them swollen, he explored her tasting the crevices. She let him take the charge until they were both suffocated. He moved back facing her and she smiled hugging him and resting her head on his chest.

-*-


"Rey..."


"Hmm..."


He whispered nuzzling his hair into her silky dark hair.


"I still don't love you...", she said teasing him.


He faced her caressing her hair with his fingers.


"And I know you will say the same even after our marriage...",


His hot breath lingered on her lips and then they met his cold lips for another kiss.


-*-


Here is the end.
Hope you liked it :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved!!

September babies aww I so love this name 😳

Finally read it

This was one short of a beautiful SS

Loved it very much

the superb Kriya with handsome Reyaansh makes it so beautiful...

And the way he confessed his love aww


Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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OMG... 😲
Snigsss... 🤗🤗

Thank u...Thank u sooo very much for this super awesomeee OS... 🤗

I truly didnt expect ki som1 wil write an OS for us..Sept Babies.. like..seriusly... 😳

Tune toh mera dil khush kar diya... 😳 🤗

The OS was just Mind-Blowing... awesomeee... toddd tha... 😃

Kria Ghai The Attitude Diva...

Reyaansh Singhania The Handsome Hunk...

whoz in Love with Kria since..God knows how long... same goes with Kria... 😃


it was like... you know... A Passionate Love b/w them... 😳

and this is what i just loved the most...

The Passion... The Sparks... they shared... ufff... 😳

It was truly a dhamakedaarrr OS...

Loved it HELLL LOTTT... 😃

Love u Snigs... 🤗


Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

OMG... 😲

Snigsss... 🤗🤗

Thank u...Thank u sooo very much for this super awesomeee OS... 🤗

I truly didnt expect ki som1 wil write an OS for us..Sept Babies.. like..seriusly... 😳

Tune toh mera dil khush kar diya... 😳 🤗

The OS was just Mind-Blowing... awesomeee... toddd tha... 😃

Kria Ghai The Attitude Diva...

Reyaansh Singhania The Handsome Hunk...

whoz in Love with Kria since..God knows how long... same goes with Kria... 😃


it was like... you know... A Passionate Love b/w them... 😳

and this is what i just loved the most...

The Passion... The Sparks... they shared... ufff... 😳

It was truly a dhamakedaarrr OS...

Loved it HELLL LOTTT... 😃

Love u Snigs... 🤗




I got ur unres very soon😃

Im happy u liked d Story...

Uff...*takes in a deep breath*

Thanks alott Akku😃🤗
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snigs di. . .katti. . . . . .;-(
. . . . .. . . .**. . . . . . . . .**. . . . . . .**. . . . . . . . .**. . . . . . . . . . . .
Mai coment nai krne wali thi,bt i cudnt stop myself from coment. .
Woww di. . . .awsome Oneshot wala SS. . .
Realy loveddd ittt. . .
Aiyee-haiyyeee. . . . . . .
Rey= hunk n padhaku types
Kriya= diva n bilkul bad girl types. .wow, ek dum jhakkas combo. .
4 a mere challenge kriya came to rey n enterd in his life,n rey was already loving her frm the begining bt cudnt say it. .
I realy like dis ' Hot Mess' :-D
haiyee. .dil khush ker diya di. .realy lovd it. .:-D
aise hi likhte raho aur hum readr ka dil khush kerte raho :-D

I thought yeh woh KR wala SS h,
bt yeh toh alag nikla. .
Me still waiting 4 woh KR wala ss.
Plz di woh bi jaldi complete krke post kerdo. .
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Snigs Di ;-( ;-(
katti. . .


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