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karsvinu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

It was a brilliant update! I like your writing very much😊

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

kavi, another mind blowing update

lovely lovely piece of writing

will eagerly wait for next Friday

happy diwali

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shr3291

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Posted: 11 years ago

#773

Nice update :)

Sheetal is control freak of one of a kind and Arnav is everything that Sheetal is not-focused,responsible,caring..

Hoping that Arnav realises his feeling for khushi in his Udaipur trip...

Yet I still don't understand why sum1 as headstrong and arrogant in his own way ASR allows Sheetal to decide his birthday plan...respect for her father yes.. but to this an extent am curious to know the entire situation that led to this strange "engagement"

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lOVENI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

You know what a fantastic writer you are. Love love love it every bit...this story is now gaining monentum.

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daljeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

I just love this story.

One thing I felt I should learn from this update is a little bit about Sheetal's father that is if he is a cunning man or a good-hearted man with such a daughter! If it is the latter there is more hope and even if it is the former, I have trust on Arnav's backbone.

But then there is a fear, fear of uncertainty.

I am hoping to find Arnav with Kushi on her b'day.

There are 2 stories that I wait and stalk and wish each day when I open IF, to be updated and one is yours. So please jaldi jaldi update karna.

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Wow so Shyam is helping sheetal

Oh god both douche bags

It's high time arnav breaks up with sheetal

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anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Awesome update!!! Loved it😊

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Uzii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Very nice this shetal is such a bitch n she is playing with poor Arnav when will be he able to see her true colors n plz don't make this shayam creep hurt our khusi n reason of any kind of misunderstanding between Arnav n khusi n plz Maldives update Kia karo Bcoz I keep on waiting for ur update really very nice story

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Raila1014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

I cannot stand the 2 two timing jerks Sheetal and Shyam. These 2 belong together. What is this hold that her father has on Arnav that she is so sure about? I hope she realizes that one cannot take things for granted as there is no such thing as 100percent guarantee. Why or why is he not going to Coorg? The Sheetal scene is not his cup of tea, why spend a weekend with them? Somehow I think he will be making a detour and be with Kushi - at least I hope so. Kushi did not wish him Happy Birthday?

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KtotheM

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Posted: 11 years ago

#780

Nice update
Like nani that she's able to see the positive change in arnav when khushi's around him
Sheetal for some reason seems very confident about having ASR wrapped around her finger
And ahh our infamous Shyam babua again in action with his dirty tricks
Pls do continue soon
Thanx

Edited by KtotheM - 11 years ago