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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

I like this update...

It was heartbreaking but necessary to the story..

The characters are real because they are flawed..Arnav and Khushi both know its wrong to think of each other but still falling for each other... Happens all the time in real life...

Sheetal knows her dad holds the puppet string so is cocky about the relationship... But pyaar ki andhi jab bahti hai everything goes haywire...

Sheetal is a s**t ... Well now I am quite sure Arnav has not touched her with a barge pole... For him it's a business deal as he never believed in marriage..

Why are all the raizadas so faulty..

Arnav , Anjali do not have stable partners and are still not doing anything about it...

And Akash has stability in live but is neglecting business...they can only do 1 work at a time..

Arnav will go in that coffee..place coorg..he's as much in love with that coffee as with Khushi...bas..

Birthday mein coffee cake, filter coffee, dessert mein Irish coffee or phir 😳..

The story is monsoon rain .. And it rains in coorg all the time...

Arnav ne Khushi ko toh bhej hi diya..Ab khud bhi aa jayo.. Friday morning till Monday night woh Khushi ko NK aur raj kaise drunk colleagues ke ssath thodi rakhegi..

Kavi request we want at least the next 2 updates of arshi in coorg...pretty please ..😳

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

She has taken over his heart and mind but only if he knew that it's the same for her. Both are on each other's minds.

The attraction is too strong. Funny how Sheetal isn't afraid of it. Does she really have a upper hand here?

Poor Anjali, she knows that there is something up with Shaym but yet she's taking it.

Arnav knows that Khushi is the one for him but he's still not breaking off with Sheetal. Is he really that bound to her? Is he going to Udaipur to be away from Khushi because he's scared of what he feels for her...

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

Poor Khushi and poor Arnav. One bound by the gratitude he feels for the man who gave him a chance and one bound by the family connections and her upbringing that would not allow her to even think of anything inappropriate with a man already committed.

I hope Sheetal's truth comes out soon enough!

And Shyam is a terrible creep - I wish Anjali would grow a backbone and eject him out of her life! and I wish Khushi would tell Arnav the truth about his jeejaji!

And I wish the next update is really fast! 😊

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lostintheashes

@lostintheashes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

DUDE 😲
That was awesome 😉

I LOVE LOVE LOVE Khushi and Arnav moments. ☺️

I SHIP THEM.
ARSHI 5evah! ❤️

anyway

I KNEW that Sheetal would turn out to be the absolute epitome of a bitch.😡

AND Shyam is SO ew. 🤢
Anyway great update! 😉

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

I am more heartbroken than Kushi :((. I imagined Sheetal's dad to be a gentleman but he seems to be manipulative :(. Kavi, please make Arhi celebrate Arnav's bday together in my fav. Coorg pleaseee..I love Udaipur too but only if Arhi r together :)

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ashwakes

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

loved it

Poor khushi. Hope Arnav ends up going there as well...

Continue soon😊

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kuchnaakahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

I am completely confused,,, whats up with both arnav n khushi,,, the other day arnav was reprimanding n mocking her to call him just a FRIEND,,, n claimed tht there was something more between them,,,

but now seems like he has forgotten everything,,, 😕 n still wants to hang around with sheetal,, whom is he deceiving,, khushi, sheetal or himself????? n y is khushi nt confronting him now,,, ?? n cowardly sucking upto the fact tht sheetal is his girfriend,, are they both suffering from selective amnesia,,,

i really feel tht u need to work more on the characterization,,

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Sona

@mistyrains

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Posted: 11 years ago

#758

Your writing is so dreamlike. That part where Arnav notices that at times Khushi doesn't bother removing the stray strands of hair from her face - that's just beautiful. In fact, the chapter its just wonderfully written - which is quite an usual! Another thing I love about this relationship between Arnav and Khushi is there acute awareness for each other. Its unusual, stunning and immensely sensual.

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shafqee80

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Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#759

superb ...story is getting interesting day by day

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arnshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#760

uff this sheetal is kabab me haddi...I hope arnav will serve her right...hmmm arnav must have something in his mind to go udaipur instead with khushi...let see what happens on the trips...eagerly waiting.