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siamesecat

@siamesecat

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#551

Such sad heartwrenching update. My heart is completely broken. So Arnab did not keep his promise to take her from there in a few months. On top of this the journal entry breaks Khushis heart. Now she probably misunderstands him and thinks she has been betrayed by Arnab.

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rvas

@rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#552

amazingly beautiful...hope they meet again soon

loved the age at the end saved me time from calculating it😆

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#553

OMG!!!!!!!!!! Last meeting...
Another cliff hanger...
what happened to Arnab?????????
If he hasn't returned home in these two years, something must've gone really bad...
He'd promised Khushi to take her with him once he gets a job... Even if he didn't take her with him ,he would've at least visited her...
Feeling really bad for Khushi... And for Arnab too...
I'm sure something grave has happened...
And you didn't even give us a clue...
And I'm dying here to know what really happened..
Can't wait to read the next update...
And I really hope you'll clear everything in the next update...
Please give us a teaser soon...
Eagerly waiting for the next update.. Fingers crossed..

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GodhuliLogon

@GodhuliLogon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#554

im so confused .. what happened ? two years passed without seeing each other ... where is arnab?

😭

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#555

oh no... did you say that was their last meeting...
and now its almost two years past...
where is Arnav..??
i am really worried about this whole thing...
he had promise her to come and take her then why did he not come...??
updates were very emotional the way khushi cried in his arms... then his mum and thami were sad about his decision to leave... also the servants were gloomy... everything was just perfectly penned...
and their parting when she said she don't want to lose him beautiful...
their little convo about those meeting was superb and khushi's counter question to his was bang on...
but the last scene in his room was heart-breaking... she read his journal...
do update soon jenny... the suspense is killing..!!
thanks.

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zayana khan

@zayana123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#556

That was awesome dear...

now khushi's age is 17 & 18 rite?????

Simply loved it...

Arnav left them for 2 years...

Eager to know what happen with him..😊😊

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amus5

@amus5

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#557

jenny my throat constricts and squeezes my heart to read the last passage 😭 i am not going to say anything other than this

i want an update ASAP ... bas

relieve me of this pain and pangs of sorrow that is hitting me in waves 😭

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anjubua

@anjubua

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#558

A month has turned into years

I hope Arnab will come for her eventually

continue soon👏👏⭐️

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akankha

@akankha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#559

where is Arnab now!!?
He said that he'll come after few days a take khushi with him,bt why didn't he came yet? it's been two years now!
i'm afraid! really very much afraid! has something happened to him?!
God save him plz, let him come to khushi,who is cutting through with enormous pain!!
and cant wait for the next!

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#560

Too good. Can't express my self in words how beautifully you have written.

Each and every part of today's chapter was wonderful

It was painful too. Their separation is too long. What happen to arnav, he said that he will take Khushi in 1or 2 month. I have a bad feeling about that.

Can't tell you how fantastically you have written arnav and Khushi's part when they went to the library, when Khushi went to drop him to the carriage and when Khushi went to arnav's room, every thing is too good.

Now the wait till next update will kill me. Can't wait to know what happen between them.

Thanks for the update.